Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
From Ben
Wow so many chapters have come out!
PrimalApex, Chapter 11 was really good! Poor Andrew who has no company except Reuben and the mysterious herbivore who we don’t know what species is yet. This was a very realistic take on the apocalypse genre, since most people go kinda crazy without human interaction for a while. What’s worse, being stuck on the ARKs, or being stuck down on the Earth with no one but yourself? Honestly I’d say the latter. At least the former there’s a chance at human interaction and making friends and allies. It’s something to keep yourself distracted from, even if death is apparent. Maybe that’s just a grim way of thinking.
Sylveevee, Chapter 18 was also really amazing! This fight between the Dragon and all the groups is really awesome! I’m glad Carnilius has decided to put the difference aside and work with the other to take down the Dragon boss. I wonder where it came from anyway, and where Milo and Pat found it. So I guess those two turned their backs on the rebel raiders now! Well I can’t wait for what happens next. Fox is also a really cool character, I can’t wait to see what his/her power is (i forgot if Fox is a boy or a girl). Chapter 19 was also awesome. I really liked the crazy beam coming out of Moonhigh and Sunhigh, that was great. So the Dragon has been defeated, but the final boss is the Overseer? I would have thought it was Rockwell, since we saw one of his tentacles once. Well, I liked it. I hope Skyocean gets some more screen time in the future though, since we haven’t seen much of him yet.
Also you are almost about to graduate to middle school, very impressive. I am sure you will get all A’s and B’s in your middle school, you can do it! And yes, I think The Phantom Legends sounds like a good name. But you choose a name that sounds the most fitting. What will it be about? Anyway, I’m also glad writing has helped you overcome some of your irl issues. I’m glad we are all friends here. Well enjoy the summer is to come, middle school will be a big change, and all of us give you our blessings to stay fortunate and strong to fight through the next school year!
Wyvernian, TOT Chapter 23 was very awesome! That encounter with the feral Rock Drakes was really cool and the engravings on the wall of all of their stories was awesome as well! It was really nice reading this chapter. I also really liked Chapter 53 of PoP. The Ferox Temple sounds like such a cool idea, it’s like a rehabilitation center. I like it just as much as the crazy barbarian Amargasaurus, I love some of the way the species in Pandora Chronicles are portrayed. I wonder who Frozt was talking about by the “boss”. Hopefully they make it out safe and sound.
Sunny, I can’t believe this is the end of the series already! Tom’s been turned back to the good side, but we lost a lot of people on the way. Seeing James die a second time was very heartbreaking, but it’d be selfish to keep him alive. After all, he was afraid to come back. I can’t believe Cyrus died too. Poor guy, he tried his hardest. Jack couldn’t even remember his name in time. But it was a really heartwarming ending, I really liked it. Five months in the making… goodness that’s fast. That’s a month per story. So, reflecting on the completion of the story, how do you feel? And what do you think you’re going to do next? Take a break? Keep working on a story set in the same universe but not really going to be a sequel or prequel? Write something else?
Well this was a lot. I’ll see you all around! Have a great day/night everyone!
Thanks for the compliment wyvern the reason I started to write a story is because i love reading one day i thought while scrolling through dododex ‘i love reading would i be happy writing my own story’ i thought about it for a while one day it came to me that when i was scrolling through stories i decided to make stories on dododex because it looked like fun but really it helps me with some trust issues because i’ve been bullied a lot irl and on ark survival evolved on some servers on my switch but when I figured out that when i read it helps me calm down i tried to do a story and it helps me calm down as well but also when i write stories on here i feel like im getting some anger issues down as well but really i write QOA because it inspires me to get rid of trust issues if you read QOA sylveevee has some trust issues but in TOT she doesn’t has as many as in QOA.
-sylveevee
Oh and the prologue for Clans was pretty cool, Moon!! Poor theri. And chapter one was pretty cool as well! Dusk was encouraging Finch even when she failed. Overall the prologue and chapter one was AWESOME!! It was fast and very thrilling! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!
-SunnyFox57
Sunnyfox, I read chapter 22 of TOT!!! It was really good!!!! I love how all our stories are in Mr. Mo’s office!!! Interesting that Emma didn’t decide to open it TTDOT out of curiosity. And on they will go to the Mayor’s Mansion!! I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
I also read chapter 26 and 27!!!!!! They were also really good!!!! And the Shadowy Figure is… James Aragorn Riddle!!! I knew it!!! Out of the two suspects I had, James was the one I felt was going to turn out to be the Shadowy Figure. That was a really sad and heartbreaking , yet heartwarming and needed moment. And now it’s Time showdown of epic proportions!!!! I really enjoyed it!!!! And I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
Ben, I’ll be praying for you and I hope you do well on your exams!!! It’s okay if you don’t get the time you write as much as you normally do!!!
MrGhostGamer, I can’t wait to read those upcoming chapters!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Just a heads up im making another story because im feeling like doing multiple one is QOA when its my turn im going to do my chapter of ToT and the next is the one im going to be the new one im going to do is going to be the third one cause why not also making the characters on gacha life before I decide on the name it any mame ideas?
-sylveevee
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