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ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion
From Ben
Anyway, Sylveevee I really liked Chapter 20! It was pretty nice and stuff. Only complaint I didn’t have was the bar fight felt kind of pointless, since it was not really described in detail. It would have been a good way to show Aragorn starting to slowly warm up to Sylveevee, or maybe in the bar fight the groups could also work together to keep the peace. Other then that, good stuff, I hope you enjoy the new writing process of using Notes though. Trust me it’s a lot better than just typing it all out on the Dex. Imagine you press Back… then you gotta restart (rip Wyvernian).
PrimalApex I enjoyed Chapter 10 thoroughly! Andrew once again is showing off his survival skills. Chapter 10 did an amazing job at portraying how messed up the Earth became during Extinction. I wonder where Andrew’s going to end up next. Oh we can only wonder! He’s probably going to have a run in with an Extinction creature soon though, let’s see how he fares against that! Or maybe he’ll meet one of the new characters? Idk, but i cant wait! Also that Journey villain sounds really cool. But wait, a Reaper? Does that mean Forest or the others might end up in Aberration ??? 😲
Wyvernian, yes, of course you can. It could be like a flashback scene or smth if I am writing the encounter though. Most likely I’m going to write about the TAOH group and Ultimus group traveling, and then afterwards the second half of Chapter 21 will be detailing the Black Obelisk encounter. Wyvernian the villains won’t show up in their home arks like the last time. I’m thinking the reason for this is because the reason why the starting characters showed up was because of random chance. But when you use the obelisk to bring them in, it makes them show up at the obelisk base instead, kind of like when you transfer creatures in the original game. And if there is a fight I won’t kill anyone off. The one who is defeated will most likely flee. Although I will say now that not everyone will come out of the portal Endgame style at once, that’s just over kill… you’ll see when it comes out.
Sunny I loved Chapter 18 and 19! I really hope Josephina and Jaquin can pull this off. I’m more worried about Jaquin than Josephina though. We know Tom definitely won’t kill her because she looks so much like Leah, but Tom couldn’t care less about Jaquin.. Maybe only keep him alive because his power is so strong. But hey, Tom’s conquest has taken a hit he can’t give implants to any more people!
And Shadowy Figure… It’s getting close I can feel it. I wonder what town this is? River Bend City??? That would be kind of lit, visiting his father and mother’s old roots. Maybe he’d learn more about their past.
But wait a moment. The Shadowy Figure is in the Jungle Phoenix Kingdom the first second, following Jack the next.. That doesn’t make any sense. He can’t just be moving back and forth like that.
Oh. THAT is why, huh? Shadow manipulation?
BUT IT CANT BE ARAGORN BECAUSE TOM REFERRED TO HIM AS AN OLD FRIEND AND ARAGORN IS NOT HIS OLD FRIEND AND ALSO ARAGORN COULD NOT HAVE KNOWN ABOUT THE BRITISH ATTACKS HE DIED BEFORE THEY CAME AND THE TARGETS
Still think its Aaron. Too much evidence against Aragorn, too much for Aaron.
I mean yeah Shadowy Figure said stuff about not trusting people too early, but that could very well be Aaron.
By the way will we ever know what the fiery creature was that saved Josephina and Jaquin?