Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
From Ben
Sylveevee, Chapter 26 of QOA was crazy! I can’t believe Grasina is now with the others. Sylveevee outmatches Drake in combat, but Drake has been mistreated for so long. I don’t think he’ll keep up his loyalty toward this “queen” for long. And I can’t wait to see this Yeti fight ensue! Milo and the Broodmother are nowhere in sight tho. Maybe this is just a distraction by Pat.
Wyvernian I loved the Prologue of CAT! There’s so much to uncover here with Smoke and Torch and the Wyvern King. And Xavier was the only one who united all of Wyveria. I have a huge feeling that this “descendent” is, perhaps, Charr? Maybe it’s not Charr at all, and instead someone else. This would mean that Cinder is not destined to unite Wyveria. What also intrigues me is there are also blood wyverns, ember wyverns, but most importantly voidwyrms. This is weird since they’re mechanical you’d assume they aren’t technically alive but they’re conscious. Maybe this is what Salizar meant in the POP finale about free will. I can’t wait to see more of this story and who the main character is!
Break-It, apologies that Ultimus has been taking so long. Yes, it is still being worked on, I’ve just been bashing my head against a wall trying to figure out how chapter 15 will go, I’m just about finished and it should release within this coming week or sooner. Again, I’m sorry for taking so long and I’m glad you’re enjoying it!!:)
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
Yes MGG, that was basically what was happening since basically everyones on Fandom now. Yeah we can still post on DDEX but idk why its been more quiet recently. Probably just one of those weeks, sadly. It is a Summer Scare after all, there may be more activity elsewhere on the platform things are gonna start slowing down in Achatina. Thats the pattern I notice from 2023 anyway. If posting on DDEX about TOT topics is faster than Sunny being a messenger between both platforms, we can probably release a message daily accounting dicussions and what not. Seeya later, and cant wait tosee your next chapters of TOT and Hopes Call!
Ben, I read chapter seventy three!! It’s funny how Paul was just carrying around a bunch of cherries, 😂. Poor Carlos, if only he was better at cooking…
And now they met June?! Wow they mad a BIG mistake at mentioning Ben. Hopefully they survive. I wonder what June will think when she learns that Ben is still alive…
I can’t wait for the next chapter!!
-SunnyFox57
TAOH questions and answers
Bored and im on my lunch break which means im not working on TAOH until my lunch break is over, so im running thru another Q&A
Only diff is that you aren't asking me the questions, you're asking the characters of TAOH!!!! Ask whatever question you want and they'll answer it. Most likely.
Question what hero characters do yall want to be transferred from the white obelisk give details of what they look like im feeling like starting the transfering of the heros from the obelisk like villains three each…
Mine
Cooper, though in QOA only he can use his family’s powers with his implant his implants power is copying others power ls even if they dont have a implant he has smooth blonde hair and crystal blue eyes.
Draco, he has a power but he doesn’t really show it he hasn’t shown it in QOA yet but its like the four wyverns he can shoot out fire breath, poison breath, lightning breath, and ice breath he has emerald green eyes and red and black hair.
Fox, cooper sunhigh and moonhighs sister she has the power of strength, he has orange and black hair, on black colored eye and the other orange
-sylveevee
MOON!!!!!! I watched The Amazing Digital Circus finally!!! It was AWESOME!! It was kind of dark at some parts but other than that it was fine. Kane and Bubbles are so funny together. Raga the nice person, always trying to help Pomni. Pomni…is going rather mad I’m afraid tho. I think my favorite character is probably Jax. He’s so funny and just there for the fun. I wonder when episode three is coming out….
-SunnyFox57
Sunnyfox, the Engrammic Matrix is an important part of the Ark lore as it holds all the memories, body shapes, languages and race of every person inside it. It’s what the original Arks used and it controlled the spawn of humans on the Arks and a similar version was made for the Genesis Ship and it maintained their diversity of eras (which unusually didn’t work for Aberration). It was their cloning system and maintained all of the clones through the implants. If you want to learn more about the Engrammic Matrix, there’s an Ark wiki on wiki.gg and a decommissioned fandom version that have lore pages, and a YouTuber called NeddytheNoodle did several Lore videos on most of the Ark lore.
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
Hi guys, I’ve posted my version of the draft model (which you can’t adVOTEkate for) so you may read it if you want. It’s been a while since I’ve touched one of these… it was fun.
Sylveevee I forgot to mention it but I thought that Queen Syl’s elemental ball was literally a ball made of element, like the material. I didn’t think it would be like the four elements (five apparently). Anyways if that’s the case, it might give Queen June a little bit of trouble, but Queen June is still an excellent fighter, even without her fire powers (lore). She also has some strong attacks because she used to be in tennis, if I remember correctly. Water also doesn’t put out fire so easily, it’s a bit more complicated than that since the most effective way to get rid of fire would be to get rid of the oxygen (which is why fire extinguishers are not just water, there’s special mist that stops oxygen or smth like that). Anyways I’d think it’d be a tough battle between the two of them, but I’m not too sure who would win because we haven’t really seen Queen Syl’s elemental ball. Oh yeah btw thunder is the sound, I think you are talking about lightning which is the actual bolt. Thunder is the sound lightning makes.
