Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Sunnyfox, so I never answered this question about my favorite character in ROTPs. I think it has to be between Cyra or Josephina. Also I just realized something. If Josephina possibly shares a small amount of her brother’s ability. That’s means she might not be as crazy as we think. As in the first chapter of THOM, she talks to a reflection herself in a mirror and the reflection talks back. Now this could mean she’s crazy, but could also mean that when she was younger tapped into her brother’s power and caused her reflection in that mirror to come to live as it’s own version of Josephina or Hailey.
-PrimalApex:)
MGG, ooh two dragons in TOT.. they should be rivals, although, the alpha dragon would probably be stronger than a regular dragon. also if I remember correctly I believe the Alpha dragons “name” or what Salizar called him at least was Apex, (no correlation to PrimalApex.) I don’t remember for sure but that’s probably important.. I’ll go look through my old chapters.
Also, an alternate timeline Rockwell, hmm that will be kinda weird, especially for Sylveevees group and for him if he goes to Rockwells innards.. which is a part of Gen 2s TOT fragments.. I think we need a bit more context for this Rockwell, is he the variant from your story? Is he obsessed with element yet? Because those are very important for his behavior.
-Wyvernian
Ben, I read chapter 65 of TAOH!!!! It was really good!!! The Mosasaur attacking the Plesiosaur was awesome!!! And John basically has the Admin Command Dotame on to whatever he touches!!! Also he turns into Arnold Schwarzenegger with the Artifact of the Brute!!! Cool, I was wondering what the Brute was going to do!!! I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Sunnyfox, I think it’s a fan that said #Sunnyfox. Implying that other writers should be more like you and encourage other writers to continue writing. It’s honestly really cool!!!
Mr.GhostGamer, so is Rockwell going to retain his memories from Hope’s Cry and events of him being a monster or is it going to be an older version of Rockwell like from before he injected himself with liquid element (or Edmundium as he calls it) or Rockwell from the Animated Series? Just curious!!
Well, Until Next Time!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Here you go!
Ben and TCC,
My three villains I will add are the following:
Lieutenant Felswand: Not the brightest bloke, not quite Evil Mastermind tier, but he’s still a minor villain!
The Dragon: A large dragon from the Fjordur Ark. Brought into The Aberration Ark by the boss Edmund Rockwell. Definitely a minor villain, due to its small amount of screen time.
Sir Edmund Rockwell: The main antagonist of Hope’s Cry. A 19th century chemist from London. (Read the lore, I’m not in the mood to explain his backstory) I ran out villains, so I had to use him. Much like the King Titan in PrimalApex’s story, Rockwell will be minimized! He will appear in a human form in TOT.
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
FoR sOmE rEaSoN tHiS tIp NeEdS mOrE wOrDs!!!!!!!!!
Im going to pick three villains i have said them in my chapter:
Pat, hates sylveevee more than anything for banning him from sylveevees kingdom he has orange hair and green eyes, and wears clothes made from green and black fabric pulled out from a blackhole like sylveevee and her group she was with at the beginning.
Ok next is doctor bubba, was killed by cooper in battle he is a enemy of sylveevee, sylveevee had hated doctor bubba ever since he betrayed her but thanks to him sylveevee got her powers from where he took her when she was unconscious, he has blonde hair and light blue eyes wears a lab coat and it has dinosaur blood stains on it rises from the dead and brought to TOT
Next and last one milo, sunhigh fears milo after milo tried to kill sunhigh he has bright blue eyes and black hair pulled from a blackhole like pat (also milo wears blue and black fabric)
Thats all the villain characters im going to use for ToT .
-slyveevee
Three Villains!!! Well dang, I have a few villains; but I only feel two are good enough for TOT. I’m definitely having the King Titan from Ultimus in miniature form (definitely want his appearance to be something like Ezma’s transformation in Emperor’s New Grove for him going from his normal size to mini size.) and Sig from Journey as my two villains. Also maybe the King Titan’s mini size shouldn’t be too small, maybe something like somewhere between Raptor size or so around 8-10 feet tall? He should also still keep extreme strength for his size too but nothing like his form in game or lore. Maybe like the strength of a Rex or at most Giga. And one other thing to add about Sig, her character likes to lure characters and play the trickster before she gets brutal. Similar to Loki, but again more brutal.
-PrimalApex:)
Ok I have chosen my other two antagonists, also I have a suggestion, for lore reasons if any of the characters are brought back from the dead and had a traumatic death they should be in a coma like Drain, it only makes sense.
