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Hey Nexus, sorry to take so gosh darn long on an answer. Been running around like a chicken with its head cut off.
HJK apparently is still active to my surprise (I never really met them though) as they had sent something in Silver back in March. But I know Manticore and Shadow are both inactive.
Nazgûl has been radio silent for a year, but his official statement last time was he was not going to be writing anymore stories for the foreseeable future. So I guess he’s most likely inactive too. Which makes me sad a real bit.
Anywho, I gotta catch up real quick. I’ve been reading everyone’s posts when I can, but I need to reread them so I can compose a good post with proper thoughts on everything that’s happened.
Until Next Time!!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
CHAPTER 1 -the island
“Where am I?” Wondered sailor. She looked around and saw sand and trees and…was that a triceratops? “Whoa!” Exclaimed sailor. Who was slightly nervous. “I thought that those were extinct!” She slowly got up and walked towards it. It didn’t even notice her. She looked behind it and two little babies emerged from the bushes, one was blue with a chocolate brown stipe going across its back and the other was brown with a blue stripe going across its back. “Awww!” Gushed sailor. After she finished admiring the two baby triceratops’ she went to go forage for berries because she was starting to get hungry. She looked at a bush and saw it was covered in berries, at the sight of this it made her stomach rumble. “I guess I’m hungrier than I thought” joked sailor as she picked some berries. After she finished harvesting from that bush she moved on to the next one, while she was picking berries she heard a strange sound kinda like a cow mooing but it was a different creature, not a cow, she looked around trying to find out where the sound was coming from. When she didn’t see anything, or anyone, she went back to picking berries and some strange stringy stuff that was called fiber. She was almost done when she looked over and there was a giant parasaur that was baby blue with navy blue dots on its back, it startled sailor and she fell backwards in surprise. The parasaur didn’t seem startled at all to see her and he just kept walking then went up to a bush and started eating berries off of it. “Aww aren’t you cute” cooed sailor. Sailor thought to herself, “what if I fed him some berries so he would maybe follow me around and help me.” So she took some of the last berries she had and tried to get the parasaur to eat them he refused and kept walking but sailor kept trying, but he just kept ignoring her and munching on bushes. This was starting to anger sailor, she tried one more time and when he refused she punched him in the head, when he fell to the ground sailor had thought that she had killed him. She cautiously approached him and when he stirred she jumped. Then she decided that she would try to feed him berries while he was asleep. It worked! He happily took the berries and ate them this made sailor very happy so she went to go harvest more berries. When she got enough berries for her and the parasaur she went back to go feed him. She walked up to the parasaur and tried to feed him a berry and he accepted it! “Yes!” cried sailor. As soon as she finished celebrating the parasaur woke up and walked towards her. Then it stopped in front of her,she went to the left and he mirrored her movements she took a step backwards and he took a step forwards, then she turned and sprinted a little while and he chased after her and never left her side. Sailor thought he was trying to be friends with her so she gave him a name, he would be called Mirror. At the sound of this the parasaur jumped in the air and did his little moo. “Wow you are happy about that aren’t you Mirror.” Said sailor. As soon as she finished her statement she heard a strange sound behind her it wasn’t like anything that she had heard before so she slowly turned around and before she could react at seeing a cute blue and green little dino she was hit in the face by a sticky green liquid that stung her eyes and burned her throat… next chapter in Acro
~valguero girl
Ah, alright. Thanks Ben. I keep saying that I’ll stay here a while and then wander off and forget about this place, lol. I’ll see how long I’ll stay this time but I’ll make sure that I remember to come here. I popped in more frequently this week than I have for months, lol.
-Break-It, The Final Witness
Ark Chronicles Of The Iron Tyrant
Chapter 1 : Awakening
Aeron woke up , he ached through his body and shivered, he stood up and his senses took iver , he needed weapons that’s rule on in new territory, he was in an island beach , the climate slicked his hair in moisture and sweat.
‘Halt’ ! Aeron heard a man behind him
‘Who are you?’
‘My name is Aeron - Dr Aeron , I come from England
‘If your an Englishman who is the current king’
‘Charles 3’
‘Wrong , Edward VI’
Aeron laughed slightly , ‘what’s your name and what Century is it…’
‘Adam Carpenter , 15th century of our lord’
Both men stared ——
‘Christ’
‘Sh—-‘
Adam stared at Aeron ‘ If what you say is true … we are in trouble ‘
‘How long have you been here , Adam. ‘
‘5 hours’
Aeron walked past him and snapped a branch of a near bye palm , the branch splintered , the end being a make shift spear. Adam sighed and drew a primitive sling , loaded with pebbles , ‘Welp guess we’ll find a way back home if… it still there’
Aeron nodded his hands wrapping a peice of flint to the spear Adam Strode Over an axe of a branch and slate in hand , ‘ Aeron you look strong help me move this tree after i fall it ‘
‘Ok one the count of three’
One…
the axe took a large chunk out a palm tree
Two
The tree groaned leaning to the side
Three
The tree fell distributing the sand .
Aeron ran over and lifted the log , it was 8ft long and about 20 inches in thickness,
Aeron grunted as he propped it against a larger tree !
Squawk!
‘What was that?’ Adam turned around
‘Just a bird’
Aeron turned to look spear brandished , ‘what the—‘ he was staring , staring at a dodo bird . He knew he couldn’t be dreaming , he still felt the drain of moving the tree.
