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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Hey prime! I’m sorry you couldn’t find chapter 1 of dwellings.. and.. *checks the story for warrior pachys..* I made an error, I said the sixth clan was in the crater but it’s actually not because it’s spirit clan and that’s pretty much heaven for them, sooo uhh Woops! But I do address the sixth clan as spirit clan, just made the mistake of saying they live in the crater with the other 5.. and I’ll be doing the next chapter of dwellings next btw just to even it out since I did 2 chapters of warrior pachys, so you’ll find out who’s trying to get into the den, unlike last time, (I’m not sure if that happened in chapter 1 or prologue so sorry if you didn’t see that part) and for those waiting for the real adventure to happen; the next chapter will be extra long and will be the start of the real story, and I’ll be re posting chapter 1 probably because idk how many people might not have been able to see that chapter.. anyway! Thanks for the greeting primal! And thank you so much for reading and telling me the problems! Constructive feedback is very much appreciated! And don’t be afraid that telling me a pert of my story didn’t make sense or was overall not a very good part and could be avoided in the future because I want you to tell me so I can fix it! Don’t worry about not liking it! Everyone has tastes! And all storylines have problems that need fixing! Anyway, thanks primal and everyone who reads my story’s! Your all amazing even if you think they are absolutely trash! And I want to ask: is the person who wrote the obelisk still active? If so I want to say: You’re story’s are THE BEST! and I love them ❤️ It feels like I’m reading a real book, not a story made in Dododex! And I just wanted to say I love that story! (Although I’m not quite done with the story I don’t think) but also I love everyone who writes on Dododexs story’s! Bye - BoXXy! ❤️✌️
DeeZBeanZ again! Just wanted to make sure that whoever saw that I was writing here knows it might be a bit I’m super busy rn in IRL and in ark (just hatched my new magmasaur on default settings so that’s a doozy) and I wanted to make sure I didn’t lead someone to think that when I said I’ll write soon I didn’t mean in a day or two might be a bit but I’m trying to take my time with it! Hope all y’all readers and writers are having a good day/night! Bye ✌️
~{Dwellings}~ chapter 4 EDIT
"a what?" cried destiny "an artifact, a real one!" nova got out a strange object from her pouch, it had four points on the top
and two large spheres on the sides, and glowed orange, it had the word "artifact of chaos" inscripted on it "nova you know those are just tales for kits! stop playing around!" but destiny sounded uncertain himself, but it looks just like in the story’s he thought. "destiny you know I’m not playing around! whatever this thing does, everything wants to kill us for it, when i found it in those ruins, i thought i found something important, now i know i have. and i want to find the other artifacts." she stared steadily at destiny, who was staring at her wide eyed, "the others? Nova,.. i have to admit that this thing Might, be real.. but really? nova.. i think you should throw it out, its not worth dying for nova." "but.. Destiny.. i-.. no, no im not giving up! all my life I’ve wanted something to do with my life! if this is it,.. it is worth dying for, because if i die because of it, at least i go out doing something for once!"
BaNg, bAnG, BanG. the sound was coming from right outside the den only this time, nova was sure they would get in, and the side of the den ripped open. - BoXXy I found a lot of problems in the chapter 4 I posted so I did a re post and edit lol ✌️
Yes! I am doing great Primal-(somewhat.)!
I have mainly been working on my writing so.. QOA might get remade..
I can try to get back on TOT(still giggling on how it looks like a crying face- pft-)
I also found a trick on IBIS— so I CAN get on the web now! Happy about that I just have to log into my accountttt—
Anyways! Glad to be back- as of writing this im in a car getting spammed by a gc!
-sylveevee
hey, it’s me, SomeGamerGuy, and I thought I could share a story about attempting to tame a deinosuchus.
So I was with my baryonyx in the swamp looking for a deinosuchus. Eventually I spotted a 145. Usually I don’t have luck with deinosuchus, so when I saw it I got real excited.
I led the deinosuchus into a trap I built, but I guess the gaps were a bit too far out because it somehow escaped.
In the jist of all this another deinosuchus actually somehow got to my base and KILLED my argy and baryonyx.
So yeah, all I have is an empty trap and two deinosuchus wandering around my base.
-SomeGamerGuy, the one who got arked.
The Surface - Prologue
Jasper was a Cosmo of the Blue Zone. In a crystalline clearing was an egg. The Cosmos of the settlement would gaze upon it in awe and reverence, and on multiple occasions would try to hatch it. To understand the story, we need to know something about Jasper: Jasper, for whatever reason, had a brighter light, a light that deterred the Nameless. A light that hatched the Rock Drake egg.
