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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Wyvernian, my two villains are the mini KT of Theri size, an egomaniac who hates his new size and after who knows how many years of existence is finally able to speak. He does had supernatural punches, but no where near his original power he had. And a telepathic reaper named Sig from future Journey, she can both implant her verbal thoughts into others minds and can read theirs. She’s malicious and loves to make people hurt for the fun of it. She loves to use her grabbing tail to hold her victims. I can’t wait to see your chapter!!!
Sunnyfox, chapter 2 of LW and chapter 28 of TOT were awesome!!!! Jack’s reaction to Cedric’s sarcasm was hilarious!!! And it looks like we’ve found out how they’re most likely to meet in this story with Cedric going to Phoenix school. I really enjoyed chapter two and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Aragorn’s reason for not trusting feels like what he would worry about. How you describe the Light Obelisk is amazing!!! And I think Arianna is definitely the most sensible in the QoA and ROTP group!!! I really enjoyed it!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
-PrimalApex:)
I’ve never really thought about what you look like Moon, honestly. For some reason I imagine you to have like bushy brown hair, (like Hermione Granger). I don’t know why. That and I think of the dragon, Moonflight. Also did you get your name idea from WoF? Just curious.✌️
-SunnyFox57
From Ben
The first draft model has released onto Dreadnoughtus! I can’t wait to see your submissions for this thing! Remember the rules for your story:
No “it was all just a dream” endings.
You don’t have to make it ARK related
No 18+ content (if it wasn’t obvious enough already)
No “script” stories
Try your best to follow the genre
HAVE FUN DONT STRESS ABOUT IT DONT GO TOO CRAZY AND WRITE A WHOLE TEN BOOKS ON IT PLEASE ITS MEANT FOR 5th GRADERS
Break-it okay if you aren’t moving your story that’s fine i’m still gonna read it anyway
Wyvernian ahh I see, okay that makes sense then. So it’s more of a hatred for humans thing rather than it being forced, got it!
Sylveevee, Chapter 22 was great! I can’t believe Pat still feels bad about the whole situation between him and Queen Syl. Can they get back together? Eh, probably not (he did try to kill her numerous times and she locked him up in a dungeon). But she can still forgive him. Hmm, but now Milo doesn’t trust him as much. That’s great! Now they might end up splitting off! That was good stuff, can’t wait to see the next chapter.
PrimalApex, Chapter 13 was awesome! So they were Corrupted Raptors. Well that makes sense considering we saw them in the last chapter. Anyway that was super suspenseful and I almost thought this was how Reuben was going to die. I wonder what that earthquake was though. Was it from a Titan or something? I don’t remember if titans could cause earthquakes. Well I can’t wait to see how Andrew takes these Corrupted Raptors down. I hope it doesn’t come with heavy sacrifices.
Sunny, Chapter 28 of TOT was amazing! I’m glad that both the ROTP groups and the QOA groups came together and put their differences aside in order to go home (Arianna really is the MVP). The description of the White Obelisk was also really cool, like how it was in Chapter 26. And ten cats?! That’s a lot!
I wonder what Wyvernian is going to do for Chapter 29, since right now nothing is really going on in the Pandora section (except for the wall engravings thing). Maybe they can go meet up with one of the other groups or something? Nothing’s really happening for them right now.
Anyway that was awesome. I’ll see ya around!
From Ben
The first draft model has released onto Dreadnoughtus! I can’t wait to see your submissions for this thing! Remember the rules for your story:
No “it was all just a dream” endings.
You don’t have to make it ARK related
No 18+ content (if it wasn’t obvious enough already)
No “script” stories
Try your best to follow the genre
HAVE FUN DONT STRESS ABOUT IT DONT GO TOO CRAZY AND WRITE A WHOLE TEN BOOKS ON IT PLEASE ITS MEANT FOR 5th GRADERS
Break-it okay if you aren’t moving your story that’s fine i’m still gonna read it anyway
Wyvernian ahh I see, okay that makes sense then. So it’s more of a hatred for humans thing rather than it being forced, got it!
Sylveevee, Chapter 22 was great! I can’t believe Pat still feels bad about the whole situation between him and Queen Syl. Can they get back together? Eh, probably not (he did try to kill her numerous times and she locked him up in a dungeon). But she can still forgive him. Hmm, but now Milo doesn’t trust him as much. That’s great! Now they might end up splitting off! That was good stuff, can’t wait to see the next chapter.
PrimalApex, Chapter 13 was awesome! So they were Corrupted Raptors. Well that makes sense considering we saw them in the last chapter. Anyway that was super suspenseful and I almost thought this was how Reuben was going to die. I wonder what that earthquake was though. Was it from a Titan or something? I don’t remember if titans could cause earthquakes. Well I can’t wait to see how Andrew takes these Corrupted Raptors down. I hope it doesn’t come with heavy sacrifices.
Sunny, Chapter 28 of TOT was amazing! I’m glad that both the ROTP groups and the QOA groups came together and put their differences aside in order to go home (Arianna really is the MVP). The description of the White Obelisk was also really cool, like how it was in Chapter 26. And ten cats?! That’s a lot!
I wonder what Wyvernian is going to do for Chapter 29, since right now nothing is really going on in the Pandora section (except for the wall engravings thing). Maybe they can go meet up with one of the other groups or something? Nothing’s really happening for them right now.
Anyway that was awesome. I’ll see ya around!
Ben
*Shrugs* well at least if SoR is in the ocean no one will try and claim it. “Utimus” is on awesome story right now. I’m on chapter 9 right now. It was kinda sad with Andrew’s parents going through the pain of letting their son cryogenically freeze but thats what a true parent should be like. Anything for there son. So um I hope nobody minds if I don’t move SoR. This community is an amazing place and I hope it doesn’t collapse like the sliver dye
-Break-it The Final Witness
From Ben
Sylveevee, Samuel's eyes dont have a confirmed eye color in TAOH because most characters have brown eyes. (9/10 people have brown eyes in the world). However, the KM describes him to have soulless eyes. So his eyes should be gray. If theyre said to be brown in TAOH ignore that (eye colors the one detail that usually doesnt matter in TAOH)
Idk what eyecilor Skyocean is so idk
Oh btw guys, remember how I told y’all about that random cat that was wandering around our yard? Well, geuss what? It’s not just ONE cat!!! No, it’s a whole FAMILY of cats. There’s like ten cats wandering out yard now. The kittens are SOO cute though. I just want to keep one…🥺
-SunnyFox57
Ben, well you see, the gigantopithicus were all tames, I think they were tames of a small tribe on Pandora, not Olympus. (I don’t remember for sure) the Chief and the others have let it go but Oak is much more vengeful, especially after they partnered with Stainly, plus Salizar offered him Baronship, so.. but you’ll see in the next next chapter, I think only 2-3 more, and the finale is gonna be L O N G
Then after that Book 3, which should be short, and Tales is for the entirety of the PC so it’ll probably be running alongside Talons of fate? Royalty? Idk Talons of fate sounds cooler but Talons of Royalty makes more sense.. maybe I’ll do a poll.
-Wyvernian
To Ben
Ok Thank you for the suggestion about the stories I should read. I was actually able to find your thing lol. This place is crowded. Oh and thanks for liking the Son of Rockwell. I’m not the best author but I hope to get better. By the way I already knew what Extinction because I’ve been here for a while but I’ve never joined the fan fiction group until later. Ok the next chapters are coming out and I’ll also start on the story you suggested
Your new friend
Break-it The Final Witness