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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Ooooooh that was a good one! Chapter 54 is out and not to self promote but it’s got everything, arguments, backstory for Cinder, epic battles! That was seriously really cool to write. Hope you guys enjoy it! Probably one of the more brutal ones too.. but I won’t spoil.
-Wyvernian
Thx again Ben! Also the sketch your doing can u make me have a mask on with blue lighting across the mask and the background is black? I know it sounds weird but that’s just how I like it, I mostly put a mask on , on every single avatar. Even in Roblox. And can u also add a Aidias space sort of shirt? Srry if I sound sarcastic, if it’s too much it’s fine. And thx for reading my story Ben! And this is my last message. Well see ya guys tomorrow!
- A tired SandmasterXD
From Ben
Hey guys, Im making a sketch of all the Achatina writers from 2023 to 2024! Theyre going to be chilling around a campfire or smth like that.. lol! You can choose a small little trinket and ill give it to the sketched version of you (it can be related to your story or just smth else). The sketch wont be bat insane good, but other better drawers can add onto it or improve it once it comes out.
Wyvernian, I’m going to guess… Caesar encounters Salizar for the first time in HoP? Eh, that’s not really funny, it’s cool but I don’t remember it being funny (it probably was). I’m bad at guessing, well I can’t wait to see it I bet it will look great!
Sylveevee I checked out the Wordscapes game I think it’d be easy to get to Level 50, it might be a great way of communication since Roblox and Fandom are off the table for some. I’m at Level 27 right now (it’s kind of hard to explain but they are like progressive game levels). There are answer keys online you can use to speedrun to Level 50, but this could be a good option for sure.
Sunny have you considered writing a slice of life-type story similar to TTDOT or TTOTSP? Honestly TTDOT and TTOTSP was a lot of fun to read (in my opinion). Maybe I just really like slice of life. But it’d be cool to see a dinosaur related story with elements similar to the former. There’s a lot of potential for characters and maybe it could be based off descendents or ancestors of the main characters of ROTP. Idk, maybe a side story?
PrimalApex I really liked Chapter 11, it’s nice to see that Forest has some compassion for this new companion Nightfall that he helped take the leeches off and didn’t just make a run for the obelisk. He really is a nice fellow. Also interesting to know Nightfall has that sort of genetic disorder… I’m glad they didn’t run into the Rhynio though, that would not have been good news. Can’t wait to see what happens next! (and also what happened to the rest of the Five)
I fixed the Sandmaster page, Sandmaster, I put Jan 21 because that was your first message in Achatina but I kinda forgot Overseer was made before that, so, yeah. I really liked your recent chapters tho! Chapter 20 was nice and it wasn’t afraid to pull the stops and get someone hurt. Fuzzball’s going to need to try harder if he’s going to protect the people around him, but I know he can do it. Chapter 4 of ATLWCS was awesome too, it really conveyed the hopelessness that Max and Andrew were feeling at the moment when the Krauts came. Chaos all around, maybe Artois can help them? It was just a misunderstanding anyway, they’re all on the ARK, right?
Well i think thats all. Seeya around!
From Ben
Hi Sandmaster! Welcome back! Glad to see you back, its been a while. You do have a page on the Fandom tho, its just not in the Fanfictioners category yet because it wasnt working. Yeah. Well cant wait to see the next chapters come out! Nothing much happened while you were gone. Well, MGG finished Hope's Cry, Sunny finished her series, Moon finished The Obelisk and is working on a new stories, PrimalApex is working on a new story, Sylveevee is here and is writing a story too, and yeahhh thats about it so not much.
MGG, that history document thingie was made like alll the way back in 2022, so its pretty outdated. Idk why there have to be multiple phases for one year when it can just be divided into:
2020 Era - OG's Era
2021 Era - Standstill Era
2022 Era - Inactivity Era
2023 Era - Achatina Era
2024 Era - Modern Day Era
Wyvernian, you are correct, One Who Reads (Calem) and Reader are two diff people. PrimalApex joined the community on the first of March, and you joined around the end of March. Reader joined at the beginning of June, but Calem joined late April. SpecialRaptor joined at the end of May. So youre actually one of the earlier writers of 2023. Sandmaster joined Achatina in early 2024 (Jan), and MGG and Sunny both joined at the same time in Dec 2023, because, yk, they use the same device so.. Bob the Survivor joined a little after I did around November.
