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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
There will not be a sequel to the Obelisk, so Apex can really do whatever they (She? He?) want in this AU/sequel of theirs! I’m all for it.
I was originally going to write a novella with Needle’s and Ripper’s perspective, specifically taking place at the same time as the Obelisk and all the way to the end. I do not believe I will, however. At least not for a long time, when I’m working on three stories already not including The Obelisk’s edited version. So, for all of you, here is what happened to Ripper!
‘Forest looked up one of the giant rock cliffs and noticed something strange dripping down the stone. He went on, feeling unnerved as the sun disappeared and the sky darkened.’
This is from like chapter 80 or 90 something right before they find Nyx. Forest notices a liquid dripping down from one of the giant cliffs of stone.
Ight, here you go. Jethezzar and Ripper met as planned, after Ripper had had a chance to fight her brother and be beaten again. Needles had warned her to not do whatever she was planning (He had found a message to him from Peeri telling him that Peeri was dead, and warning him about Rippers motives and fate.) Ripper declines and runs away, telling Needles she can do what she wants and it’s all for the best.
She meets with Jethezzar. He’s figured out what she’s planning, and after a few moments of them talking Ripper stands behind him and lifts her talon to kill him, but he whirls and grabs her by the wrist, and they have a little scuffle. He drives Ripper backwards towards the cliff and she’s shoved straight through a sharp cleft of rock. It stabs her through the heart. Jethezzar leaves her to die with a final little message of taunt, and flies off to finish his own mission.
Thus the end of Ripper.
—Moon
from Ben
ok so it seems a lot of you want Maddox to be okay. So guess what im going to do! heheehe
Anyway Sunny Teeny Tiny Island was really funny! Im guessing the "only Brutus and Peggie can talk as animals" got retconned, which is how the Titanomyra could talk. Either that, or the heat got to Elizabeth and Eric. Well im really enjoying the more ark dinos/creatures being put in the series (something TTDOT and TTTOSP kind of lacked). Well it wouldnt have mattered either way because the story is good with or without! Alright later.
Wyvernian, it isn’t a true sequel to The Obelisk, as I’ve said before it’s a sort of-sequel. And yes, it’s an alternate timeline or universe to The Obelisk. (As I said when I first asked if I could, I always want Moon to keep the ability for Moon to write a true sequel or sequels and never wanted to stop that.). It will involve a lot of the same characters and will have new characters.
I released a teaser a while ago revealing one of the new characters in my story. If you’re interested, it’s in Achatina and you’d probably want to either google Journey Teaser or look at more by this author on the Dododex page.
Until Next Time!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
Im so excited to see what you have in store for us in Journey PrimalApex! The idea of a story being built upon and having its universe expanded by its fans sounds like such a cool idea. It reminds me a lot of The Red Pike. But this is on an even bigger level considering the length of The Obelisk, and PrimalApex it seems your chapter lengths are a lot longer than the average. Well ill be waiting! And to answer your question, TAOH will have two parts. Part 1 was to just introduce characters and buildup for Part 2, which will introduce very little characters, but now everything is heading straight for the climax. Im hoping Part 2 will also be 50 chapters in length, for a nice perfect 100.
Sunny I read the last 2 chapters and they were great! Once again I feel very bad for Jack, hes even thinking Cyra is Jay! Well once Elizabeth and Eric find Jack he wont feel so glum now, right? Somehow those 2 have escaped! (British security must be very poor). I wonder what small island those two are going to. Maybe its the Dark Phoenix Kingdom, maybe its an entirely diff one. Maybe its the remains of Tortuga. Who knows.. i dont know.
Wyvernian i really enjoyed seeing the Ferox Queen's transformation in Chapter 35! Even though it was short, its definitely not as short as the amount of time the Penguins have to escape impending doom! And PrimalApex is right, maybe they shouldnt have mocked her...
Laters i gotta lock in for Chapter 50
Ben, I read chapter 49!!! I enjoyed it very much!!! So Mr. Ma is killing people at night in their tribe and taking their implants!!! Like a serial killer!!! I hope Maddox will be okay!! I can’t wait for Chapter 50!!! So how many parts will there be to TAOH?
Until Next Time!!
