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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Gitez Good, the prologue for TLS is in Yuty and chapter one is in yeti. It might not make a lot of sense(the book) if u haven’t read the previous books. Idk if u have. Also if you want to see the posts and chapters as soon as they come out, there’s a website for that. It’s the Dododex website. Just click on the story sections and you should be able to filter everything to the newest posts. Hope this helps!
Syl, personally I don’t think it’s a good idea for you to date people that you don’t know online. Especially if you don’t know them. Not to mention it’s kind of weird. Just ignore them if you can’t ban them or go to your parents and ask them for advice on what to do.
Cya later!!!
-SunnyFox57
Sunnyfox, chapter three was awesome!!! Man, I was not expecting that for the beginning!!!! It was so sad and heartbreaking and great!!!! I loved it!!! Lucas and Whitney seem like cool characters!! And I wonder who was watching Tom through the shadows? Hm, I wonder. Must be sad for Tom, living with a curse of supernatural longevity. I loved this chapter and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
Sylveevee, I would agree with Ben on this case. If he’s going into 8th grade while you are going into middle school. It isn’t a safe thing to mess around with and suggest that you take this to your parents with this information. I know it may look harmless right now and it might be for all I know. But it is always a good thing to take these precautions and take this kind of situation to your parents. That is the best thing you can do now.
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Sunnyfox, I loved chapter two of TLS!!!! So Tom’s going back to Riverside City!!! Oooh!!! This is going to be interesting!!! Dante’s great!!! He a fun character!! I think this is going to fun to see some other characters who aren’t Phoenix too!!! I wonder who the boy was at the end? I loved it so much!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!!
Ben, chapter 94 was awesome!!! So the Key Master is able to control Ben? Interesting and he also seems to be a parasitic being who is from another universe. You can’t deny it this time, Ben’s mind palace is a literal Singularity Point. An epicenter of a black hole and the theory whereby a singularity point could possibly be the border of multiple universes. How they even get there is says it all!! June was engulfed by a black hole!! So maybe the Key Master comes from a different universe or dimension. Which further says that. And he knows about the constellation beings too, and some of them are us? Okay, a little bit creepy. You know, I think I hate the Key Master more than I hated June. And I cannot just sit here and feel bad for June her in this situation. Sure she was evil and wished she’d die at some point, but not that way… that way was just for no one’s benefit or enjoyment but his. Like, I know that this was the inevitable outcome. But I could hope that she would turn or at least have a fight with death at the end. No she just got mind melted and had to suffer in silence!! I can’t say it was a bad death though, it was pretty cool!!! Poor Paul at the end though!! I wonder what these seven lines of dialogue mean, obviously most if not all are meant for us. But the first two lines strike me the most as it seems to be between two different characters. And it looks this is the last we’ll see of our friend The Key Master in this story. And since he knows… Don’t worry, I’ll be ready…
I loved this chapter Ben!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
Hello everyone! Chapter 94 is out in Pegomastax! There are now six chapters of TAOH left! I cannot wait to finally get this story over with!
Sunny, Chapter 2 of TLW was amazing! I’ve already left most of my thoughts on Fandom but I’ll go over it again anyway. Dante seems like such a cool fellow and I wonder who that boy at the end was. I honestly would really enjoy seeing more non-Phoenix main characters like how it was in TTDOT. Anyway it was a cool chapter and I can’t wait to read more!
Sorry guys. I need to catch up on responding to chapters.
Moon chapter six of Pandora was great!!! Poor Gull. I have a feeling that Zeer is going to get him later on for standing in her way. I wonder where Pandora went…
Btw is Bria older than Pandora or are they the same age or what?I can’t wait for the next chapter!!
Ben, I read the newest chapters of TAOH!!!! They were amazing!!! NOOO Skyler. I bet Moonflight could have kept them all alive if she’d tried. And Ben…I think he cracked, went mad maybe. Probably will want to get revenge on June for what she did to his flower and promise. I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Syl, chapter one of WOA was great!!! Cooper used medical brew to save Drank, thank goodness!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
Btw PrimalApex, no Tom’s power doesn’t mute people when he’s controlling them. Tom told the plant keeper to be quiet (He said “shh”) and the plant keeper was unable to say anything bc Tom had unintentionally muted him.
That’s all for now! :)
-SunnyFox57
Hey guys, Ben here. I dug into far in the Dododex rabbit hole. I really do feel bad about the whole situation. It’s like a punch in the gut. I’m just tired in general man. It feels like my friends (IRL) betrayed me, and i lost the only friend that meant a lot to me. She really did. That’s why I came here, to find friends who care. So thanks guys.