First nominee, the alpha dragon, he’s a dragon boss but due to Salizars hacking he was created as an unstoppable alpha, he’s not much bigger than the boss he’s just more durable and has a large radius in his fire breath, this may seem OP but one of Ben’s can bloodbend, Syls characters can shapeshift and then there’s Aragorn and Sheeri’s ice and Nova.. point is we’re no stranger to OP in TOT 😆. His colors are black with red accents. Also his behavior is not as hot headed as you’d think, he knows he’s deadly so he’s pretty cocky but not boasty about it more the calm deadly type, also he can be incredibly loyal as show with Salizar, who he sees as his father. Also when he comes to TOT he should strangle Drain and say, “YOU, where is father! Where are those creatures who bested me!” And then Drain explains he was probably killed and that they are from the same universe, also Drains main motive in HoP was to kill the alpha dragon and drink his blood to get element mutated, so don’t get to attached to the dragon because Drain may or may not betray him.. but probably may.
And for my second nominee.. I don’t have many villains in HoP and most of the PoP characters are still alive and it would be confusing to use them, also Vinestrap is lame 😂 so I’m going with his son, PRINCE CALDREN, Caldren is huge, he is dumb as a bag of rocks, classic muscly idiot. Also he is a hybrid of gigantopithicus and dinopithicus because his father wanted control over the gigantopithicus territory, again I say, Vinestrap sucks 😐 anyway, he doesn’t have much character development as he was only in one fight but he will be great comic relief.
And neither of my characters should be in a coma like Drain because though they were killed, they were killed in battle, not impaled suddenly by a stalactite so it wasn’t as much of a shock.
Also, Ben, I read the chapter with lil Jack, I hate that twerp.. can we please kill him off 😂 jk but seriously he’s so annoying.
-Wyvernain
From Ben
Anyway, Sylveevee I really liked Chapter 20! It was pretty nice and stuff. Only complaint I didn’t have was the bar fight felt kind of pointless, since it was not really described in detail. It would have been a good way to show Aragorn starting to slowly warm up to Sylveevee, or maybe in the bar fight the groups could also work together to keep the peace. Other then that, good stuff, I hope you enjoy the new writing process of using Notes though. Trust me it’s a lot better than just typing it all out on the Dex. Imagine you press Back… then you gotta restart (rip Wyvernian).
PrimalApex I enjoyed Chapter 10 thoroughly! Andrew once again is showing off his survival skills. Chapter 10 did an amazing job at portraying how messed up the Earth became during Extinction. I wonder where Andrew’s going to end up next. Oh we can only wonder! He’s probably going to have a run in with an Extinction creature soon though, let’s see how he fares against that! Or maybe he’ll meet one of the new characters? Idk, but i cant wait! Also that Journey villain sounds really cool. But wait, a Reaper? Does that mean Forest or the others might end up in Aberration ??? 😲
Wyvernian, yes, of course you can. It could be like a flashback scene or smth if I am writing the encounter though. Most likely I’m going to write about the TAOH group and Ultimus group traveling, and then afterwards the second half of Chapter 21 will be detailing the Black Obelisk encounter. Wyvernian the villains won’t show up in their home arks like the last time. I’m thinking the reason for this is because the reason why the starting characters showed up was because of random chance. But when you use the obelisk to bring them in, it makes them show up at the obelisk base instead, kind of like when you transfer creatures in the original game. And if there is a fight I won’t kill anyone off. The one who is defeated will most likely flee. Although I will say now that not everyone will come out of the portal Endgame style at once, that’s just over kill… you’ll see when it comes out.
Sunny I loved Chapter 18 and 19! I really hope Josephina and Jaquin can pull this off. I’m more worried about Jaquin than Josephina though. We know Tom definitely won’t kill her because she looks so much like Leah, but Tom couldn’t care less about Jaquin.. Maybe only keep him alive because his power is so strong. But hey, Tom’s conquest has taken a hit he can’t give implants to any more people!
And Shadowy Figure… It’s getting close I can feel it. I wonder what town this is? River Bend City??? That would be kind of lit, visiting his father and mother’s old roots. Maybe he’d learn more about their past.
But wait a moment. The Shadowy Figure is in the Jungle Phoenix Kingdom the first second, following Jack the next.. That doesn’t make any sense. He can’t just be moving back and forth like that.
Oh. THAT is why, huh? Shadow manipulation?
BUT IT CANT BE ARAGORN BECAUSE TOM REFERRED TO HIM AS AN OLD FRIEND AND ARAGORN IS NOT HIS OLD FRIEND AND ALSO ARAGORN COULD NOT HAVE KNOWN ABOUT THE BRITISH ATTACKS HE DIED BEFORE THEY CAME AND THE TARGETS
Still think its Aaron. Too much evidence against Aragorn, too much for Aaron.
I mean yeah Shadowy Figure said stuff about not trusting people too early, but that could very well be Aaron.
By the way will we ever know what the fiery creature was that saved Josephina and Jaquin?
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