Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Hey! I’m DeeZBeanZ or BoXXy! I would really love to become a part of the story community, I’ve been reading a lot of special raptor (sorry if I wrote that wrong) and some others and I’m so happy to see such a lively community! I’ve been thinking to write a story here but tbh it will be my first official story’s so I’m so sorry if it’s corny, over dramatic or just overall bad or bad grammar but I really want to try to become part of this community! And I like to write to myself sometimes so even if I’m not noticed or no one likes me I’m still going to write here! I hope you guys like my story’s!
-btw I never actually said my name but I was the one who wrote that comment on troodon story section talking to special raptors troop the troodon story! (R U still doing that? Or am I just missing the story because I haven’t seen much of it.. it’s ok though I’ve seen that writers have been a bit busy… so have i! But I hope y’all are doing good having a good life and are happy!) byeeeee might write soon on this section!
Ark Chronicles Of The Iron Tyrant
Chapter 1 : Awakening
Aeron woke up , he ached through his body and shivered, he stood up and his senses took iver , he needed weapons that’s rule on in new territory, he was in an island beach , the climate slicked his hair in moisture and sweat.
‘Halt’ ! Aeron heard a man behind him
‘Who are you?’
‘My name is Aeron - Dr Aeron , I come from England
‘If your an Englishman who is the current king’
‘Charles 3’
‘Wrong , Edward VI’
Aeron laughed slightly , ‘what’s your name and what Century is it…’
‘Adam Carpenter , 15th century of our lord’
Both men stared ——
‘Christ’
‘Sh—-‘
Adam stared at Aeron ‘ If what you say is true … we are in trouble ‘
‘How long have you been here , Adam. ‘
‘5 hours’
Aeron walked past him and snapped a branch of a near bye palm , the branch splintered , the end being a make shift spear. Adam sighed and drew a primitive sling , loaded with pebbles , ‘Welp guess we’ll find a way back home if… it still there’
Aeron nodded his hands wrapping a peice of flint to the spear Adam Strode Over an axe of a branch and slate in hand , ‘ Aeron you look strong help me move this tree after i fall it ‘
‘Ok one the count of three’
One…
the axe took a large chunk out a palm tree
Two
The tree groaned leaning to the side
Three
The tree fell distributing the sand .
Aeron ran over and lifted the log , it was 8ft long and about 20 inches in thickness,
Aeron grunted as he propped it against a larger tree !
Squawk!
‘What was that?’ Adam turned around
‘Just a bird’
Aeron turned to look spear brandished , ‘what the—‘ he was staring , staring at a dodo bird . He knew he couldn’t be dreaming , he still felt the drain of moving the tree.
Aeron lunged forwards his spear piercing the creatures neck
It let out a high pitched squeak as it fell , plumage soaked in blood.
‘Adam make a fire , I’ll pluck the bird’
Half an hour passed as the fire was lit , the spear used as a spit , piercing through the dodo. Adam reached forward ripping a wing , ‘tastes alright’ Aeron chewed on the bone of his finished leg , ‘Well I’m full so…’ Adam laughed , ‘we now know food isn’t scare ‘ , Aeron chuckled , You know the dodo is extinct? Adam stared … Inknow you keep calling it a dodo but , what’s a dodo also what’s extinct? Aeron sighed , ‘it’s when a species stops existing , ‘ Adam nodded .
A high pitched raw , more of a squeak echoed from outside , followed by a sound of a parasaurolophus ? Aeron guessed , he knew the sound he worked in genetics ….
‘Adam arm yourslef … ‘
He looked slightly scared the fire light dancing in his eyes.
‘What is that…?’
