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Ben, yeah I picked those names for them bc they sound like they rhyme but are spelled differently. And it’s funny. And yeah they are Jay and Sylvia’s children. Cedric likes to pull pranks on them so they aren’t happy about him being at the Phoenix school with them. As for Rowan…😈.
-SunnyFox57
Ben so you know sylveevees elemental balls are made from the 5 elements fire, wind, earth, water, thunder she can also choose between the elements so she can do water and after she gets june wet thunder.. in my chapter i will introduce her elemental ball in it i might make her show it in my chapter also should the heros train and level up their powers? Idk.. learn more about eachother?
-sylveevee
From Ben
Sylveevee Queen Syl and Queen June might be on equal footing, but honestly it depends since we've only seen Queen Syl use her elemental balls once so we dont know how powerful it is. Also, Queen June's fire powers are very variable and she can create more than fireballs, so.. idk we just need to see Syls element power more often.
From Ben
Sunny Chapter 3 of TLW was really interesting! So I have a big feeling that Rowan is the girl in the first Prologue and at the end of Chapter 1. I bet she’s going to get involved with Cedric a lot of times at the Phoenix Academy. Also Leeli and Keeley are really funny names LOL. So these are probably Jay and Sylvia’s children then, right? They don’t seem to like Cedric a lot, but he’s probably going to mess with them during the school year anyway. This is going to be fun..
Wyvernian, TOT Chapter 29 was perfect! (even though you put it as 28 accidentally). Everything was set up great. The abstraction of the rest of the villains was also good. So I think pretty much all the villains have been abstracted, except for: Jerry, Lieutenant Felswand, and Prince Caldren. I think PrimalApex can just have it so that those two are already introduced in the next chapter or something, except Jerry. So the heroes are united, the villains are united, and Samuel has split off to do his own thing… awesome! I can’t wait to see this ultimate war apocalypse!
Also.. how are the residents of the Omega Timeline going to feel about this? I think it’d be interesting if there was a chapter with some of them. Maybe there are a few minor MINOR characters that were accidentally abstracted and just winged it and lived in TOT because they weren’t called to the mansion. I might write their perspective then, since I do have a plan..
If heroes can be abstracted, I think it’d be wise to go over the topic of if they should abstract more people or not
Anyway, e everything was awesome and i cant wait for the next few chapters! I also cant wait for the draft models Syl’s has come in and I’m waiting fo rmore
Chapter twenty nine of TOT was great Wyvernian!!! More villains got abstracted as well. And now most the groups are gathered at the white obelisk!! I can’t wait for the next chapter PrimalApex!!
Also I’m glad y’all enjoyed chapter two. Cedric is definitely going to be one of my favorite characters to write.
-SunnyFox57
Wyvernian, my two villains are the mini KT of Theri size, an egomaniac who hates his new size and after who knows how many years of existence is finally able to speak. He does had supernatural punches, but no where near his original power he had. And a telepathic reaper named Sig from future Journey, she can both implant her verbal thoughts into others minds and can read theirs. She’s malicious and loves to make people hurt for the fun of it. She loves to use her grabbing tail to hold her victims. I can’t wait to see your chapter!!!
Sunnyfox, chapter 2 of LW and chapter 28 of TOT were awesome!!!! Jack’s reaction to Cedric’s sarcasm was hilarious!!! And it looks like we’ve found out how they’re most likely to meet in this story with Cedric going to Phoenix school. I really enjoyed chapter two and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Aragorn’s reason for not trusting feels like what he would worry about. How you describe the Light Obelisk is amazing!!! And I think Arianna is definitely the most sensible in the QoA and ROTP group!!! I really enjoyed it!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
-PrimalApex:)
I’ve never really thought about what you look like Moon, honestly. For some reason I imagine you to have like bushy brown hair, (like Hermione Granger). I don’t know why. That and I think of the dragon, Moonflight. Also did you get your name idea from WoF? Just curious.✌️
-SunnyFox57
From Ben
The first draft model has released onto Dreadnoughtus! I can’t wait to see your submissions for this thing! Remember the rules for your story:
No “it was all just a dream” endings.
You don’t have to make it ARK related
No 18+ content (if it wasn’t obvious enough already)
No “script” stories
Try your best to follow the genre
HAVE FUN DONT STRESS ABOUT IT DONT GO TOO CRAZY AND WRITE A WHOLE TEN BOOKS ON IT PLEASE ITS MEANT FOR 5th GRADERS
Break-it okay if you aren’t moving your story that’s fine i’m still gonna read it anyway
Wyvernian ahh I see, okay that makes sense then. So it’s more of a hatred for humans thing rather than it being forced, got it!
