Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
The war a new series by the creator of John’s adventure season one chap one
It was a cold night at the camp when all of a sudden a Big Bang could be herd in the distance “WE’RE UNDER ATTACK” The captain yelled “FIRE” the captain yelled again the shoulders fired there guns but down in the prison Kyle escaped “finally” said Kyle next chap in allo btw Tina let’s do a collab soon
Max Survival Evolved ep1
Hugh where am I Max said. Silk where are you! What the heck is that a dodo was in the distance *grumble* I must be hungry. HEY! Someone yelled in the distance hugh? kai is that you! Yup yelled the Kaprian c'mon...Thanks for reading I'm not good at th is but next story will be in the allosaurus bio
To Calem,
You may write a story if you want. It’s completely fine! Just please don’t write it in Achitna section. There’s already way to much going on in there and I don’t exactly want the first Chapter of the Obelisk hidden anymore than it already is.
Of course, make sure it’s not too close to my story. Now, if it’s close plot-wise, it may be a bit of a problem. If it’s close world-wise, (aka, same map, same idea of culture for creatures and other things,) that’s perfectly fine and actually awesome. It would be really great if you could write it In Yutranus and go up tamables like you suggested.
Second, you said I should have made Sparks parents see her in Chapter 60. Yeah, no. If Sparks parents were to see her, it would very much ruin the entire plot of the story, and, Sparks parents aren’t exactly like that. You will learn more about them soon enough. Sorry for really taking this seriously, but Spark hid from them and they did not see her. Hence, a flowing plot so far.
Thanks for reading my story,
Can’t wait to see yours!
—Moon
(-please nobody up this, I just want most tips here to be read and then left alone so my first chapter can go back up eventually for others to see.)
I'll be sure to check out the submissions :D
Can't wait to see what everyone's come up with
Again, this is Apex,
How doe everyone think the five sound or what accents they have? For me I think Forest sounds a little like a nerd mixed with Little Foot from the later movies. Spark sounds like Sarah mixed with the original voice of Little Foot, I don't know why they both sound like little foot to me, but they do and they are the last to sound like characters from the Land Before Time. Rust is like a Mexican American accent, Crimson's and all kapros have a Southern accent, and finally Nyx, well, her and her whole tribe for some reason have British accents. But this is just me, I want to know what everyone else thinks they sound like.
--Apex... Again.
Moon's Biggest fan,
I don't know if already I said this, but I liked your short story, for one thing it's a good plot and short story about the Ark, for another. It's funny and I really liked it. If you decide to keep doing short stories, I'll be excited to read them.
Also Moon,
I've heard of you are doing something really good and it's public. Your sure to gain impersonators. I guess you on that level. I'm just afraid that your loyal fans are next. If that's next, we'll have some real spiderman finger pointing happening.
Also thank you, but your story is so compelling and makes want to follow and read it the more I read it, it's addictive in a good way. It's like a mix of some of the best movie franchises like the Land Before Time and Chronicles of Narnia and yet it is completely unique in every way. And it's just amazing, I can't wait for the next one that comes each time and it makes me think about the whole story. Sorry for making such a long response but, it's better than making 4 of them and making it more painful to read.
--Apex
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