Aeron emerged from tent , down the beach he spotted something breathtaking , a man wearing leather clothes on the back of a parasaurolophus but his adversity was a man in steel armour on the back of a pure black raptor of sorts , the parasaurolophus slammed its legs down , the raptor side stepped and the rider impaled the other with a spear through the chest, and then he left the body on the floor , the parasaurolophus dying of blood loss from the dromesaurs attack,
‘ Adam wherever we are it’s not natural , death is coming for us if we don’t survive ‘
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What’s wrong with writing stories? There’s still tons of space to tell people stuff that can actually help people with ark, yes, maybe stories don’t, but people actually like to read them. Especially when someone is bored, and wants to just hang out and talk or make something, AS IN STORIES. I don’t know who you are, but if you guys really did, you have most likely token the fun out of this place. Have a nice day.
-zznake
I guess.
Chapter 1: The Island of the ARK
Our Character lands on a mystery island, not remembering anything about himself,Not his name, not his friends, literally nothing. Our Character: "Ugh... where am I?" Said, The he sees a Dodo, Then a massive Shadow appears behind him... It's a Spinosaurus, It doesn't kill him immediately because a mysterious Figure appears from the creatures back... its another survivor. 2nd Survivor Says: "Hey there Mate! I'm Jannie! And you are?". Our Character knocks out and gets a flashback of his past? 2002 Our Character is walking down a path with his friends, He is 30, Never Drank beer, Never did bad things, 1st Friend:Yo Bob! Let's play games at my place!" Our Character (Bob) agrees, Bob walks first to his house and Knocks out because his friends betrayed him. Bob Wakes up still on the Island but He is on Another Bed next to Jannie's bed. "Hey... I saw you knocked out so My Spinosaurus carried you here." Jannie said, "I still haven't figured out you're name yet. So what's your name?" Jannie Asked, "Bob Is my Name. How did I get here?" Said Bob worriedly. "Nobody knows how we got here. We all just appeared here." Jannie takes Bob around for a Tour and there is 2 Argentavis's, "Mate Get On!" Jannie yells to Bob, Bob still agrees not trusting her, Bob is Riding in the sky with Jannie and her Argentavis, They fly to the Volcano where they see a Evolved Giganotosaurus and Carcharadontosaurus. They both Fly their Argentavises back to camp but Get ambushed by. a Stronger Survivor Riding a Rex, Jannie throws her Spinosaurus down and Tells Bob to Run with the Argentavises... (Next Chapter on Rex)
Ranger, no yeah I totally get that man. I’m dealing with writer’s block so I get it. Hope you write soon!!!!
SpecialRaptor, do you prefer Zznake0 or SpecialRaptor? I guess Zznake0 since that’s what you go by. I’ll try to make sure I use that from now on!!! And no problem!!!! I hope Grammarly works out for you!!! And that’s awesome!!! I hope you enjoy them!!! Everyone here has awesome stories!!!
Hi Snek!!!! Yep!!! Achatina is where we all hang and lurk, and you’ve already seen the fandom!!! And that’s basically it, a few of us have our own private spots like Zznake0 uses Troodon and Raptor, and people like PD still hold up in the dyes when they pop in and out. But most of us are here or in the fandom. And I get the feeling, even for my time here it’s been a crazy ride!!!! Anyway, awesome to meet you!!! I hope you enjoy your time here!!! I’d totally recommend like ten different stories, but I feel I overwhelm when I do that! lol!!!
Anyway,
Until Next Time!!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Hello Fanfictioners. I am DubXshrimp, and I am newer to writing stories. Maybe you have seen me as Pickle84uvr with dino tips, maybe you haven’t. I have read most of your guy’s stories and they are masterpieces beyond words! I was letting anyone know that I am going to write a story in Ceratosaurus called Scales of Fire. It would mean the world to me if one of you famous people checked it out! God bless you guys and keep writing your awesome Fanfictions! —DubXshrimp
Chapter 4 for dwellings might come a bit late.. stuff happens ya know? Also Im big on gaming so I’ve been occupied with that too (mostly ark and mortal kombat idk why I’m telling you this) might be write in a day might write in a week or 2 I just don’t know rn I’m also trying to animate some drawings right now so I’ve got lots I want to do ✌️-DeeZBeanZ/BoxxY
Geez, sorry for the inactivity. I’ve been meaning to write for the past two weeks, but it’s been chaotic.
