Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Ben,
I love your story! If I could rate it it would be: 16/10! As I’ve said before, I don’t like Skylar! She seems like the type when given a grenade she would throw it at a man named Rick…(OH WAIT SHE IS!!!) And btw I just posted next chapter! Loved chapter 34!
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
PrimalApex,
I’m really excited about Ultimus! It seems very intriguing! And probably the reason why I beat the Megapithecus so easy is bc I’m on mobile… 😬 Anyway…. I loved the prologue for your story! And do you have any other stories you’ve written cause I would love too read them! And next chapter coming soon!
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
P.S. I beat the Megapithecus again yesterday!
Sunnyfox, I very much enjoyed chapter 16 and 17!!! So Josephina’s power is animal communication or controlling animals!!! Willow definitely one of the biggest jerks in this story. And I wonder what Danial thinks about Willow’s assumption? I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Ben, you brought up a lot of interesting questions I’ve thought about but never really asked.
For starters, I think currently Samuel is neutral (though he likes to lean to the dark side of neutral more than the light side and I could see him going bad more than I do seeing him going good.). Like, he doesn’t share information and he makes people more out to be pawns or pieces than human beings. And while it’s somewhat of a good idea. It’s usually not how the good guys think in a story. And he seems to only do things that only benefit his plan. I don’t what to make of him.
Skyler idea of how where their at is based on The Obelisk seems to me like… a misguided idea. There seems to me that theirs no real evidence towards her theory. So right now I’m gonna say she’s not right on it. This might change with time but right now it’s this answer.
Ben’s flower might be easily answered by Ben’s ability of plant manipulation and keeps it alive. But I’m not sure on that.
Ben stated that he did write a story, but never finished it. Could this mean he’s the current Ben that’s writing this story? Plausible. However it might be more likely that he’s talking about a different story that he written long before AoH (in their universe, just like our universe). So maybe in the AoH it’s past Ben going through current Ben’s story on The Island.
If anyone’s confused on my last answer, you’re not the only one.
Also I meant to say dodo and not star in my previous post. So what I meant is Star is the dodo from Dodo Tales or a copy of it at least.
I think that’s it for now, Until next time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Ben, here are some of my answers to ur questions. Whether or not they are correct idk.
I think Samuel is good but I don’t know what exactly he’s planning.
If Skylar is correct than I think “the five” are probably Neddy, Ruby, Aurora, Samuel and Star/Nova. It’s funny because there are three women and two men in Moon’s story the Obelisk and in TA:OH there are three women and two men. Star/Nova, Neddy,Ruby, Samuel, and Aurora. Spark, Rust, Nyx, Forest, and Crimson. See what I mean? Coincidental?
I think Ben’s flower isn’t dying bc it has some sort of regenerative thingy in it.
But Ben you are creating a story. It’s just…ur in it. There’s not a really easy for you write a story in a story if ur writing the story.
Cya around!
-SunnyFox57.
From Ben
Howzit going? Awesome two new chapters for House of Madness are out! Sunny you did a great job with these two! So it seems Daniel and his team are also in on the fact that Hailey is getting mind wiped, except Willow? Seems like it to me. Also she and Daniel are together… cute! I really really really hope Tom doesn’t do anything bad to them that could ruin their relationship (plz NOT today 🙏). Also WOAH, that’s Josephina’s power! And Jaquin… jeez reality warping?!! That’s super over powered to be honest he’d probably beat Tom easily. And I think Josephina’s power is controlling animals. Awesome. Hey these powers remind me of the Encanto powers. Anyway, looking back at it, is that why an animal leapt in front of Josephina and Jaquin back at Tortuga?!?! Seems like it to me…
Well, looking at my notes, the insanity starts at Chapter 40 of Arks Over Heaven. To prepare, perhaps we should look at a few details. I’m not giving them out for free though. Here’s a few details that may have been overlooked.
Detail 1: Chapter 20.5 and 30.5 are connected, and 30.5 explains some things that may not make sense in 20.5 Hint: Eyes
Detail 2: Some things in the sky seem off place, particularly in Chapter 24 and Chapter 33. Hint: Pteranodons
Detail 3: Alan is an oddity, especially when encountering Bob. Something’s off. Especially since he looks like someone else Bob knows. Additionally who sent him is already known. Hint: Namesake
Detail 4: Someone in Chapter 29 is taken prisoner by Queen June. But this certain someone should not be here. Looking back at Chapter 20.5 will give a certain reminder. Hint: Moving Day
Detail 5: Ben has not stayed at Terran High (high school) for its entire duration. There’s a reason why. Heavily hinted at in Chapter 20.5, and 30.5. Hint: Violence
Detail 6: The names of certain schools and companies directly tie with Ark’s in-game lore (Chapter 32).