This platform has a sad, past. I just wish it wasn’t so bad all the time.
I’m gonna take a break to recover to myself. I know it sounds ridiculous, I’d only written 5 chapters and all but. I need this. Just some time to think about and reflect on what I need to do next. Yeah. I’ll still come around to talk and all.
See you later. - Ben
Ben here. Woah guys, Veteran’s Day is here! Thanks veterans for serving the country.
Anyway, Chapter 5 of The Arks: Over Heaven is out, in Tapejara. And also Chapter 4 released like a week ago, in Tropeognathus, just in case you guys didn’t know. And thanks for love on my earlier chapters guys! I love you guys!
SpecialRaptor, Creatures of Sonaria is a strange game… I try to play it but I don’t really know what to do, lol. And I used to play Roblox, but then I got kinda bored and just moved on. I still come back to it every once and a while. Also, My Hero Academia, hmm, I don’t really have a favorite character because I don’t watch the anime. I don’t watch anime, actually. I only watched the first 3 episodes but then I had to get back to writing so, no time to watch anime!
Wyvernian, that’s pretty interesting. I remember back when I was little I used to just write whatever came to my mind. So, I get the whole adding twist villain in like, when we’re already starting the story midway! Nowadays I have a lot planned out. Sometimes it’s hard for me to write my other stories because I already know what’s gonna happen, so what’s the point. Yeah. Oh well, at least I can write Arks: Over Heaven fine.
Moon, yay!!! Chapter 86 is out! I just read it and it seems my prediction is right AGAIN! Or at least, kinda. Crimson really is starting to get her character developed after she jumped in the water to save the shadowmane. Honestly I think it’s really nice that Crimson likes the shadowmanes so much. Maybe it’s because they’re like parents to her. I like the interaction between Spark and Forest too. It feels like they’re becoming closer friends. Ooh. Interesting.
I remember I used to hate romance in stories back then when I just started writing. I thought it was a cheap way to create attention and it always felt so overdone, but, look at me now. Now I LOVE ROMANCE STORIES! Now I pretty much include it in every story… 😭. Oh well…
That’s all for today guys. And happy 3-day weekend! - Ben
Hmmm for the loyal Carno with black horns I’m thinking.... Obsidian? No that doesn’t really go with loyalty..... hmm what’s black and green..........
Crap IDK I’ll be thinking about that.
Now the Dienonychus is much easier for me, Sky, Breeze, Brook, Bream, Lupa, or Cloud would all be nice names.
Thanks a ton for letting us pick names!! This will be fun 🤩
-Your Biggest Fan & Dog
This is Moon from the Obelisk. Please read my chapters in order. Some of you have read Chapter 46: part two before part one. I understand that at that time part one had stubbornly not released, but please, wait until they are all available and in order. I understand that since the Featherlight mess it’s been a little weird, but please. I’d like to get past that. Thanks 🙂
I think the 5th carnivore will be a shadowmane! But still hoping for Thyla🤣🤣. Dododex won’t show my reply so sorry if you see 2 tips saying the same thing. I love these stories so much can’t wait to see what the 5th carnivore really is!! But the cliffhangers are killing me!!!!!!
-your biggest fan
“Empire’s fall”Chap2
The 56th night is over. Blood wakes up after a restless sleep. He throws on a tattered hide armor and ventures out in the middle of the fort. With the sleeping quarters blown up by an airborne raid, the 100 or so troops that have endured live in shabby tents in the central courtyard. Considering the limited amount of tents, the garrison is split between the night patrollers and the day patrollers that when a new day begins, the day shift emerges and the night shift goes to rest. And vice versa with the sunset. Blood watches as the battred night patrol goes to their tents. “What is the body count today?” Blood asks a captain nearby. “Two dead last night. Explosion on the west wall. We stand 84 now...” He says grimly. “Call over the all the captains including yourself. Go to the cellar... I need to have a discussion with you all” Blood orders. “Very well sir.” The captain yells as Blood enters the cellar...
“Empire’s fall” Chap1
The siege has cost everyone... General BloodBorne watches as his fort once again is under relentless bombings from positions surrounding the fort. The darkness of the night is only broken by the flares and explosions. If not for that. The night would be completely dark. Not even the stars came out to watch. “Empires fall... Keeping up ok?” Blood whispers as he puts his head against a cracking stone wall. Tears comes to his eyes... For two months his garrison has survived onslaught after onslaught by the enemy. But now it is almost over... This night. Something will break inside of blood.
The realization that he has to surrender....
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