SpecialRaptor, I’m so glad you have decided to come back to writing!!!! I have always loved your stories you’ve written!!!! I can understand not being able to write much though. It kinda feels like that for me too. Also, I think you can post your illustrations on the wiki discussion page. Sunny, Moon, and the others post there illustrations there. If there Ark related or even if their not. You need an account though. But a lot of people use the discussion page there to talk on every topic you can think of. We talk there so we don’t put a load of off topic stuff in the Dex.
I— don’t know what EDDSWORLD is. But I am a fan of Murder Drones and a bit of a fan to the Amazing Digital Circus (which had a FANTASTIC ENDING!!!). Moon I know loves both terribly.
While I don’t celebrate Pride month, I do celebrate Jurassic Park month. So I do hope a Happy Jurassic Park Month to everyone here!!!!
I will read ADVENTURES OF TROOP TROODON as soon as I am done posting this!!! And, again if you do want to share your illustrations. You can share them on the wiki discussion board. Like I said, Moon, Sunny, Ben and even I (plus loads more of the Achatina crew) share canon and noncanon illustrations of our characters on there.
Did I miss anything there? If so, please ask me again. Again, I have been “lurking” like PastelGothPower does. Which is horrible as I shouldn’t be.
Oh, right, I’m doing good!!! Been busy with work annd chores and life. Also trying to beat Writer’s Block right now. Doing some artwork of characters I have written about right now. How are you doing?
SYLVEEVEE!!!!! YOUR ALIVE!!!!! WE MISS YOU!!!! HOPE YOU CAN COME BACK SOON!!!!!! If you can answer now, How are you doing? Hope you can join back up for TOT, we’re trying to start up again soon!!!
Ranger, read the new Prologue of Tribe of Shadows, it was really good!!!! I’m glad you’re reposting and rebooting, I have been needing to read it but could never find it. So this will really help me read it!!! And I get the idea of rebooting. I might be doing the same with one of my stories. But idk yet.
I love the lore bites you do!!!!! You do awesome worldbuilding and I can’t wait to see that worldbuilding come to life!!!!!
I feel like I am missing something, if I am. I am so so sorry!!!! Please let me know!!!!
Anyway,
Until Next Time!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
so sorry I couldn’t find your replies. They are always all the way down at the bottom and it takes me a while to get to them. :V
Hii PrimalApex!! How are you doing? Is anything new happening with the wiki and stuff? Also I just realized I do indeed have access to the wiki, but no discord (insert cool emoji heh)
How are you doing moon? I never thought of your full user being moonflight! That is so cool!! It sounds like starflight from the WoF series!!
And welcome to Achatina to all of you new comers!! I hope you all have a good visit here :)
-as always,
Zznake0(SpecialR)
Prologue to Journey through All Creatures
Before the survivors of ARK existed, there was the Creator. He created the survivors and brought them into the world, or should I say the Arks. Survivors had the freedom to do what they want, choose their own path. But some people wanted to be evil and take away freedom. And the Creator brought the Prime Heart, a powerful artifact that could control survivors. It could also create survivors and create hearts to control them. In the wrong hands, it could spell disaster. And in the wrong hands it was. People used it to create the Assassin Heart, an artifact connected to the Prime and survivors created by it. And using the Assassin Heart, a group of people created a tribe of these monsters with no freedom to do what they wanted, forced to follow the path they had been given. That group who made the heart wanted people in the Assassin Tribe, otherwise known as the C tribe. Survivors created by the heart itself were not able to leave the path they were given. If they died they couldn’t respawn. If the heart connected to the group it creates was destroyed, all survivors created by that heart would die off. But not people who joined that group. They wouldn’t die, but they would be free. People were forced into it. One survivor, Serenity, had her freedom taken away when she was forced to join the C tribe. She had almost no memories of her freedom, but she knew no one deserved this. She wanted people to be free. And when Soddon arrived, he would soon become the one…
Chapter 1 was released a few days ago. It’s in this section.
-RelatingHen8906
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