But yeah Syl and Angel joined around Feb - Mar 2024, making them the newer additions to our club. There were def other people like Aston (Mar 11) but they arent around anymore :(
But yes, I joined around with that message around end of May I believe. Then I dipped for sum reason and came back 5 months later with TAOH.. Funny thing is TAOH wasnt even conceptualized yet at the time of May. Only premise that would have stayed the same was the graduation ceremony. Also its kinda funny i left because i forgot about the app and because there was no newest filter so i srsly thought the community died as soon as I sent my message...
TTDOT starts in Achatina and is Alphabetical All but theres a repost in Allo of Prologue so you dont have to dig. Calem's story was called Teeth, Talons, and Tails, and SpecialRaptor's is called Jointed Mysteries.
But yeah, that certainly is a long time!
Hey guys, sry I’ve been long for so long. I was sort of busy, I also heard that we have our story in dododex stories wiki? I checked and my name wasn’t on there, sort of sad. So can anyone explain what has happen while I was gone? Thanks! I will also be posting two chapters. See ya guys!
-SandmasterXD
I also forgot to mention that Daniel and the rest of the team got sent to…solitary confinement, to pay for the crimes. Although technically they were all brainwashed except Marvelo. So……anyways I think I have a idea starting to form for my next book 🤔. Idk. I’m still brainstorming but I want it to be in the same universe as ROTP.
-SunnyFox57 is scheming….
Ok so, idk where TTDOT starts, I can’t remember.. that’s why I haven’t been reading it… but Moon started the obelisk in November 2022 and then five months later in march I started HoP, then in October TAOH started, I really thought Ben joined later, I guess a lot did happen in those few months, well a lot still does.. ohh now I remember, Ben came to Achatina asking how to get more ^s on TAOH and then we said “idk ours only have five..” and he left Achatina for a bit before coming back, That makes sense. And I don’t remember what the one who reads and Special raptors stories are called but I think special was here before me and TOWR was there a bit after me but before Ben. Reader And Moons biggest fan were there before me, MBF wasn’t really a writer, just a reader, she did make this one story using mostly emojis, it was funny 😂 anyway, dang.. it’s been a long time.. march 2023 to may 2024. 🥲
-Wyvernian
MGG, you also left out, Special raptor, Reader, the one who reads (I believe they are different people..) SpecialRaptor, umm I feel like there’s another but I can’t remember.. I don’t know exactly what “period” they all fit into, I joined almost a year into the obelisk, I just didn’t write for a while and my original name was MythWyvern until I thought of a better one.. so I think I would be the steep climb, I think Special, both of the Readers, Moon, Moons biggest fan (what ever happened to her I wonder..) and Me would be in the steep climb, or at least we were the active Achatina group at the time, oh was the other Sandmaster? I don’t remember when he showed up.. or you MMG, and then I think Apex showed up late “steep climb” or early in the next period, I honestly cant remember, when did you join Apex?? and then Ben around the same time, I think Bob and Sunny showed up a bit after that, though Bob could’ve been earlier, and then Angel and Sylveevee are the newest. (All of this is referring to when they started being active in Achatina, I could have missed a few people and some might be out of order, but this is the best list to my knowledge.)
-Wyvernain
From Ben
Thank you for answering my questions Sunny, now I know a bit more! The backstory to your story and why you made it is really cool and awesome.
Sylveevee I really liked the Prologue and Chapter 1 of The Phantom Legends, it has a really cool story so far! Mystery sounds like a cool character I wonder why they are doing all this evil. Although one suggestion I have is you did not have to add the descriptions to the races at the beginning of Chapter 1. You can explain it over time in the story and that will create mystery and intrigue for the races. Anyway cool idea so far, I do have some questions.
Are QOA and Phantom Legends going to be in the same universe/world?
Is there a reason for Broodmother, Dragon, and other bosses being on Aberration?
Cooper and Pat have implants, but do anyone else have it? Or is that a secret?
How is your day?
That’s all the questions I have. I’ll see you next time.
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