Detail 7: Lost memories are exactly that. We can’t tell the exact details. Sometimes their faces don’t even look real. As if their faces are covered with white blobs. Chapter 23, 20.5, and 30.5 are slightly connected.
Detail 8: Messages, messages, messages, how to tame this how to tame that. The background behind the ARK in this story goes much deeper than you think. Chapter 32 has something interesting…
Detail 9: Mr. Mo has some secrets, some very very big secrets… Chapter 26 has something.
Detail 10: RED HAZE
You don’t really need to look. It doesn’t matter if you do or you don’t. But who knows? You might find something completely new. Every single chapter usually contains at least one or two hints or details that pertain to future chapters or past. Foreshadowing also. So yeah. Be wary! Or not, doesn’t matter. And here’s a few questions about my story, I guess if you want to answer them. I’m mostly curious about these since these are rarely discussed.
What are your thoughts on Samuel? Is he good or bad, or neutral? Is what he’s doing the right thing? What’s his whole deal?
Skyler claims that since the island they’re on seems to be based off a book known as The Obelisk, in this book five heroes save the realm. She thinks five heroes will save them from doom in reality. Do you think she’s right, and if she is, who could the five heroes be?
How come Ben’s flower has not died since its introduction and how is it capable of bringing memories to others?
If stories such as Dodo Tales and The Obelisk and The Terrible Demise of Tortuga are canon in Arks Over Heaven and created by their respective authors, then what about Ben? Wouldn’t he have created a story too?
That’s all I can think of. See you next time!
Ben, yeah I agree with you on that. It doesn’t justify anything he did, is doing or is going to do. It still doesn’t mean that I don’t feel bad for him. As I’ve said I don’t have sympathy for him. Also I thought the same thing about Peggy and Brutus, but Marvelo says something to Brutus about his stomach in The Team. So then I thinking they may be Rocket-like experiments. And it wasn’t normal since in TTDOT showed of a Shadowdilo that didn’t have speaking abilities.
Sunnyfox, thank you for letting me ask the questions! I’m very glad that some of them were helpful to you!!! Also I just read Chapter 15. It was very good!!! And that’s what Jaron’s ability is!!!! I couldn’t figure it out for the longest time!!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
I think that’s it for now, Until next time!!!
Ima announce something ima post another story(I don’t mind working on lots stories as long as I have ideas)
But here’s a new one coming “Fate's Final Test“ based off of my scrapped fanfic turned into a new one and what I meant by taking a break is taking a break from story making
-angel
Ben, looking at some of the story. I don’t know what to think exactly. While I’m not really sure if it’s a coincidence or was intentional. It’s strange either way. But I’m not sure if the story is continuing though. The person hasn’t written anything more since November, which doesn’t mean anything but not even a response to why they haven’t makes me wonder.
Wyvernian, I played a little bit of Minecraft. Wasn’t much of a fan of it (maybe because I was an extremely late comer to the game, like last year.). I prefer more of a grind or challenge in a survival game like Ark and Grounded. It’s a fun game, just not my style of survival. I’m glad that they’re finally giving the dog an upgrade. I might go and give it a try when it comes out.
Well, Until next time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
“Where am I? The island? Right, Rockwell… ugh! Well now I need to adventure through the ARK! Now to get farming!” *trips on branch* what a- *looks up seeing a thyla, staring down on me* “hey… that’s absolutely not horrifically scary!” *a snail glides over the ground, without a care in the world* “you’ll be my pet!” I scream, as I run away into the sun set with my achatina under my arm… adventure awaits!!! *under the night, a man in golden armor and a royalty colored cape walk up to a bit of a yellow raincoat on the muddy ground* “send me the Wolves!” A pack of dire wolves walk up to the man. He lets them smell the bit of clothing, before they start chasing after the owner of the clothes…
After the baby is born, I keep putting berries in the inventory until it can hold 6.0. Then I take out the berries and put in a sweet cake. The baby will eat about every 15 to 20 minutes our time. Put the baby in maewing saddle and use snow owl for healing. Do not put cakes in maewing. Happy Arking!
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