Sylveevee, Chapter 22 was great! I can’t believe Pat still feels bad about the whole situation between him and Queen Syl. Can they get back together? Eh, probably not (he did try to kill her numerous times and she locked him up in a dungeon). But she can still forgive him. Hmm, but now Milo doesn’t trust him as much. That’s great! Now they might end up splitting off! That was good stuff, can’t wait to see the next chapter.
PrimalApex, Chapter 13 was awesome! So they were Corrupted Raptors. Well that makes sense considering we saw them in the last chapter. Anyway that was super suspenseful and I almost thought this was how Reuben was going to die. I wonder what that earthquake was though. Was it from a Titan or something? I don’t remember if titans could cause earthquakes. Well I can’t wait to see how Andrew takes these Corrupted Raptors down. I hope it doesn’t come with heavy sacrifices.
Sunny, Chapter 28 of TOT was amazing! I’m glad that both the ROTP groups and the QOA groups came together and put their differences aside in order to go home (Arianna really is the MVP). The description of the White Obelisk was also really cool, like how it was in Chapter 26. And ten cats?! That’s a lot!
I wonder what Wyvernian is going to do for Chapter 29, since right now nothing is really going on in the Pandora section (except for the wall engravings thing). Maybe they can go meet up with one of the other groups or something? Nothing’s really happening for them right now.
Anyway that was awesome. I’ll see ya around!
From Ben
The first draft model has released onto Dreadnoughtus! I can’t wait to see your submissions for this thing! Remember the rules for your story:
No “it was all just a dream” endings.
You don’t have to make it ARK related
No 18+ content (if it wasn’t obvious enough already)
No “script” stories
Try your best to follow the genre
HAVE FUN DONT STRESS ABOUT IT DONT GO TOO CRAZY AND WRITE A WHOLE TEN BOOKS ON IT PLEASE ITS MEANT FOR 5th GRADERS
Break-it okay if you aren’t moving your story that’s fine i’m still gonna read it anyway
Wyvernian ahh I see, okay that makes sense then. So it’s more of a hatred for humans thing rather than it being forced, got it!
Sylveevee, Chapter 22 was great! I can’t believe Pat still feels bad about the whole situation between him and Queen Syl. Can they get back together? Eh, probably not (he did try to kill her numerous times and she locked him up in a dungeon). But she can still forgive him. Hmm, but now Milo doesn’t trust him as much. That’s great! Now they might end up splitting off! That was good stuff, can’t wait to see the next chapter.
PrimalApex, Chapter 13 was awesome! So they were Corrupted Raptors. Well that makes sense considering we saw them in the last chapter. Anyway that was super suspenseful and I almost thought this was how Reuben was going to die. I wonder what that earthquake was though. Was it from a Titan or something? I don’t remember if titans could cause earthquakes. Well I can’t wait to see how Andrew takes these Corrupted Raptors down. I hope it doesn’t come with heavy sacrifices.
Sunny, Chapter 28 of TOT was amazing! I’m glad that both the ROTP groups and the QOA groups came together and put their differences aside in order to go home (Arianna really is the MVP). The description of the White Obelisk was also really cool, like how it was in Chapter 26. And ten cats?! That’s a lot!
I wonder what Wyvernian is going to do for Chapter 29, since right now nothing is really going on in the Pandora section (except for the wall engravings thing). Maybe they can go meet up with one of the other groups or something? Nothing’s really happening for them right now.
Anyway that was awesome. I’ll see ya around!
Ben
*Shrugs* well at least if SoR is in the ocean no one will try and claim it. “Utimus” is on awesome story right now. I’m on chapter 9 right now. It was kinda sad with Andrew’s parents going through the pain of letting their son cryogenically freeze but thats what a true parent should be like. Anything for there son. So um I hope nobody minds if I don’t move SoR. This community is an amazing place and I hope it doesn’t collapse like the sliver dye
-Break-it The Final Witness
From Ben
Sylveevee, Samuel's eyes dont have a confirmed eye color in TAOH because most characters have brown eyes. (9/10 people have brown eyes in the world). However, the KM describes him to have soulless eyes. So his eyes should be gray. If theyre said to be brown in TAOH ignore that (eye colors the one detail that usually doesnt matter in TAOH)
Idk what eyecilor Skyocean is so idk
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