From Ben

Thats pretty cool to hear Chris, its nice youre wnjoying ASA. You dont need to apologize for going to sleep, everyone needs to sleep at some point. And yeah I experienced a lot of bugs and crashes at launch too (i play on pc). But im pretyy sure theyll make the game easier to play over time.

From Ben,

Welcome, Galaxia. I wasnt expecting a friend of Moon to show up here in this little writing zone. I didnt know Moon was working on other books simultaneously, thats pretty cool. Doing that must be a pain sometimes, maybe youll mix one characters personality with the others on accident. I guess, people are capable of anything if they put their heart to it. Well, hope you stick around. And a name suggestion, Pyro something. Pyro is latin for fire.

End.

Moon!! Chapter 88 was Awesome!! I found myself shouting in my mind at Nyx throughout the chapter. I was extremely surprised at who was in it and was sitting on the edge of my seat!!! I am so excited to see what happens in the next few chapters!!!! Especially with Ri—Ripple in the future!!!

-Apex

Oh also I didn’t forget about saying how many chapters I written. I have just been busy over the last couple weeks. I am working on chapter 34 of Journey and hope to tell you more about it soon!!

Moon, woo hoo! Chapter 88 and a Nyx POV! But it looks like theres gonna be trouble for Nyx and the others because...

Wyvernian, Ripper is back! That spiky creature was probably the Velonasaur from before (Ripper), thats why he lied about Peeri still being alive. And also why he hesitated saying his 'name', Ripple. Things are going interesting, but if Nyx trusts her instinct rather than Ripple they will be safe.

Bob the Survivor, your messages are going through, you dont need to worry.

With the Dododex website, you can view messages in real time. Sometimes the app doesnt update all the way.

From Ben,

Bob The Survivor, Wyvernian's "Heroes of Pandora" prologue can be found in Allo and the story continues in alphabetical order in the category, Tameables (i think).

Also, I read Chapter 1. I think it was a good beginning, I dont know if youve done this but dialogue would suffice even if Johns the only character. Like thoughts or talking to himself would add some heart. Overall easy to read, but the only problem I have is finding Chapter 2 is hard, because when I check I think there's multiple chapter 2s. What order does it go in so i cam read the right chapter?

End, Ben

Ben here, I like the idea of moving, but the only thing is I have an issue with dyes section.

To begin, it's hard to tell if someone is impersonating or not. For example in dinosaur sections, by clicking on the date of a tip you can see other stories that the tip provider made (browser only), making it easy to determine if someone is legit or not. You cannot do this in dye section, however, so this could lead to problems.

Subsequently, unlike dinosaur section keeping track of new messages in dyes are much more difficult. With my trick of using the website I can easily refresh to see new tips up to a few minutes ago. But this doesnt support dyes, so this will make replying to messages harder. Overall its just more disorganized.

So, therefore, I do not believe we should use dyes. In fact, I have a proposition. Let's go to a forum off site. I know, its crazy, and the last time it was done bad things ensued. But I believe if we find the right site, this will make communication even easier. And it will also ensure utmost security if we take the right steps. Or, we can just stay here in Achatina.

- Ben

Yo moon I really enjoying your story still and I tried wyvernains story also amazing keep up the awesome stories see yea- Chris

Hi Ben, I think for me my favorite while I’m writing stories is going through the plot, before going through what I want to write down for the story while I’m writing it. How I’m going to reveal new characters and show scenarios that are going to happen. With how some parts just come as you start and how some parts just come to me and immediately work with the story. It’s probably one of my favorite things to feel when coming up with a new part of the story!! It personally just my favorite part of writing right now!

-Apex

Just let out 86, expect 87 in the next few days.

And Wyvernian, I am LOVING how Pop is going, thought I’d tell you that so far my favorite characters are Nash, Ron and Bones. I must say, the plot is pretty great and I love the personality you give to each character.

And here’s more of my worm hehe <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>

—Moon

Hey it’s me the guy that wrote the bad castordies story, now I have an actually plot so I’m gonna start writhing a new story

Him

Ep 1

He is a creator, a man who gives life to imaginations, when he was young he would imagine so many bizarre and strange creatures, now that he has mastered his powers he can bring those creatures to life, and suddenly after recalling his memory he remembered imagining a creature with fluffy things attacked to it and a strange mouth, he called this a dodo, he called the fluffy things on it feather and it’s mouth a beak, he created the creature but for some reason it’s started making a strange noise and perished, he was upset that his first creation died so he made a sort of half sphere thing with things he called trees attached to it and a blue liquid he called water, he then placed the dodo in there and it’s didn’t die, he then created more of this animal and watched them play.

Trentn

Surviver’s note: 1

When I woke up on this island, seeing dinosaur’s everywhere, I thought it was the weirdest thing I would see. But… I never thought a giant snail count’s as a dinosaur, maybe, maybe not! Whatever, these red wood forest’s are dangerous! I need to move! Staying here could be the end of me. So off to the beaches we go!

LYNX!!!!!! OMg long time no see!!!! I switched my name due to me choosing the same name as old time writer on here. I use to go by Apex before. It’s so good to see you!!!

Also https://www.dododex.com/stories?sort=new, for those who don’t know, this will let you see new messages minutes after they are posted.

-PrimalApex:)

Alright. I believe I went by Lynx. I haven't posted here for a while. I do not believe I know who PrimalApex is, but my memory is not great. So if anyone remembers me, that's cool.

I’m sorry about that silvey I’ll be praying 🙏🏻 for you.

The reader

That’s terrible Syl!!! I’m so sorry that happened, I’ll be praying for you. I know you’re in a hard place rn and are very upset. If you need any help feel free to just ask.

And remember, there is one person who we can ALWAYS look up to to help us in our troubles. Jesus is always there for us, always with us. No matter what.

Any help we need we can always count on him and him alone. I’ll be praying for you.

-SunnyFox57

*sobbing of something that i just learned about*

-a very depressed sylveevee

From Ben

Hello. Last two messages from Moon and Bob the Survivor (Umm what the sigma and I think I might be gay) are impersonators. Same person. No need to be alarmed

From Ben

Hey unknown person, we'll definitely remember you. It's not been too long anyway last I checked. Honestly its always been a small world here: who isn't there to remember?

Glad you all enjoyed the finale for TAOH. Not much else to say. I guess I'm relieved. I no longer have to follow a strict deadline. Idk, its hard to explain this feeling of writing and finishing such a long story.

Wyvernian, Chapter 11 of OOS was great! Its nice to see how everythings coming together to tie in to the beginning of HOP. Honestly none of that would have happened if it werent for King Drake and Primalis. Salizar was pretty chill before the people he cared about died. Poor dude symbolically died (at least the young version of himself). Anyway that was cool!

Soooooo.... I forgot to post chapter 2

---Bob The Survivor---