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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
From Ben
Yes MGG, that was basically what was happening since basically everyones on Fandom now. Yeah we can still post on DDEX but idk why its been more quiet recently. Probably just one of those weeks, sadly. It is a Summer Scare after all, there may be more activity elsewhere on the platform things are gonna start slowing down in Achatina. Thats the pattern I notice from 2023 anyway. If posting on DDEX about TOT topics is faster than Sunny being a messenger between both platforms, we can probably release a message daily accounting dicussions and what not. Seeya later, and cant wait tosee your next chapters of TOT and Hopes Call!
Ben, I read chapter seventy three!! It’s funny how Paul was just carrying around a bunch of cherries, 😂. Poor Carlos, if only he was better at cooking…
And now they met June?! Wow they mad a BIG mistake at mentioning Ben. Hopefully they survive. I wonder what June will think when she learns that Ben is still alive…
I can’t wait for the next chapter!!
-SunnyFox57
TAOH questions and answers
Bored and im on my lunch break which means im not working on TAOH until my lunch break is over, so im running thru another Q&A
Only diff is that you aren't asking me the questions, you're asking the characters of TAOH!!!! Ask whatever question you want and they'll answer it. Most likely.
Question what hero characters do yall want to be transferred from the white obelisk give details of what they look like im feeling like starting the transfering of the heros from the obelisk like villains three each…
Mine
Cooper, though in QOA only he can use his family’s powers with his implant his implants power is copying others power ls even if they dont have a implant he has smooth blonde hair and crystal blue eyes.
Draco, he has a power but he doesn’t really show it he hasn’t shown it in QOA yet but its like the four wyverns he can shoot out fire breath, poison breath, lightning breath, and ice breath he has emerald green eyes and red and black hair.
Fox, cooper sunhigh and moonhighs sister she has the power of strength, he has orange and black hair, on black colored eye and the other orange
-sylveevee
MOON!!!!!! I watched The Amazing Digital Circus finally!!! It was AWESOME!! It was kind of dark at some parts but other than that it was fine. Kane and Bubbles are so funny together. Raga the nice person, always trying to help Pomni. Pomni…is going rather mad I’m afraid tho. I think my favorite character is probably Jax. He’s so funny and just there for the fun. I wonder when episode three is coming out….
-SunnyFox57
Sunnyfox, the Engrammic Matrix is an important part of the Ark lore as it holds all the memories, body shapes, languages and race of every person inside it. It’s what the original Arks used and it controlled the spawn of humans on the Arks and a similar version was made for the Genesis Ship and it maintained their diversity of eras (which unusually didn’t work for Aberration). It was their cloning system and maintained all of the clones through the implants. If you want to learn more about the Engrammic Matrix, there’s an Ark wiki on wiki.gg and a decommissioned fandom version that have lore pages, and a YouTuber called NeddytheNoodle did several Lore videos on most of the Ark lore.
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
Hi guys, I’ve posted my version of the draft model (which you can’t adVOTEkate for) so you may read it if you want. It’s been a while since I’ve touched one of these… it was fun.
Sylveevee I forgot to mention it but I thought that Queen Syl’s elemental ball was literally a ball made of element, like the material. I didn’t think it would be like the four elements (five apparently). Anyways if that’s the case, it might give Queen June a little bit of trouble, but Queen June is still an excellent fighter, even without her fire powers (lore). She also has some strong attacks because she used to be in tennis, if I remember correctly. Water also doesn’t put out fire so easily, it’s a bit more complicated than that since the most effective way to get rid of fire would be to get rid of the oxygen (which is why fire extinguishers are not just water, there’s special mist that stops oxygen or smth like that). Anyways I’d think it’d be a tough battle between the two of them, but I’m not too sure who would win because we haven’t really seen Queen Syl’s elemental ball. Oh yeah btw thunder is the sound, I think you are talking about lightning which is the actual bolt. Thunder is the sound lightning makes.
SunnyFox, if I were you I wouldn’t give that GitezGood ideas. They seem like a freeloader from their message wording. It doesn’t even seem as if they’ve read your story, they just want some ideas for their YT channel thing (And free advertising since they want you to advertise their stuff in your stories for some reason.. Yuck, I hate freeloaders). But do whatever you want, it’s your life, you make your own choices.
Anyway, Chapter 6 of The Lost World was really cool! These dynamics are really awesome and there’s a very clear contrast between Cedric and Oliver. Even though they are friends they are opposites. Cedric doesn’t pay attention in class while Oliver does, which I think is pretty interesting since you’d expect both of them wouldn’t. Anyway, looks like they’re being transported, uh oh.. To the lost world! Probably. Is it Rowan? Or some other mischievous scheme? Anyway it also makes me wonder what this Lost World is.
