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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
From Ben
Lunar DFL we've already filled you in on it but we've talked faster than we ever have before so you might have to dig in for a few days.
Sunny Chapter 1 was amazing! Cedric sounds like a troublemaker just like James, I wonder why he's like this. For fun because hes bored? Or smth else? And PAUL is back! Once again he never fails to be cool. And the girl at the end is probably the baby in Prologue 1 right? Interesting how she has a foster father too who is probably up to some dubious plan. I wonder what her medallion power is and where the maid even got it from.
Also she has green eyes according to the Prologue.. im going to have to study that. Okay seeya around!
Sunnyfox, The Unforgettable Ride was a copy and paste of The Obelisk. It was never mentioned if they were doing it on purpose as a copy, paste or trying to make their own story and used The Obelisk as inspiration without putting any effort into trying to change it. Long story short, Moon got very upset with someone taking her story that she was working so hard on and making it into a bad version of her story. And after some time, the writer decided to discontinue the story.
-PrimalApex:)
Also, I am about to unashamedly advertise that PD in Haze dye is making a survival game called Exoplanet. And has asked for people’s ideas for creatures to put in this game. Need I say more, help PD out by giving some creature ideas if you haven’t!!
-an unashamed PrimalApex:)
MrGhost, chapter 25 of TOT was funny, that was definitely early HoP Ping, he’s so dumb 😂 so he woke up on Pandora and decided “you know what I’m gonna have a villain arc!” And then spent however many days finding random cardboard and making cutouts 🤣
That’s honestly such a HoP Ping thing to do, is the second book he’s less dumb but in HoP he was completely stupid. Also did you read the first few chapters or did you just guess all that stuff? Last thing, I think I’ll keep Ping in, just because him and Steve could be hilarious together and he’s technically the one who accidentally killed Drain, idk if that will make him want revenge or if he’ll be scared of Ping.. hmm
Oh the only criticisms I had was that Fort Olympia, was the Olympus tribes base, and they were like a mega tribe, the base it most of the island. And also Nova and Emerald know Ping they probably would’ve asked him more questions, but I can do that in my next chapter. I loved the part where he’s like “im a villain now!” And she just tosses him behind her 😂
-Wyvernian
Sylveevee, chapter 24 probably will come out in the next couple days. I’m sorry everyone for taking so long. Just trying to figure out what else I should do in the chapter besides just fixing the plane. Finally got something and writing it down currently.
Sunnyfox, AHH!!!! Prologue for your new book is already out!!!! I wasn’t expecting that!!! I read it and it was great!!! That maid/nurse is despicable!!! Putting a baby in any dumpster is atrocious!!! Oh of course the stealing the baby and lying about her dying is bad, but what monster puts a baby in a dumpster!!!lol. I really enjoyed it!! I can’t wait for chapter one!!!!
U.N.T!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Sunnyfox, Thank You for answering my questions!!! I’m glad you finished your series and glad to find out some of the behind the scenes stuff with what you wrote!!! Also if you don’t have any ideas yet. Maybe just continue the universe. Just further into the future and not the Shadow Phoenix Kingdom as the main focus. You created many more possibilities with how you wrote it and can continue the story for a while longer. I mean we delve into one kingdom mainly and a second kingdom just barely in your series. The possibilities with the other kingdoms are pretty vast, with this universe’s story just beginning, literally with only the fifth generation of Riddles coming to be!! Rivalries can form, new wars, or possible outside forces or new kingdoms with what Tom did giving others the powers of the medallions in implants. Your universe can continue on if you feel it’s the best idea. But it’s up to you if you think you want to continue or do something else!!
Bob The Survivor, yeah!!! Moon made it earlier this month and we’ve been trying to get use to it with adding our own pages and discussing random things and story related stuff on there. It’s kinda nice to get some of the discussions that literally just overwhelmed Achatina and drowned out a lot of people. Also I read your last two chapters!!! They were very good!!! I can’t wait for your next story in June!!!!
