Dododex
ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion
From Ben
Wait yall didn’t know I was a Mega Male? Mega Males are basically just dudes who blush blue instead of red. Pretty weird stuff and I’m def not pulling your leg right now.
Sunny, honestly it isn’t that bad. I think a lot of people have the same issue. And besides you can always correct it in the final draft of your series (if you ever do intend on editing it and what not for a professional book). I wouldn’t be too worried. I think it’s evident in the tips being sent on here sometimes not everyone is exactly aiming to make everything grammatically perfect.
Break-it as soon as your birthday comes, we are all going to congratulate your birthday! Although that must wait because it is not your birthday yet. Not too much is going around, people are getting back into their flow of writing tho, which is neat. Also I saw your recent SoR chapters, Imma check them out as soon as possible.
MGG Chapter 31 of TOT was pretty funny! I enjoyed it a lot although there isnt much to say other then it was funny. I find it interesting that the Fjordur dragon from HC is around the same size as Jethezzar, a wyvern. I suppose that makes Apex the most dangerous and largest of the current villain group (although King Titan might be a bit more dangerous even within a smaller form). Might make for an interesting plot point. Also Shortstacks Im pretty sure youve been short the whole time.. Cant wait to see what Syl does for 32. Welp, gotta mentally prepare myself for when its my turn since i know Syls gonna write the chapter in a matter of seconds (some of you are really really fast dude)
Anyways, heres a question for the day:
QOTD: Who are the top ten most powerful characters in your story/series/universe? (This could help with TOT purposes)
Here’s my list:
At number 10 is Nova. Her implant attributes give her the most potential out of most other characters, besides Loki. She’s also pretty fit and has good endurance and stamina, making her a capable fighter with lots of potential. PS: Her implant attributes are highly hinted at. It should be easy to figure out with some pondering.
At number 9 is Bob. Through sheer knowledge and experience he manages to make it to the top 10. Let’s also not forget that he is the most physically capable out of anyone on this list. If Bob had an implant at all, he would have made it even higher on this list.
At number 8 is Ben. His plant manipulation make him a formidable threat, and he is very intuitive and cunning with it as well. He can use it for combat and a quick getaway. The only cost to this is his cardiovascular stamina. Chapter 23.5 also signifies his determination when promises are on the line.
At number 7 is General Wyvern. His implant attribute makes him a very very powerful enemy. He also demonstrates an excellent marksmanship, perhaps even greater than Gary’s, and the overall skillset of a general. He also possesses a great talent to detect lies, and may be even more cold (however caring) than his queen, June.
At number 6 is Jerry. Jerry’s blood manipulation make him really strong and he’s overall an excellent fighter due to his “kill or be killed” mentality. If he stopped kneeling for those he considers stronger than himself he’d definitely be higher on the list.
At number 5 is Alan… Huh?? How is this possible? There has to be some hidden reason for this. Maybe it has something to do with his implant attribute… and the fact he managed to survive despite being a ‘noob’ despite being more inland.
At number 4 is Mr. Mo. Mr. Mo’s telekinesis makes him very very dangerous, and if he was not challenged by Loki, he would have the potential to rival and decimate everyone on the island. His experience potentially rivals Bob’s (although not his knowledge), and his craziness give him the edge in a battle, as he almost killed Chloe before Loki stopped him.
At number 4 is also Loki. His implant attribute will allow him to become even stronger over time, despite the costs.
At number 3 is Tiffany. Her attribute to adapt to anything at will is extremely applaudable and worthy of making her the third strongest of the story. However sometimes she relies too much on her ability. She isn’t exactly the greatest fighter, and if overusing her ability, takes a toll on her heart, similar to Ben’s ability, although at a much greater extent. She is the true pinnacle of a survivor who is willing to evolve.
At number 2 is June. Her fire is unrivaled and direct counters to almost everyone on this list. She’s also an adept fighter, and she uses her abilities to its fullest extent. It’s too bad for her that four awesome dudes are on their way to jump her at the moment and free their friends…
And at number 1, is of course, the president, Dan Walker.