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chapter one: the gate
Once there were 2 brothers one older the other younger the older one was always making scientific discoveries and the younger brother was more adventurous the younger brother was celebrating his birthday and the older brother took him to his lab to show him something he showed him a rocket bigger than the younger brother had ever seen it could fit 500 people in it easy. “This is the first ship today we are going to fly it.” said the older brother “wow” exclaimed the younger brother
“So I take it you are in” said the older brother “you bet arekkusu” said the younger brother “open the gate!” Said arekkusu and the doors on the roof opened revealing a portal “now let’s get our suits on” said arekkusu as he handed the younger brother a space suit. “Now let’s go” said arekkusu “WAIT, what is that portal for” said the younger brother “oh that is how we get to deep space without using much fuel” said arekkusu as he was boarding the ship “now come on” said arekkusu “ok ok” said the younger brother “alright fuel is full all systems are green turning on the engines now” arekkusu said as the younger brother sat down. And they flew through the gate
From Ben
Hi Sylveevee. I read your story, Im not too sure what to say since theres very little to go over. But according to your message its inspired or based off Wings of Fire? Never read the book but as long as you dont blatantly copy the story or text I think you should be fine. However its still a good habit to not copy, but take inspiration. Im not a lawyer so dont count on my advice but I am a writer, so what I can advise you is to take a different writing format. Your story is more like a script, and while theres nothing wrong with that it lacks details and centers the story on dialogue and not environment. The readers wont be able to imagine what the characters look like or the environment theyre in. I bet itd make your story better by lots!
Last script story I read (called The Incubator) was poorly designed and a little weird. So take my word for it!
Ben and Sunnyfox, Jointed Mysteries starts in Achatina and goes down all alphabetical. If have any trouble finding the chapters, search Jointed Mysteries (insert chapter here) Dododex on Google. It is an easy way to find them quickly and should be on the first page. Well I think that’s it for now, Until next time!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
Sunny ive tried looking everywhere but i can only find Jointed Mystery Chapter 1, which is in Achatina. I found chapter 13 and 25 but its hard to find 2 or 3. Im sure its in Alphabetical but im not sure which chapter. I think Wyvernian or PrimalApex or Moonflight would know since theyve been around since SpecialRaptor's been around.
From Ben
Sandmaster the lore in Chapter 14 was really cool.. The Great War sounds really awesome and Shadowmanes and Feroxes vs Rock Drakes and Carnotaurus just sounds really cool. But if the Carnos and Rock Drakes work together does that mean theyre in kahoots with the Carno Investigation Agency? Well ill just wait and find out. And one more question is Fuzzball a boy or a girl i forgot.
SunnyFox Chapter 6 and 7 i was very suspicious of. What does that mean? Well the description of the jet black hair made me think: hmm, that sounds familiar (Aragorn) but it cant be hes dead!
Then the reveal that it was Jay just blew me away.
Sooo he opened a portal up in Tortuga, which teleported him away and he pursued a life with a loved one for quite some time. At least 5 years or so since he was 13 in Tortuga. So i guess it makes a bit of sense for 12 years to pass and for Hailey to become 18 in real time.
But what makes me the most curious is how is Tom's little team have powers?
Yeah….there is a word limit.😬 I’ve actually known about it for a while I just didn’t mention it bc I thought that most of y’all already knew.
SandmasterXD if u want to write a theme song for ur story that sounds cool to me! 👍Also…um who is trying to be Detective Warren from Ben’s story “the arks over heaven”? I used the more by this author feature and Ben didn’t write it…unless he’s using another device. Idk. Cya!
-SunnyFox57
from Ben
Okay… Whew, finally Chapter 30 is finished and released in Crystal Wyvern!!! OMG this one was actually kinda sweet to work on. One of the scenes of this chapter I had to get approved by the Council since I wanted to make sure it was of utmost quality. Well, enjoy! And tell me, do you think love is irrational?
SunnyFox thanks for giving us Chapter 5 because that gave us even more hints to figure this out!! Also I guess we did figure out… nyeh heh heh. I’m liking how these new chapters have names now, neat! Do you think you’ll release a list of what you think previous chapters in the books would be if they had a chapter name? Also ngl Tom’s getting worse by the minute. Sorry Tom, I’m going to have to put you in the supervillain list… You might be even worse than Michael, as surprised I am to say that. Well, maybe same level. ALSO DID JOSEPHINA/HAILEY GET A FLASHBACK OF ARIANNA NOOOO THATS TOO CRUEL. Yeah Tom I think you might be getting banned soon. From the redemption list… Brainwashing your nephew and niece how dare you?! And now Jaron/Jaquin is a killer…
GhostGamer, I’m glad you finally released Chapter 21!!! We’ve been waiting for like weeks! I think, i dont know its been so long! But this one was super fun to read… epic boss fight between Rockwell and the others? I wonder how they’re going to defeat him, and what about Ember Black is he just going to chill in his palace now? Anyway DAMN ROCKWELLs STRONG. He can even summon portals to other ARKS! I think. Well, one thing that stuck out to me is Buddy’s flashback now. Clearly it’s in the Tortuga universe, as Bella the dog is here but who’s the blonde guy? I’m kind of blanking here, Peter or Cole? I forgot. Ahh i forgot the appearances!
And damn it, why did Mara Kong have to die man she was so chill.
Well you’ve got to do what you’ve got to do…
PrimalApex, your teaser is AWESOME! I like how descriptive it is, it just feels like it’s going to be an amazingly made story! I bet it’ll be a great sequel! Also I like how it isn’t specified what species this dinosaur is, so it doesn’t spoil too much. And I’m wondering what this flower does 🤔. Well, it does mention the green Obelisk, which is different than Fjordur’s obelisks, I’m,pretty sure. (Fjordur obelisks are made of a stone-like material and only have that beam coming down to differentiate what color).
Well, see you next time! And I have a feeling Chapter 97 of Obelisk is coming soon.
Sunnyfox, I just read both of the new chapters of THOM. I am really enjoyed them!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Ben, I like what you’re thinking. I was definitely on the same track as you with Hailey and Jaron being Jaquin and Josephia. And am not so sure if it’s time shenanigans or something else. But I definitely feel something is going on. And Tom definitely messed with their heads. Also I feel like Hailey’s hair and how she is in here is definitely a reference to a specific villain. Same with Jaron with another villain. But I’m definitely excited to see what happens next!!!
Anyways Until next time!!
-PrimalApex:)