Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
It is interesting that people still use this app for stories. I haven't been on this app in literal years but I'm glad to see the writers are still doing things. It is surprising to me that moon is still active. I doubt anyone remembers me so there is little point in putting a name here.
To Ben,
Ty so much for making TAOH. It’s one of my favorite stories ever and may just be one of the most amazing ones on Dododex. I loved Chapter 100. Sad pathetic little me was crying with that ending the whole time. I’m so glad I got to read this awesome story. I’ve only cried one other time whilst reading a book, and that was after reading a death in Warriors of my favorite character. Thank you. I’ll cherish the memory of TAOH forever.
—Moon
⚠️ SPOILERS AHEAD IF YOU HAVENT READ CHAPTER 100 OF TAOH⚠️
Ben, OMG chapter one hundred was amazing!! The best so far!!! I have so many feeling about this chapter and I can’t possibly describe them all. RIP Samuel. We will miss him. Dan Walker…meh not so much. Yk, I never liked Samuel at first but gradually as he began to change…he’s not so bad tbh. But I wished he hadn’t died!!!! Oh well…not everyone can survive in a story after all. 😭😭
But tysm for making TAOH. I’ve said this before but I’ll say it again, it has become one of my TOP FAVORITE BOOKS. It. Is. Amazing. A gift to the world!! I’m so glad that I was here to read it!!
Okay that’s all I have to say now, lol. Cya later!!
-SunnyFox57
Hey PD, yeah we still around here!!
To whoever asked about the next chapter of TOT!! It is being worked on, however I am now working on it instead of Ben so it should be out soon and sorry for the wait!!
Ben, TAOH 100. 😢🥺😭. Thank you for writing this story that caught my attention for so long!!! Thank you!!!
Until Next Time!!
-PrimalApex:)
Hey guys. It’s Ben. Finally caught up on the entire lore of Dododex Achatina Stories Section. Actually captivated me, wow. So many people and faces with so many backstories and tales of their own. Fascinates me to think that 8 billion entire people on this planet have their own rich history and story to tell, and that we are but a sliver of said number.
2020, year of Dodo Tales
2021, year of Red Pike
2022, year of John’s Adventure
2023, year of The Obelisk
And I’ve gone through it all. I’ve read through every single message. It’s like I know you all by heart now. And part of me regrets not coming here sooner. I shouldn’t have given up so easily, back in May.
And, uh, something strange occurred. I can’t find The Obelisk Chapter 1 or Dodo Tales Episode 1 anywhere in the stories section of Achatina. Concerning.
Also did my reading, I’m halfway through Heroes of Pandora and I gotta say I actually like it a lot. I like the idea of perceived weak creatures fighting against a bigger threat, and I like all the characters’ personalities interact and conflict with each other at times. My favorite character so far… that’s a hard one, I like Ping even though he’s kinda dumb. Can’t wait for his character arc, if he has one.
Also just finished Chapter 84 of Obelisk. I enjoyed it even though there wasn’t much plot progression as the other chapters, or character development, but it was still fun to see the other characters interact with each other. Also finally seems Crimson is warming up to Rust, at least by a little bit.
That’s all. - Ben
Okay guys… you got me. Seems chapter length is too long so I’m going to shorten it as best as I can. It’s going to be like 200-300 words per ‘chapter’, and it is to my unfortunate telling that it is practically impossible to shorten each chapter’s storytelling. So what will probably happen is the chapters will be separated into parts. Maybe 3-4 per Chapter, all in the same section so that I can save as much space as possible. I dunno, I’m just really invested in this, man. This is the first time I’ve had fun writing in ages.
Also I think I’ve seen you before Lynx, deep down in the trenches of this tips section. Although I’d have to check just to be sure. I’m thinking of creating an archive of every single tip and comment in the stories section of this Achatina, to keep track of everyone.
Anyway guys Chapter 3 will come out whenever I feel like it. But in the meantime, if you have any character name suggestions put them forward. I would like to add some, I think it’d be nice to have characters based off someone you know. - Ben
Hey guys, it’s Ben. I apologize for my long hiatus from Dododex, I was really invested in this other project that I’m passionate about, so that didn’t leave me enough time to come here and leave my thoughts. Anyway, just finished reading Chapter 83 of Obelisk, and I liked it a lot. It seems Nyx is constantly going through self-doubt and uncertainty, her biggest fear is not being needed or holding others back because she isn’t as experienced or old as others (I think). Someone might come around and comfort her, or give her the cold truth that not everything will be so happy and sunshine all the time. Maybe it would be Crimson, because she’s depicted as kinda mean, but seems to be more drawn to the shadowmanes than the others.
Anyway, my favorite author is, I actually don’t know. On Dododex I’d obviously think it’s Moon and her story The Obelisk, but outside of Dododex I think there are some other interesting options. I like Marie Lu’s series “Legend”, and, there are some other fun tales to read, I’m sure. I also like reading Minecraft Fan Fictions, like Steve the Noob and Dave the Villager. I enjoy both stories, so if you like to or have an interest in Minecraft, you can go check those out. Though it costs money if you don’t have Kindle Unlimited.
Anyway, to anyone who aspires to be a writer or fanfiction maker one day, but you can’t seem to get the hang of it, don’t worry about it too much. One’s skill in writing is not defined by their vocabulary, dialogue, or structure or how good it sounds, it’s based off the creativity and imagination of the creator. Those who can twist a tale and intertwine their characters and plotlines fantastically are really good at their craft. So, don’t give up just yet. With time and practice comes even better writing.
That’s all for now. I definitely will try my best to check out Heroes of Pandora by Wyveranian, Jointed Mysteries by SpecialRaptor, and A World of Dinosaurs by One Who Reads. And, it is to my pleasures that Chapter 2 of The Arks: Over Heaven is released in the Vulture tab. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.
Ben,.. can you try to not sound so full of yourself.. like cmon man, I know you probably aren’t trying to but how you talk makes it sound like you think everyone should treat you like a king because your the center of the universe.
Or you do think that.. in which case…. Uh.
Oh ps: in the future you may want to shorten your chapters that chapter was so long I didn’t even read the entire thing
No hard feelings or anything just trying to give a little constructive criticism
-Wyvernain
Chapter 81!!!! It was really good, I can’t wait for Chapter 82 Now!!!! I wonder what it will entail. It is also making wonder if it involve why Nyx was acting strange back at the end of chapter 74 if I am correct on the chapter number? Anyway I can’t wait to read the next one!!!!!!
-Apex
Sorry I posted Rathalos Ep1 twice it wasn’t showing for me and I didn’t scroll lol. I noticed it has downvotes, I appreciate it’s been noticed at least 😅. I appreciate the feedback I guess. What’s up with it? If anyone was offended or anything I sincerely apologize, it was not intentional. If you simply did not enjoy it, I totally understand, I didn’t really have an idea of what I was doing 😅
Yes knee is really bright over 2 million years old well it video call it will have kids it will be the most powerful creature except is very slow dumb and also has a different have a species of reptiles I guess but dinosaurs I will need dinosaurs supreme and contain Broomtown… Zachary Rex
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