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ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion

From Ben

Sunny Chapter 3 of TLW was really interesting! So I have a big feeling that Rowan is the girl in the first Prologue and at the end of Chapter 1. I bet she’s going to get involved with Cedric a lot of times at the Phoenix Academy. Also Leeli and Keeley are really funny names LOL. So these are probably Jay and Sylvia’s children then, right? They don’t seem to like Cedric a lot, but he’s probably going to mess with them during the school year anyway. This is going to be fun..

Wyvernian, TOT Chapter 29 was perfect! (even though you put it as 28 accidentally). Everything was set up great. The abstraction of the rest of the villains was also good. So I think pretty much all the villains have been abstracted, except for: Jerry, Lieutenant Felswand, and Prince Caldren. I think PrimalApex can just have it so that those two are already introduced in the next chapter or something, except Jerry. So the heroes are united, the villains are united, and Samuel has split off to do his own thing… awesome! I can’t wait to see this ultimate war apocalypse!

Also.. how are the residents of the Omega Timeline going to feel about this? I think it’d be interesting if there was a chapter with some of them. Maybe there are a few minor MINOR characters that were accidentally abstracted and just winged it and lived in TOT because they weren’t called to the mansion. I might write their perspective then, since I do have a plan..

If heroes can be abstracted, I think it’d be wise to go over the topic of if they should abstract more people or not

Anyway, e everything was awesome and i cant wait for the next few chapters! I also cant wait for the draft models Syl’s has come in and I’m waiting fo rmore