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Ben,
When I first saw that you said chapter 21 was 2700 words. I was shocked!!! I thought mine were getting lengthy at 500 to 1000 per chapter depending upon if it had two parts. But after reading it I can see why. I enjoyed seeing what each character’s special ability was in the Book Club. I can’t wait for Chapter 22!!!! Until next time!!!
Oh, P.S for everyone. I need to know everyone’s opinion on how I could make my name a little more unique in some way or if I should add on to my name a little bit or a lot. If you want to know why. Look at Orc Coloring under newest at the true story of “A Tale of Two Apexes”.
-Apex:)
Hey everyone, just Ben here. So many interesting stories to read. And thanks for wishing me happy birthday, everyone, I appreciate it.
With questions regarding my story, Sunny, I am sure you can figure out who Tiffany and Skyler is… although connecting the dots is hard and picking up on assuming details may be hard, once it is revealed, and if you go back to read the text, you’ll realize it was there all along! Although you’ll also need to know who those people relating to the Dex but that’s not the point.
GhostGamer, woo hoo, you released Chap 18! This was an interesting chapter to read. And Buddy’s dream/vision actually freaked me out. Judging from the looks of it the ending of Tortuga wouldn’t be going very smoothly… Boy was I wrong and things were even worse (i’ll go over that later). Hmm, I wonder what this white room is? And I wonder if Buddy and Jake will ever meet? And finally I wonder why Mrs. Kong seems so nice? I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again the Kongs seem pretty chill. They seem like fun to hang out with. And hey, thanks for the shoutman man, I appreciate it!
Sandmaster, Chapter 11 from you was good! It was a lot of fun seeing the conversations between everyone, and it seems Fuzzball can finally prove himself to his family. His family will soon see Fuzzball’s more than a pushover! He can be something greater, he can transform! Also that Mosasaurus ship is really cool, LOL. One more question, if you would choose to answer it or not because of spoilers, I am wondering what map this story takes place in? I was thinking Genesis at first because of the Feroxes, but it mentions the Redwoods and corrupted creatures… perhaps it doesn’t take place on any map at all. Well thats up to you!
Sunny… Damn things have taken things for the worst. So much of the cast is dead it’s phenomenal, and it all happened because the British thought Tortuga was a Pirate Outpost! Damn it if only they had fallen back and just considered the fact that MAYBE there are other civilizations out there, this wouldn’t be a problem! But NO. Here we are, and now I have to type this message out! Darn it, things could have been different if… yk what it’s whatever. It is what it is (i cannot fathom what just happened).
Jeez, I guess… this is The Terrible Demise of Tortuga… We should have seen it coming…
But… So many things were revealed in the past few chapters. Rachelle snuck onto the pirates’ ships, and is probably going to do some SERIOUS damage (guess she’s going to fulfill her role as peacekeeper, as Helen did). Jay can probably open portals with his medallion, very sick power by the way, Jay. Jack probably has something to do with vitality, he wasn’t dead just yet after all that. I’m glad for the guy. He’s smart and doesn’t deserve to kick the bucket just yet. And… Dude Tom is going to help Jaquin and Josephina?? That’s actually pretty sweet. I knew Tom wasn’t necessarily a villain, just a lost soul in search of revenge (very sad), but I know he may do some good. Although I give props to the fiery creature for saving Jaquin and Josephina. It was probably one of Aaron’s creatures, rushing in to save one more person before they bit the dust. Honestly now that I think of it it’s even more heartbreaking for Aaron’s creatures. What about the dogs? What about Ol’ Betsy who’s been around since Aaron was a kid? And finally… Woo hoo! The creepazoid mayors are KILLED by a shadowy mysterious figure… whom I do not know, I don’t know who it could be this time. All the hints I have are that 1. They’re pretty damn skilled with a sword, 2. They know Michael was the mayor, so they had to be a resident of the town, and 3. They HATE the mayors and someone else? The shadowy figure did mention “all of them”, so there’s still more retribution that needs to be handed out.
Well, that was pretty sad ending… Tragic. I’ll be around for the prequel, (whew, that means I get to see these characters again) and of course, the other books that may be made. I’m glad I’ve been around since the first few chapters. This was a very crazy roller coaster, I can’t believe it’s over already!!
Welp. That’s all for now. See you on the flip side.
