SangToareGirl, Nice to meet you!! I have seen your work and I think it’s pretty good!! Welcome to Achatina!!! I hope you enjoy your time here!!

PD, this Little Rabbit Boy story seems interesting, if you do continue doing. I’ll definitely be checking it out more!!!

Until Next Time!!!

-PrimalApex:)

I love the series obelisk! But I can’t find anything past the gallimimus section ☹️ can anyone tell me where it is?

The hidy dude

I punched him he hid but a kapro literally destroyed me a nanosecond after

Why are people down voting all my new posts? Its extremely rude.

-The one who reads

Ben, moon is the only one with a large following, me and the other fan fictioners I’m pretty sure just like each other’s for the most part 😂 also if you need a large follower base to write on here, your doing it for the wrong reason..

-wyvernian

Thank you for supporting my writing everyone! I want to write it but then I have to go in aberration to find out good creatures, landscapes, scales of creatures, and other boring things that would add to the realism of the story. Now the only issue is that I don't want to do that part of it soon but I also have to. It might take a bit though is the point. Now you may be wondering, why would I have to do that? The answer is that I haven't played aberration for a long time. Anyway I am probably talking too much, just the point is that it might be a minute.

-Lynx

Hi me Chris moon umm I looked for ch 65 part 1 but it wasn't there please check it's working or not ty bye

To The One Who Reads:

I think you should name the yuty Blizzard, the Andrewsarchus Fire, the Basilisk... Acid? No that’s lame... IDK. Annnnd the Sinomacrops I don’t know because you haven’t said if it’s male or female.

Good luck with your story, I hope at least one of these names is ok.

-Moon’s Biggest Fan

Hi it's me Chris again moon if u didn't read my other post please read it to understand this one so u know that I love shadowmanes if you want more information for ideas for nyx it that the very smart fast jump high strong and go invisible teleport on a enemy and charge up a big bite if they do a bunch of damage and the can scratch bite big bite and that combined to make a rapage so if later on when nyx had to attack a bunch of enemies he start to go on a rapage and when he stops he realises that he can do that I have alot of shadowmanes in ark so yeah and yeah mean I hope u have a great day bye keep up the storys

Hi moon I really like your storys funny things is that when I was reading I had to go to bed I was wondering what will the 5 Dino will be and I hoped it was a shadowmane bec I love shadowmane and it's my favourite thing in ark and it was one mean yea but I hope u have a great day I really enjoy your storys when this one is done I hope u make more about the new ark and then ark 2 and I hope u have a great day and my name is Chris bye

To Calem,

You may write a story if you want. It’s completely fine! Just please don’t write it in Achitna section. There’s already way to much going on in there and I don’t exactly want the first Chapter of the Obelisk hidden anymore than it already is.

Of course, make sure it’s not too close to my story. Now, if it’s close plot-wise, it may be a bit of a problem. If it’s close world-wise, (aka, same map, same idea of culture for creatures and other things,) that’s perfectly fine and actually awesome. It would be really great if you could write it In Yutranus and go up tamables like you suggested.

Second, you said I should have made Sparks parents see her in Chapter 60. Yeah, no. If Sparks parents were to see her, it would very much ruin the entire plot of the story, and, Sparks parents aren’t exactly like that. You will learn more about them soon enough. Sorry for really taking this seriously, but Spark hid from them and they did not see her. Hence, a flowing plot so far.

Thanks for reading my story,

Can’t wait to see yours!

—Moon

(-please nobody up this, I just want most tips here to be read and then left alone so my first chapter can go back up eventually for others to see.)

The one who reads is a funny alias as a take at the one who waits who has the 4x notes in ark

-The one who reads

Who agrees that TAOH and TOT deserves a Netflix series?

Just a random question…

-RelatingHen8906

I HAVE PLAYED GENSHIN!!!

-sylveevee

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—Moon

I found chapter 2 reader it far down there in ammonite it was -1 so it’s FAR down not trying to ask for ups but if you read the story and like it please do so the chapters don’t go under like that some others are below zeroed too and I don’t want new readers to have to search that hard.. nice to see I have a few readers now! 😀 hope you enjoy them as much as I enjoy writing them.

-Wyvernian

Hey Moon,

I think it's awesome that you did voice claims. I find it very helpful when people do stuff like that, as I tend to silently read aloud, but I'm incapable of coming up with different voices on my own (hence all the blokes sounding like women).

PastelGothPower

Again, this is Apex,

How doe everyone think the five sound or what accents they have? For me I think Forest sounds a little like a nerd mixed with Little Foot from the later movies. Spark sounds like Sarah mixed with the original voice of Little Foot, I don't know why they both sound like little foot to me, but they do and they are the last to sound like characters from the Land Before Time. Rust is like a Mexican American accent, Crimson's and all kapros have a Southern accent, and finally Nyx, well, her and her whole tribe for some reason have British accents. But this is just me, I want to know what everyone else thinks they sound like.

--Apex... Again.

Moon's Biggest fan,

I don't know if already I said this, but I liked your short story, for one thing it's a good plot and short story about the Ark, for another. It's funny and I really liked it. If you decide to keep doing short stories, I'll be excited to read them.

Also Moon,

I've heard of you are doing something really good and it's public. Your sure to gain impersonators. I guess you on that level. I'm just afraid that your loyal fans are next. If that's next, we'll have some real spiderman finger pointing happening.

Also thank you, but your story is so compelling and makes want to follow and read it the more I read it, it's addictive in a good way. It's like a mix of some of the best movie franchises like the Land Before Time and Chronicles of Narnia and yet it is completely unique in every way. And it's just amazing, I can't wait for the next one that comes each time and it makes me think about the whole story. Sorry for making such a long response but, it's better than making 4 of them and making it more painful to read.

--Apex

I posted the Cave Of Secrets in Allo, Hope you enjoy it!

-Lynx. I know it has been a long time lol.