Alrightie! I’mma go over the draft models now. (by the way MGG, a draft model is a plan for something. So the draft models are plans for how the story will go, and people just continue off it. As for why you never were introduced to them in the 5th grade, I think it’s more of a teacher-exclusive thing, since no one else did them in my school). I’ll be going alphabetically.
MGG I really liked your draft model version! I liked how Jimmy got his toy back, it was a pretty realistic way and it really teaches the readers you don’t have to steal your stuff back, and how you gotta take accountability for your actions. I also liked Jimmy’s reason of wanting Spidey back for Show and Tell, a detail which the other draft models didn’t really go over was the Show and Tell thing. There were a few grammar errors but it’s not really that big a deal (you really gotta fix the whole to and too thing tho), but other then that good stuff!
Sunny your draft model version was also really good! I liked Britney’s interactions with Jimmy in this one, something the other draft models didn’t have. I also liked Jimmy’s action, it really shows he wants that toy back. The way Jimmy also earned his toy back was pretty wholesome and sweet, that was also a realistic alternative and in the end both Mr. Hsu and Jimmy got what they wanted. I also thought it was pretty funny how Britney has gum under her desk, she’s not a very good kid even though she’s snitching on others. There were very little grammatical errors, but once again it’s not that big of a deal, although I think Jimmy’s relief that he got his toy back could have been highlighted a bit more since he went through many challenges to get it back. Anyway, good stuff!
Sylveevee, your draft model was really fun! Reading Jimmy’s crazy Mission Impossible plan was a lot of fun and I enjoyed how it went. I also liked the detail of Jimmy making a replica Spider Man to throw Mr. Hsu off was a pretty good plan, although I think it could have been covered how Jimmy managed to make it. Like did he use clay or gum or some random stuff he found lying around? That process would make this story even better. Anyway the flow was really good and it was nice reading this version, if I could adVOTEkate one of my favorites for this draft model it’d probably be yours since it was so much (but I can’t adVOTEkate so).
Anyways voting begins you can also leave feedback for the others if you want.
OMG, I’m laughing so hard. Ben, how have you NEVER met a blonde?!?! How many people do you see on a daily basis? Bruh…LOL. How…? OMG. 😆😆. LOL, I don’t know why it’s so funny to me…
Anyways…(*tries to stifle laughs*)…I posted my draft ending. It’s kind of cheesy but it was fun.
-SunnyFox57 is dying of laughter.
From Ben
MGG, to answer your question:
1. You create your own draft model, yes, so everyone's version is separate and solo from one another. If you mean create your own draft model as in story prompt, no (not yet at least). Im suppling them from donations.
2. Rules? Idk what this means. I already provided some for when you finish off the rest of the Draft Model.
3. Voting commences once everyone is done with their individual draft models but if someone takes too long we just vote without them. Youll still be able to finish a draft model if you take too long and publish it, and it will still be archived but you cant win Writer of the Week for that week and you gotta wait for your next chance in the next week
Ben,
Yay. I think it’s a great idea. I’ve never heard of a Draft Model, even when I was in fifth grade. I don’t know why though, Language Arts was my favorite subject, aside from History, not a fan of mathematics or science. (Why I am talking about this, I’m getting off subject) anyway I have a few questions about it. These are questions about things I either missed in your message or don’t understand.
Q#1: Do we each create our own Draft Model, or just finish off where others left off, like in a collab?
Q#2: Are there any other specific rules to creating a Draft Model?
Q#3: When will the voting commence? Is it once everyone is done with the stories?
That’s all I could think of right now…
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
From Ben
Break-it i send it right now
Sunny, Chapter 2 of The Lost World was amazing! And pretty funny too. Looks like the school idea was taken into account, nice! Looks like Cedric’s getting shipped off, poor dude! (not really tho he burned his parents’ statue down..) And yes, basically just continue writing off the draft. Think of it like TOT.
Wyvernian, here’s the cast of villains that were picked and not brought in yet:
TAOH:
Queen June: This fiery woman has the implant attribute to control the flames (and also possesses immunity to it). Violent and vicious, merciless and cruel, she has no bounds to her immorality. She possesses no sentimental attachments to anyone except her dearest love, Ben (even though it’s extremely one sided). June will do anything to win his heart over, even if it means killing everyone she knows or taking over the world. If only she knew her efforts were in vain. She has orange-brown hair, very athletically toned, and wears red flak armor. Her preferred weapon is a pike (but as the story progresses, she starts to use the trident more often). She will be pulled out of TAOH after Chris is taken in, so Chapter 62, and at the moment she has not actually killed anyone.