Sylveevee, I’ve been waiting a bit to read your stories because I was and still am reading several different stories and trying to make sure I don’t overwhelm myself with all the information and getting it all jumbled up or forget some important information. But since TROTP ended, I’m gonna get started on reading your stories now!!! Both QOA and TPL!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Greetings Bob, I’m doing good today!! We’ve never met before however. My name is PrimalApex (not the original Apex, I didn’t know there was another Apex until a few months ago) but you can call me Apex or Primal if you prefer, whichever one you feel comfortable using. I have been a reader of the Achatina Community for over a year now and have been a writer for a few months.
I do have to say that it isn’t your responsibility to apologize for the entire discord for their actions and you are only responsible for your actions on there. As it is every members responsibility for their actions on there, if they feel like they need to apologize for their actions then they can. If they don’t, they shouldn’t. It isn’t right to forcefully make someone apologize if they don’t feel like they should. And yes, I do want to strive for peace in the dex community!! And I hope we can!!! I do think the peace negotiations should happen here on the dex and not a different platform as this is neutral ground for everyone is a writer on here and it should be for all writers to see. I also hope you can stay around for a while and see some of what we’ve been writing!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Dear anonymous writer, I would agree with you that they cherry picked a single message if it wasn’t a full conversation on the disc. between DTG and another writer about how the writers on the dex either write like ten year olds and write worse than in back in 2020 in DTG’s eyes or in the other writer’s pov don’t even write and spout rubbish. Now there IS blatant context for that conversation and it can’t be taken in any other way. Saying that we write horribly or that we write nonsense. This offends me not for my own sake because I really don’t care what people say about my stories, but for the other writers who I have had the pleasure of reading their stories and have had the pleasure of writing alongside with. Because they are good, no great writers. And they don’t deserve being talked behind their backs. If DTG and this other writer really felt like this. Just tell us, in a way that is kind. Give us pointers on what we should fix in our writing skills, encourage those who are actually writing good stories or are having a difficult time. And give us valid reasons why they think what they said. But they didn’t, they went to discord and hid their thoughts about us. I also think it’s shameful that they use 10 year olds as an example. Now I don’t know if theirs any 10 year old writers here, but I hope they aren’t discouraged from this. I feel that we have a responsibility to help encourage young writers and help them grow in their writing and not discourage them from writing altogether. And I’m sorry, I don’t want to argue nor fight. But I feel there is something here that needs to be shown in the light. Now I’m not saying everyone there is like this and thinks like this. But I also have a question for you, what community looks like a healthier option to you? A community that uses profanity and talks M rated content and never seems to write here anymore with their Ark stories; or a community that encourages others to write, stands up for those who are taking fire from others, doesn’t use profanity or talk M rated content by choice and continues writing there Ark stories. Please give me an answer on this topic. Because I’d really like to know what you think about this. As for me, I can say I think this is the healthier option. Again, I don’t want to fight or argue so please don’t take this personally against you. I don’t know what you speak on there or how you act and you seem genuinely kind. But to those who bad mouthed writers on here is something I felt was wrong and I’m glad someone revealed it.
Until Next Time,
-PrimalApex:)
Mystery person who is blaming FanFictioners for nothing,
Maybe the person who ‘attacked your discord’ didn’t make you look bad. Maybe you look bad bc you joined a rude dc server! Maybe you should stop making friends with people like DTG… None of us want to fight. If you had just stopped talking behind our backs, this never would have happened. Again none of us want to fight. This is a peaceful community if you don’t like it, you can go back to DTG’s rude dc. Thank you for your time and patience.
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
“Nash led the amarg’s into the swamp… and they never left.” Sounds like something out of a horror film. Chapter 52 of PoP was great Wyvernian!!! The Amarga’s being a psychopathic cult was amazing!! And Nash’s plan really worked well!!! I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next one!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Wow, Pasta Man is Manticore?! I did not see that coming. Also they’re using a lot of profanity. 😕. Idk why but every time I see profanity I think of that scene in Avengers: Age of Ultron when Tony Stark says a curse word and Captain America says “Language!” and I want to say “Language!” Anyways…looks like Manticore is not what he seems. Oh and btw Shadow and WhiteWinter Tiger are the same person. (Unless they’re just two people using the same phone) I once used the more by this author feature on one of Shadow’s messages and I found that out. Either that or she/he was being impersonated. Anyways…cya around! 😉
-SunnyFox57