
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Sunnyfox, I read chapter 10 of ToT!!!! I really enjoyed it!!!! I really liked how all the characters interacted with each other!!! It was really good!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Ben, that actually looks pretty close to what I thought it looked like!!! And I tried translating some of Moonflight’s dialogue, but some of it kept not wanting to translate for me. I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Wyvernian, I am very curious to see what Caesar’s arm will be able to do. It’s definitely intriguing!!! And I can’t wait for the next chapter of ToT!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
Yes.. i dont think anyone here is in favor of impersonators or haters working on TOT. Also if youre talking about "Chapter 8" of TOT i made that post since Syl's Chap 7.5 should technically be 8
PrimalApex, Jerry is extremely deranged for sure he's kinda fun to write. I wouldnt mind putting him in TOT in the future. But he does have his own backstory which explains his mentality of the world.
So Slyl is writing the next chapter? Is it eight or seven and a half? I’m confused. I don’t really think it matters which number chapter we get, we’re writing this story for fun. But if y’all want to write a certain chapter then that’s fine, we’ll figure out. Anyways.. cya later!
-SunnyFox57
P.S: Btw when y’all say something like “they tried in vain to do something” it’s spelled “V-A-I-N” not “V-E-I-N”. A vein is a part of the body. No offense, I was just explaining.
From Ben
Alright Sylveevee thanks but you're going to have to cut your cast down to 5 or less. Later on more characters can be added tho. Youll be writing Chapter 7.5 (weird chapter ik but i wanna write Chapter 13)
erm yeah thats all
Woah TOT chap 6 was really cool PrimalApex super nicr work cant wait to write about these guys ok imma go Archive some more stuff seeya
From Ben
SunnyFox GENERAL PAUL IS HERE and ready to kick Tom's butt woo hoooooo! Paul is actually peak Human even without powers he'd crush Tom. If the shadowy figure went for the real Paul he wouldnt see the light of day again. Also funny reference heh heh. So Emma is going to get her wise advice from Paul who got it from "Ben"? Eh probably not but itd make continuity. (When Emma rejected Michael she gave some wise words from someone named Ben) So now theyre off to the Dark Phoenix Castle, I wonder whats next
Wyvernian its up to you if you want to include Aurora or not in your chapter. it doesnt really matter. Maybe she can stumble upon the PoP cast while eating ice cream or smth dumb. Out of the TAOH cast Ruby has always wanted to be a chef so probably her (Although Neddy likes to join her in her passion) In TROTP Arianna cooks for her family all the time. And will the other characters meet? Yeah sure i dont see why not.
As for the size differences i think we should keep them at their true sizes for now for comical purposes. But then maybe theyll find a special potion or food that shrinks them down? Idk something silly.
Anyway im probably going to do a Dinner Scene with everyone for Chapter 8 is that fine? Then at the end of the chapter theres a doorbell and they go check it out and its Ultimus cast and Hopes Cry cast.
Alright seeya later
Apex, ok that makes sense, I thought they were probably future ultimus characters because I didn’t think you made any human stories before.
Sunny, take all the time you need no rush, your literally writing what 3 stories right now? Your 100% good. Excited to read the chapter!
LLTCCATOT
-Wyvernain
Message to angry Ben, pretty sure our new hater is also disliking PoP and ultimus..
Also, again I say.. disliking our talking tips is what we want so they go away quickly and the achitina prologues and chapter 1s can be seen, so haha jokes on you your only helping!
I legitimately don’t understand why people do stuff like this, the person isn’t actually annoyed by us talking they’re literally just being an annoyance to get us agitated, just for laughs, they’re probably sitting in their bed laughing at us get mad and downvoting everything just to be a nuisance. My advice, ignore them and they’ll get bored and troll somewhere else, that’s what I did with my HoP hater and they just moved on to something or someone else. There’s no making them stop with threats we just need to bore them.
-Wyvernain
from Ben
yes Sunny you are writing the next one sorry should have put that on the last post
Ben and Benjamin are the same people. Benjamin is just my full name. Think of him as like.. an alter ego? If you noticed Ben is short for Benjamin.
GhostGamer, you are approved by me. Once youre approved by the rest of the council, youre probably gonna write either Chapter 6 (if PrimalApex still isnt ready) or Chapter 7.
From Ben
Sunny when a gun is aimed at your head, you honestly have only two choices. LOLZ, i wouldnt wanna die either. Thanks for reading 57 PrimalApex and Sunny.
I read Chapter 1, and Jack is right, has Jay once considered how Jack felt? Why would he ever let his siblings die on his own accord? Playing the blame game is never a good idea guys. And Jay needs to think to himself: am i blaming him because of the grief of losing Jaquin and Josephina, or am i blaming him because I dont want to be at fault? Theyre both at fault for this all. Amen.
Yeah, I hope Jack cheers up soon. Things WILL get better!
Alright, anyway, i guess i gotta work on TOT since im home.
TOT
heh heh, it looks like a crying emoji
TOT
From Ben
Lolz i just saw a more recent comment on Hati and Skoll asking for 2000 likes on their story in Overseer 😭😭
its definitely above the average "fanfic" length, but certainly not the best. Definitely does not warrant 2000 likes. Length does not equate greatness, and like count does not equate quality. A writer could get 10 likes on a below average story, and another could get 3 likes on an above average story.
If i had to rate this story, it would be like a 60% since theres no character depth. I also love it when newbie writers ask for like ten likes for Episode 2 when their story is actual slop that took a few minutes to put together. Put a bit more effort in your story before you ask for likes, am i right?
Okay PrimalApex so if you need more time on Ultimus thats fine. Ill write Chapter 4 then? Also I read Ultimus Chap 6 it was really nice how Andrew was listing off names suggested by Rue first. I guess his best friends on his mind first. And Reuben is like Rue, but, with ben at the end so he must care right right? Also i reread the Prologue and i think i noticed a change, Andrew speaks Japanese? Maybe he meets a Japanese person?
Im trying to deny the fact that Reubens going to die, but, hey im holding onto that hope.
Journey Chapter 4 was also really cool, and something tells me Forest is really far from home... i wonder where he landed, The Island? Guess we'll have to wait and see.
Ok laters guys
From Ben
Wyvernian i think the villains of your cast should still go to the floating mansion, but as they intertwine with the other cast they could be like "man this sucks i need me some real villainous stuff, these guys are too good" so they leave the mansion and just start wandering ariund looking for other bad guys.
100% agree with that Ben, that’s all I meant was that we just need to know they won’t be stupid, and I don’t think syl will be, seal of approval from me 🦭
And ok, I didn’t see Apex saying that thx for telling me, I didn’t know if he was gonna use characters from his older stories or not so it makes sense that if he’s using ultimus characters that he’d wait. Exited for the prologue, also we should make anyone who died and is coming back in the crossover wake up in shock because it makes sense.
-Wyvernain
Ok. I do have a few questions tho about the crossover.
1. Where will the crossover be? Like what filter?
2. What order should we go in to write the collab? Like who goes first and who goes next?
3. Will there be a villain? A group of our villains or a new villain?
4. Which characters from each of our stories will be in the crossover or will all our characters be in it?
5. Where will they all meet together when they all get sucked to the alternate universe? Another Ark island? A mysterious place?
Personally I don’t mind whatever y’all pick. I do have one suggestion tho, I think maybe the order that we each write should probably be in alphabetical. So we each go in abc order as to our alias. Idk I was just thinking….whatever y’all want to do is fine with me. Cya around!
-SunnyFox57