-PrimalApex:)
Wyvernian, I read chapter 35!! You think it all fun and games laughing at the Ferox, until you realize what it can do with a piece of element… I feel bad for what Ron and Pengujas. But they shouldn’t have started laughing. I enjoyed it very much!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Until Next Time!!
-PrimalApex:)
Okay, Journey is coming out next week with three chapters from Monday to Friday with Prologue, Chapter One and Two. With two chapters a week coming out after that until chapter twenty where it will go down to once a week.
(Don’t read on if you want to learn about the story by chapter and not by the differences)
For those who don’t read on, that’s it for now about Journey!!
Until Next Time!!
-PrimalApex:)
Okay so what’s different between Journey and The Obelisk. One thing, the rune’s ending at The Obelisk. Instead of being thrown from Jethezzar’s claws, landing on Asgardian ground and turning off once Jethezzar is defeated. It simply disappears after Jethezzar threw it… this should be the only thing that’s different from the story of the Obelisk and Journey. No characters that are dead in the story The Obelisk will be making a miraculous return at the start of Journey. If a character hasn’t been determined to be dead or alive, they may, or may not return.
Well that’s it for now about Journey!!
Until Next Time!!
-PrimalApex:)
Ben, I can agree that super speed can be very OP depending on the origin story or how their super speed works like with the DC speed force speedsters (Flash, Zoom, Savitar, Reverse Flash). But again that does depend on how their super speed works. Characters like Quicksilver and Speed from the MCU (not X-Men) or Dash from the Incredibles only have their speed and aren’t nearly as OP as other speedsters. So again, it really depends on what is all comes with the power of super speed with the character.
Until Next Time!!
-PrimalApex:)
Ben, yes it is rather ironic that Jack can save himself but not others. 😏. Anyways…I read ur newest chapter!!! Poor Loki he doesn’t want to kill people but he has to. (Kinda reminds me of some of my characters) And what was Mr. Mo/ Ma doing with the knife? Curiouser and curiouser. I researched was the Chinese name Ma means and it literally means horse. Idk if that’s correct but…that’s what it said. Anyways…I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
-SunnyFox57
Bob, I’m gonna say that the shadowy figure is either an alpha blood wyvern or the crystal wyvern queen. I just read through all that chapters except 12! I enjoyed it and can’t wait for next chapter!!!
Sunnyfox, I read your two newest chapters!!! I feel bad for Jack. He’s at complete rock bottom with all that’s happened to him. I really enjoyed your chapters!!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Ben, I read chapter 48!! I’m beginning to wonder what Mr. Ma’s ability is? And I’m very curious what he was going to do with the knife? I very much enjoyed reading it!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!! And I looked at your hint. There are too many meanings for some of them, but one in Mo did catch my attention…
PD, Good to see you in the Achatina section!!! I’ve been reading your stories and enjoying them very much!!!! I can’t wait for the next chapters!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
Sunny Chapters 8-10 were pretty good, youre on a roll! So Cyra is a speedster.. we still dont know Cyrus power though. I think. Super speeds a really wonky but OP power, hopefully its executed correctly in your story! (its very very strong.. so if there are regulations to how the super speed works there wont be issues). If someone is super fast, theyd presumably be unstoppable.. since theyre too fast to be attacked. Wonder how fast Cyra is. It says shes faster than speed of light, but maybe thats just an exaggeration. Would that even be possible? eh, dont wanna question the logistics of it.
Chapter 9 and 10 were really sad. Jack obviously blames himself for Elizabeth and Eric's "death", and probably his little siblings too after what Jay said to him. I also didnt know he had a stuttering problem when he was young, really adds to his character! Jack's def been through a lot, and i think its ironic how his power allows himself to heal and regenerate at all times, but he cant protect and keep others safe. Its twisted in a way. I hope you go over this duality in a future chapter.
Alright seeya. Working on 49zzzz
Sunnyfox I read chapter 8 of TDP!!! Cyra’s a speedster!!! Cyrus and Cyra are pretty funny together with their bantering. I really enjoyed it!!! I can’t wait for the next one!!!!
Wyvernian, yeah, it’s definitely changed a lot compared to ASE. I couldn’t tell where I was at from what I saw when I spawned in!!! I’m definitely going to have fun taming the Fasolasuchus and Oasisaur!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
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