Chapter One : Re Awakened
The Aberration had a beauty that felt wrong to behold , Aeron knew That from the second he prepared to step foot on its corrupted soil , he blinked as scenes invaded his head , he recalled the fight that sent him here , the overseer almost killing his friends , he pressed the insignia on his TEK ChestPiece the insignia of the Iron Tyrants glowing , The familiar Yutyrannus skull with the spear driven through it , he closed his eyes and remembered - his king hacking the overseer after his Spino had carved through its Broodmother form , it’s swarms of control chips shattering against his friends armour - peeling it way from them slowly and finnaly he remembered charging winter , his Yutyrannus forwards full speed and leaping if his saddle - whilst bolstered by its roar - and driving his TEK sword through the overseers weakened body - his friends allos , rexes and theris suddenly having the enforcers that hunted them deactivated- He , the most powerful man since Nerva afraid of the loosing battle ; a battle where the gift to try again - a prototype experiment created by the effects of an ark creator and homo deus - wouldn’t help him . He breathed deeply as he approached his balcony the fallen nexus layed beneath him like a drawing , plazas glistened and his statues were erected , people went around Buisness as usual, well as usual as it could be fore an ark , the distant roar of ravagers and nameless didn’t scare him like they used to , he thought to his armies of reapers that paraded his city below , the monstrosities he commanded separated him from every other city here , his army had beat the odds no matter how long and prevailed - but the king was calling from scorched earth , his months of peace were over for better or worse
ITS BEEN SIX YEARS. HOW ARE YOU PEOPLE STILL ACTIVE? is this your guys new headquarters?? last i checked fanfictioners used slate dye for a headquarters but thats no longer active so im curious where yall linger. i decided to check back up on the fanfictioners (i literally started this whole thing lol) after YEARS and the fact that u guys are still going strong astounds me. like i was a kid writing these and now i own a car. wowza. anyway, nice to see yall writing again, is there any other form of communication u guys use for this community?
-seasnake, snek, etc, blah blah blah i have lots of names
Hey Nexus, sorry to take so gosh darn long on an answer. Been running around like a chicken with its head cut off.
HJK apparently is still active to my surprise (I never really met them though) as they had sent something in Silver back in March. But I know Manticore and Shadow are both inactive.
Nazgûl has been radio silent for a year, but his official statement last time was he was not going to be writing anymore stories for the foreseeable future. So I guess he’s most likely inactive too. Which makes me sad a real bit.
Anywho, I gotta catch up real quick. I’ve been reading everyone’s posts when I can, but I need to reread them so I can compose a good post with proper thoughts on everything that’s happened.
Until Next Time!!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
CHAPTER 1 -the island
“Where am I?” Wondered sailor. She looked around and saw sand and trees and…was that a triceratops? “Whoa!” Exclaimed sailor. Who was slightly nervous. “I thought that those were extinct!” She slowly got up and walked towards it. It didn’t even notice her. She looked behind it and two little babies emerged from the bushes, one was blue with a chocolate brown stipe going across its back and the other was brown with a blue stripe going across its back. “Awww!” Gushed sailor. After she finished admiring the two baby triceratops’ she went to go forage for berries because she was starting to get hungry. She looked at a bush and saw it was covered in berries, at the sight of this it made her stomach rumble. “I guess I’m hungrier than I thought” joked sailor as she picked some berries. After she finished harvesting from that bush she moved on to the next one, while she was picking berries she heard a strange sound kinda like a cow mooing but it was a different creature, not a cow, she looked around trying to find out where the sound was coming from. When she didn’t see anything, or anyone, she went back to picking berries and some strange stringy stuff that was called fiber. She was almost done when she looked over and there was a giant parasaur that was baby blue with navy blue dots on its back, it startled sailor and she fell backwards in surprise. The parasaur didn’t seem startled at all to see her and he just kept walking then went up to a bush and started eating berries off of it. “Aww aren’t you cute” cooed sailor. Sailor thought to herself, “what if I fed him some berries so he would maybe follow me around and help me.” So she took some of the last berries she had and tried to get the parasaur to eat them he refused and kept walking but sailor kept trying, but he just kept ignoring her and munching on bushes. This was starting to anger sailor, she tried one more time and when he refused she punched him in the head, when he fell to the ground sailor had thought that she had killed him. She cautiously approached him and when he stirred she jumped. Then she decided that she would try to feed him berries while he was asleep. It worked! He happily took the berries and ate them this made sailor very happy so she went to go harvest more berries. When she got enough berries for her and the parasaur she went back to go feed him. She walked up to the parasaur and tried to feed him a berry and he accepted it! “Yes!” cried sailor. As soon as she finished celebrating the parasaur woke up and walked towards her. Then it stopped in front of her,she went to the left and he mirrored her movements she took a step backwards and he took a step forwards, then she turned and sprinted a little while and he chased after her and never left her side. Sailor thought he was trying to be friends with her so she gave him a name, he would be called Mirror. At the sound of this the parasaur jumped in the air and did his little moo. “Wow you are happy about that aren’t you Mirror.” Said sailor. As soon as she finished her statement she heard a strange sound behind her it wasn’t like anything that she had heard before so she slowly turned around and before she could react at seeing a cute blue and green little dino she was hit in the face by a sticky green liquid that stung her eyes and burned her throat… next chapter in Acro
~valguero girl
Ah, alright. Thanks Ben. I keep saying that I’ll stay here a while and then wander off and forget about this place, lol. I’ll see how long I’ll stay this time but I’ll make sure that I remember to come here. I popped in more frequently this week than I have for months, lol.
-Break-It, The Final Witness
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