Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Ben, looking at some of the story. I don’t know what to think exactly. While I’m not really sure if it’s a coincidence or was intentional. It’s strange either way. But I’m not sure if the story is continuing though. The person hasn’t written anything more since November, which doesn’t mean anything but not even a response to why they haven’t makes me wonder.
Wyvernian, I played a little bit of Minecraft. Wasn’t much of a fan of it (maybe because I was an extremely late comer to the game, like last year.). I prefer more of a grind or challenge in a survival game like Ark and Grounded. It’s a fun game, just not my style of survival. I’m glad that they’re finally giving the dog an upgrade. I might go and give it a try when it comes out.
Well, Until next time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Ben, I read chapter 33. I really enjoyed it!!! I was shocked what Skyler almost did!!! I could understand panicking like she did, but I wouldn’t throw an Armed Grenade towards an area where people are!!! I can’t wait for the next one in aquatic!! Until next time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Sunnyfox, I gathered some questions I thought of that might help give you some ideas for your future plans of THOM. If they don’t. I’m sorry for asking so many questions. Most of my questions I have right now are questions about characters from the last two stories we haven’t seen yet or haven’t shown up outside of a flashback yet in the story so far.
*Pulls out a giant scroll and begins to read from it.
What happened to Jack? Did he get captured by the British? And if so, is he a soldier for them? If not, Did he get captured by Tom at one point? Is he on the run? Considering we know his abilities have some connection with rapid regeneration, he would become extremely valuable to both Tom’s bounty hunter team and the British.
What about Emma and Andrew? Where are they now? Are they looking for her brothers and sister(since Jay went to who knows where, Josephina and Jaquin were taken by Tom and we still aren’t sure what happened to Jack.)? Do they have their own kids with their own medallions?
What about Jenny? Will we see more of her? Will she try to help her niece and nephews?
What happened to Cole after TTOTSP? His character story besides the Riddle Family leaves the most room for more character development and character growth. Will he return in THOM?
How are Brutus and Peggy able to speak?(Okay, this one isn’t really that much of necessary part to explain in the plot. But it’s still an interesting question.).
Will the Buckleshoots return?
Did Elizabeth live through the explosion of the bomb? (Again, this one doesn’t really feel for me like it could give much to the plot, but you never know.)
How did Jay meet Sylvia? And what is her ability? Is it useful for the predicament they are in right now?
These are most of the questions I have right now about the story. I hope some of these, if not most will be helpful for you to extend your plot. If not, I’ll try to come up with some ideas for you if needed.
Until next time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Ben I’m glad u liked those chapters! Also I mislabeled some?! Again?! I’m sorry guys. Also Ben the line “you’ll always be my little girl” was also referring to the song Aragorn sang to Josephina. Anyways… I can’t wait for chapter thirty three if ur story! #FF4L. ✌️
-SunnyFox57
PrimalApex, I’m open to hearing any of ur ideas! If anyone has any ideas I will be happy to see them! Also yeah…I was having trouble getting into Dododex earlier too! It just kept loading and loading and loading and loading and…we’ll u get the point.
Ben, I think chapter thirty two was AWESOME! It’s cool how detective Warren did that. Do we need to respond to him?
-SunnyFox57
From Ben
Sunny youre back! Well thats relieving to hear I thought something worrying happened to you. I hope you had an amazing vacation and that your busy days havent made you too stressed. Thanks so much for saying that about all of us, the past 3 months have felt like a year. Whew, its been a while. And to think Ive been here since October..
And youre right. ALL of us are going to finish our stories, we're gonna make it to finished story land. We have to, otherwise it would be for nothing. We need to!
Thats my promise. And Im not giving up on my story, no not yet. Ive already made plans for the next 30 chapters or so (up to Chapter 60), ill be making Chapter 31 as soon as i can.
We will finish our stories. And I will too. Because after all I have a promise to keep to her.
PS: Chapter 8 was so amazing Sunny! So Paul was a peacekeeper but he must have run away and settled down... but the shadowy figure kills him and his wife? Thats cruel. The wife Sarah did not even do anything! Im thinking this shadowy figure is out to hunt the rest of the peacekeepers, maybe even the pirates too or the Brits. Also that moment where he feels bad for the wife is kind of sad but its NOT COOL TO KILL INNOCENTS.
But the babys still alive, I bet this baby may play a role in the future.
Sometimes I wish I could just plug my phone into my brain and upload the entire story in a couple hours.. but then the government could go all order 66 on me so I’ll pass.. 😆 it’s so annoying to know what’s gonna happen wile nobody else nows and you can’t tell anyone!
Also I’m going to find time to read your stories. Idk where they start though, Ben yours is backwards through flyers right? And apexes is… ya idk..
-Wyvernain
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