Aeron lunged forwards his spear piercing the creatures neck
It let out a high pitched squeak as it fell , plumage soaked in blood.
‘Adam make a fire , I’ll pluck the bird’
Half an hour passed as the fire was lit , the spear used as a spit , piercing through the dodo. Adam reached forward ripping a wing , ‘tastes alright’ Aeron chewed on the bone of his finished leg , ‘Well I’m full so…’ Adam laughed , ‘we now know food isn’t scare ‘ , Aeron chuckled , You know the dodo is extinct? Adam stared … Inknow you keep calling it a dodo but , what’s a dodo also what’s extinct? Aeron sighed , ‘it’s when a species stops existing , ‘ Adam nodded .
A high pitched raw , more of a squeak echoed from outside , followed by a sound of a parasaurolophus ? Aeron guessed , he knew the sound he worked in genetics ….
‘Adam arm yourslef … ‘
He looked slightly scared the fire light dancing in his eyes.
‘What is that…?’
Aeron emerged from tent , down the beach he spotted something breathtaking , a man wearing leather clothes on the back of a parasaurolophus but his adversity was a man in steel armour on the back of a pure black raptor of sorts , the parasaurolophus slammed its legs down , the raptor side stepped and the rider impaled the other with a spear through the chest, and then he left the body on the floor , the parasaurolophus dying of blood loss from the dromesaurs attack,
‘ Adam wherever we are it’s not natural , death is coming for us if we don’t survive ‘
Hey! I’m DeeZBeanZ or BoXXy! I would really love to become a part of the story community, I’ve been reading a lot of special raptor (sorry if I wrote that wrong) and some others and I’m so happy to see such a lively community! I’ve been thinking to write a story here but tbh it will be my first official story’s so I’m so sorry if it’s corny, over dramatic or just overall bad or bad grammar but I really want to try to become part of this community! And I like to write to myself sometimes so even if I’m not noticed or no one likes me I’m still going to write here! I hope you guys like my story’s!
-btw I never actually said my name but I was the one who wrote that comment on troodon story section talking to special raptors troop the troodon story! (R U still doing that? Or am I just missing the story because I haven’t seen much of it.. it’s ok though I’ve seen that writers have been a bit busy… so have i! But I hope y’all are doing good having a good life and are happy!) byeeeee might write soon on this section!
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What’s wrong with writing stories? There’s still tons of space to tell people stuff that can actually help people with ark, yes, maybe stories don’t, but people actually like to read them. Especially when someone is bored, and wants to just hang out and talk or make something, AS IN STORIES. I don’t know who you are, but if you guys really did, you have most likely token the fun out of this place. Have a nice day.
-zznake
I guess.
Chapter 1: The Island of the ARK
Our Character lands on a mystery island, not remembering anything about himself,Not his name, not his friends, literally nothing. Our Character: "Ugh... where am I?" Said, The he sees a Dodo, Then a massive Shadow appears behind him... It's a Spinosaurus, It doesn't kill him immediately because a mysterious Figure appears from the creatures back... its another survivor. 2nd Survivor Says: "Hey there Mate! I'm Jannie! And you are?". Our Character knocks out and gets a flashback of his past? 2002 Our Character is walking down a path with his friends, He is 30, Never Drank beer, Never did bad things, 1st Friend:Yo Bob! Let's play games at my place!" Our Character (Bob) agrees, Bob walks first to his house and Knocks out because his friends betrayed him. Bob Wakes up still on the Island but He is on Another Bed next to Jannie's bed. "Hey... I saw you knocked out so My Spinosaurus carried you here." Jannie said, "I still haven't figured out you're name yet. So what's your name?" Jannie Asked, "Bob Is my Name. How did I get here?" Said Bob worriedly. "Nobody knows how we got here. We all just appeared here." Jannie takes Bob around for a Tour and there is 2 Argentavis's, "Mate Get On!" Jannie yells to Bob, Bob still agrees not trusting her, Bob is Riding in the sky with Jannie and her Argentavis, They fly to the Volcano where they see a Evolved Giganotosaurus and Carcharadontosaurus. They both Fly their Argentavises back to camp but Get ambushed by. a Stronger Survivor Riding a Rex, Jannie throws her Spinosaurus down and Tells Bob to Run with the Argentavises... (Next Chapter on Rex)
Ranger, no yeah I totally get that man. I’m dealing with writer’s block so I get it. Hope you write soon!!!!
SpecialRaptor, do you prefer Zznake0 or SpecialRaptor? I guess Zznake0 since that’s what you go by. I’ll try to make sure I use that from now on!!! And no problem!!!! I hope Grammarly works out for you!!! And that’s awesome!!! I hope you enjoy them!!! Everyone here has awesome stories!!!
Hi Snek!!!! Yep!!! Achatina is where we all hang and lurk, and you’ve already seen the fandom!!! And that’s basically it, a few of us have our own private spots like Zznake0 uses Troodon and Raptor, and people like PD still hold up in the dyes when they pop in and out. But most of us are here or in the fandom. And I get the feeling, even for my time here it’s been a crazy ride!!!! Anyway, awesome to meet you!!! I hope you enjoy your time here!!! I’d totally recommend like ten different stories, but I feel I overwhelm when I do that! lol!!!
Anyway,
Until Next Time!!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
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