Hey guys, sorry for the delay. The next chapter of Ark Tales will be out soon. Just been busy with other stuff. Btw what is all this talk about a Dododex book club? If there is one, I would really like to join!
Pls respond quickly,
—MrDemonRealz— (You can meet me on Templars Mats LvL 100 on Fridays, if it’s on)
Happy Birthday Ben! 🥳🥳. I hope you had a great birthday with your friends and family! I just read chapter 20.5 and I’m curious about that girl that Ben made the forever promise to. I wonder if she’ll show up later. I’m sorry that Tortuga was so sad but there is a reason that I called it “the terrible demise of Tortuga”. And no unfortunately Ol’Betsy won’t eat the mayors. LOL. But there will be other books in this series after all this is only the second book. Thanks for the suggestions, I’ll try to improve more on my dramaticness. Anyway…bye and happy birthday!
-SunnyFox57.
From Ben
Hey everyone, I wasn’t on yesterday because it was my birthday (yipee), but I was able to churn out a chapter. Chapter 20.5 is in Griffin, it’s a semi-chapterish sorta but it’s still canon to the storyline, so go ahead and read it if you will!
SunnyFox you don’t need to keep working on A Hyaenodon’s Scars if you have run out of ideas, no one’s forcing you to work on it anyway. Take a break from it or cancel it altogether, that’s up to you!
Wow a lot of things I read. I’ll start with Sandmaster’s “Overseer” story first. Woah, this was some fun to read! You have so many unique ideas and I like the idea that the corrupted creatures make it sort of like a zombie apocalypse, fun! The Gigantopithecus Camp was cool, and Strongjaw was pretty dope, and man Blizzard’s pretty cool even if he didn’t survive long… It’s a shame he kicked the bucket so soon. Anyway I’m wondering what the Carno Investigation Agency or whatever it was called want with Blizzard’s body… Element? Anyway they seem like interesting villains, especially the Carcharodontosaurus, Ares. I wonder who would win in a fight, Ares or Strongjaw? Well it’s all a pretty cool story, so continue writing it, I’ll read it! My favorite character though right now is probably Scar, he’s pretty cool and loyal to his Fuzzball friend. My favorite scene is the part where Fuzzball transforms into his big form against the griffin, I could really feel the emotional intensity of it all.
Moving on to Tortuga; yep, you’re banned Michael. You’re banned from the redemption list. Very immature little runt, he will pay for what he did. Although I really hope it isn’t the end for those two. Something tells me it may not be with Aragorn’s medallion. (How come he doesn’t have a shadow? I really can’t tell… Clones? Nah, that sounds implausible). Actually tragic chapter today. And right after Emma and Andrew got married too, this is actually the saddest thing ever. Definitely on the same level of sad as Moonbeam’s death. If not worse. I actually recoiled in my seat when they got married. Then I sunk in my seat when I got to Chapter 30. Yep today was a sad day for Tortuga. And the British are here as they always are. Things seem grim. Hopefully Aaron’s animals take care of the problem, let’s have Ol’ Betsy eat Mr. Creepazoid and his brothers! Okay now i’m still sad anyway. Darn it. I can’t believe we’re nearing the end of Tortuga… it only feels like yesterday I read the first chapter and after reading a few more I just got more and more excited. Well I did remember you saying it’s part of a series, so I’ll be looking out for that.
SunnyFox, Well for some things that could have been improved… I think when Michael discovered his shadow you should have separated that one line from the rest of the paragraph to make it more dramatic. Dramatization really sets the tone, so when it’s just with the rest of the paragraph like that it sounds anticlimactic. If there’s any big reveals in the future, make sure to take that into consideration!
Sandmaster, some criticism for you would be to add more depth to relationships or friendships or family in the future. After Blizzard dies, Fuzzball cries a little, which there’s nothing wrong with, but the only connection they have is that Blizzard is his cousin, and they had only met for a little bit and Fuzzball barely remembered him. It didn’t make sense at first, so you could’ve had it that 1. Fuzzball knows Blizzard very well, or 2. Fuzzball doesn’t cry about his death, or 3. Have them have more scenes together and conversations so that the impact is more noticeable.
Well, guess that’s all for today. And before I leave off, thanks for reading my story pals, I didn’t think you’d read it either Moon, and thanks. I would say my story is less of an Ark Story and more of a Dod0Dex Story.
Later