Jerry: A deranged sadistic man who enjoys a good fight. His implant attribute allows him to blood bend. Jeez. His blood manipulation works in a very odd way; the weaker the individual is, the more blood he is allowed to control. While he prefers to dominate those around him and hurt and kill as many people as he can, good or evil, he holds high respect for those who are willing to fight back. He may even submit his loyalty to those stronger than him (which he did to Loki), but that would only be possible if he were defeated in battle. He has dead hair, doesn’t wear a shirt, and wears gray cloth pants and goes around bare foot. He also has a golden tooth which was knocked out in a fight with Maddox (who will soon be retconned into Chloe). He wears a gold cross necklace, but he isn’t Christian himself??? Lore reason. Uhh, and he will be pulled out of TAOH after he agreed to hunt down Bob and Alan for Loki, so right about after Chapter 59. At the moment he has killed numerous people, around a handful.
ROTP
Michael. Acts haughty and thinks he’s better than everyone else. Michael has dirt brown hair that is kneaded into very tight curly knots and has a horribly trimmed goatee. He likes to wear a tie suit. He will occasionally assume something that isn’t true.For example, in TTDOT, he accused Aragorn of keeping Emma away from him. Which is not true. Emma hates him. He’s desperately in love with Emma, who is revolted by him. He hates Aragorn and Aragorn hates him.
Willow. Has black hair usually up in a ponytail, green eyes, and tanned skin. Her implant gives her the ability to go through solid objects. She CANNOT go through people tho. She doesn’t like anyone who gets in her way. she is very mean when provoked.
PC
First nominee, the alpha dragon, he’s a dragon boss but due to Salizars hacking he was created as an unstoppable alpha, he’s not much bigger than the boss he’s just more durable and has a large radius in his fire breath, this may seem OP but one of Ben’s can bloodbend, Syls characters can shapeshift and then there’s Aragorn and Sheeri’s ice and Nova.. point is we’re no stranger to OP in TOT 😆. His colors are black with red accents. Also his behavior is not as hot headed as you’d think, he knows he’s deadly so he’s pretty cocky but not boasty about it more the calm deadly type, also he can be incredibly loyal as show with Salizar, who he sees as his father. Also when he comes to TOT he should strangle Drain and say, “YOU, where is father! Where are those creatures who bested me!” And then Drain explains he was probably killed and that they are from the same universe, also Drains main motive in HoP was to kill the alpha dragon and drink his blood to get element mutated, so don’t get to attached to the dragon because Drain may or may not betray him.. but probably may.
And for my second nominee.. I don’t have many villains in HoP and most of the PoP characters are still alive and it would be confusing to use them, also Vinestrap is lame 😂 so I’m going with his son, PRINCE CALDREN, Caldren is huge, he is dumb as a bag of rocks, classic muscly idiot. Also he is a hybrid of gigantopithicus and dinopithicus because his father wanted control over the gigantopithicus territory, again I say, Vinestrap sucks 😐 anyway, he doesn’t have much character development as he was only in one fight but he will be great comic relief.
And neither of my characters should be in a coma like Drain because though they were killed, they were killed in battle, not impaled suddenly by a stalactite so it wasn’t as much of a shock.
Ultimus + Journey
King Titan from Ultimus in miniature form (definitely want his appearance to be something like Ezma’s transformation in Emperor’s New Grove for him going from his normal size to mini size.) and Sig from Journey as my two villains. Also maybe the King Titan’s mini size shouldn’t be too small, maybe something like somewhere between Raptor size or so around 8-10 feet tall? He should also still keep extreme strength for his size too but nothing like his form in game or lore. Maybe like the strength of a Rex or at most Giga. And one other thing to add about Sig, her character likes to lure characters and play the trickster before she gets brutal. Similar to Loki, but again more brutal.
Sig, and she is a Reaper Queen. Like most of her species speak in her universe, she can only speak through telepathically implanting her thoughts into others thoughts, she can also read thoughts and understands normal speech as well. She’s a brutal character with a tendency of using her tail’s grabbing abilities to hold onto her victims as she brutally beats them into the ground or uses it to hold them as she uses her jaws to tear them apart. Her name might change when we finally get to her part in the story of Journey. But I think she would be a good choice.
HC
Lieutenant Felswand: Not the brightest bloke, not quite Evil Mastermind tier, but he’s still a minor villain!
The Dragon: A large dragon from the Fjordur Ark. Brought into The Aberration Ark by the boss Edmund Rockwell. Definitely a minor villain, due to its small amount of screen time.
Sir Edmund Rockwell: The main antagonist of Hope’s Cry. A 19th century chemist from London. (Read the lore, I’m not in the mood to explain his backstory) I ran out villains, so I had to use him. Much like the King Titan in PrimalApex’s story, Rockwell will be minimized! He will appear in a human form in TOT.
ok goodbye