SunnyFox, if I were you I wouldn’t give that GitezGood ideas. They seem like a freeloader from their message wording. It doesn’t even seem as if they’ve read your story, they just want some ideas for their YT channel thing (And free advertising since they want you to advertise their stuff in your stories for some reason.. Yuck, I hate freeloaders). But do whatever you want, it’s your life, you make your own choices.
Anyway, Chapter 6 of The Lost World was really cool! These dynamics are really awesome and there’s a very clear contrast between Cedric and Oliver. Even though they are friends they are opposites. Cedric doesn’t pay attention in class while Oliver does, which I think is pretty interesting since you’d expect both of them wouldn’t. Anyway, looks like they’re being transported, uh oh.. To the lost world! Probably. Is it Rowan? Or some other mischievous scheme? Anyway it also makes me wonder what this Lost World is.
Alrightie! I’mma go over the draft models now. (by the way MGG, a draft model is a plan for something. So the draft models are plans for how the story will go, and people just continue off it. As for why you never were introduced to them in the 5th grade, I think it’s more of a teacher-exclusive thing, since no one else did them in my school). I’ll be going alphabetically.
MGG I really liked your draft model version! I liked how Jimmy got his toy back, it was a pretty realistic way and it really teaches the readers you don’t have to steal your stuff back, and how you gotta take accountability for your actions. I also liked Jimmy’s reason of wanting Spidey back for Show and Tell, a detail which the other draft models didn’t really go over was the Show and Tell thing. There were a few grammar errors but it’s not really that big a deal (you really gotta fix the whole to and too thing tho), but other then that good stuff!
Sunny your draft model version was also really good! I liked Britney’s interactions with Jimmy in this one, something the other draft models didn’t have. I also liked Jimmy’s action, it really shows he wants that toy back. The way Jimmy also earned his toy back was pretty wholesome and sweet, that was also a realistic alternative and in the end both Mr. Hsu and Jimmy got what they wanted. I also thought it was pretty funny how Britney has gum under her desk, she’s not a very good kid even though she’s snitching on others. There were very little grammatical errors, but once again it’s not that big of a deal, although I think Jimmy’s relief that he got his toy back could have been highlighted a bit more since he went through many challenges to get it back. Anyway, good stuff!
Sylveevee, your draft model was really fun! Reading Jimmy’s crazy Mission Impossible plan was a lot of fun and I enjoyed how it went. I also liked the detail of Jimmy making a replica Spider Man to throw Mr. Hsu off was a pretty good plan, although I think it could have been covered how Jimmy managed to make it. Like did he use clay or gum or some random stuff he found lying around? That process would make this story even better. Anyway the flow was really good and it was nice reading this version, if I could adVOTEkate one of my favorites for this draft model it’d probably be yours since it was so much (but I can’t adVOTEkate so).
Anyways voting begins you can also leave feedback for the others if you want.
OMG, I’m laughing so hard. Ben, how have you NEVER met a blonde?!?! How many people do you see on a daily basis? Bruh…LOL. How…? OMG. 😆😆. LOL, I don’t know why it’s so funny to me…
Anyways…(*tries to stifle laughs*)…I posted my draft ending. It’s kind of cheesy but it was fun.
-SunnyFox57 is dying of laughter.
From Ben
MGG, to answer your question:
1. You create your own draft model, yes, so everyone's version is separate and solo from one another. If you mean create your own draft model as in story prompt, no (not yet at least). Im suppling them from donations.
2. Rules? Idk what this means. I already provided some for when you finish off the rest of the Draft Model.
3. Voting commences once everyone is done with their individual draft models but if someone takes too long we just vote without them. Youll still be able to finish a draft model if you take too long and publish it, and it will still be archived but you cant win Writer of the Week for that week and you gotta wait for your next chance in the next week
Ben,
Yay. I think it’s a great idea. I’ve never heard of a Draft Model, even when I was in fifth grade. I don’t know why though, Language Arts was my favorite subject, aside from History, not a fan of mathematics or science. (Why I am talking about this, I’m getting off subject) anyway I have a few questions about it. These are questions about things I either missed in your message or don’t understand.
Q#1: Do we each create our own Draft Model, or just finish off where others left off, like in a collab?
Q#2: Are there any other specific rules to creating a Draft Model?
Q#3: When will the voting commence? Is it once everyone is done with the stories?
That’s all I could think of right now…
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
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