Dododex

ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion

From Ben

Sunny Chapters 8-10 were pretty good, youre on a roll! So Cyra is a speedster.. we still dont know Cyrus power though. I think. Super speeds a really wonky but OP power, hopefully its executed correctly in your story! (its very very strong.. so if there are regulations to how the super speed works there wont be issues). If someone is super fast, theyd presumably be unstoppable.. since theyre too fast to be attacked. Wonder how fast Cyra is. It says shes faster than speed of light, but maybe thats just an exaggeration. Would that even be possible? eh, dont wanna question the logistics of it.

Chapter 9 and 10 were really sad. Jack obviously blames himself for Elizabeth and Eric's "death", and probably his little siblings too after what Jay said to him. I also didnt know he had a stuttering problem when he was young, really adds to his character! Jack's def been through a lot, and i think its ironic how his power allows himself to heal and regenerate at all times, but he cant protect and keep others safe. Its twisted in a way. I hope you go over this duality in a future chapter.

Alright seeya. Working on 49zzzz