To: RelatingHen

From: Ben, & KM

Well, Relating, Chapter 100 is the only chapter thats reached the limit, which is why its even split up into parts to begin with (it was around 30k words long yikes), though those chapters are indeed just as long. I typically refrain from splitting them into parts for easier reading accessibility. You may have noticed some of TAOH has chapters with A and B, but this was only because i was too lazy to put it all in one or i felt like i didnt want it to cover 2 chapters. Also glad to see another TOT reader, though I wouldnt recommend reading it until you’ve read some of the stories involved in the crossover. I’ll update the TOT page in the Wiki to include it soon.

Also, Chapter 21 of JTAC was great! I thoroughly enjoyed it and the personification of Reaper was nice. I enjoy personified creatures in human POV stories because it adds some spark to the human cast and gives it a bit more variety. I do think the fight between Cordor and the others was a bit underwhelming for a “Showdown” but its no biggie. Just remember to keep that in mind for the finale of Section II. Something that would keep you on the edge of your seat is most likely to keep readers as well. Whether it be something heart-breaking, intense, high-stakes, or gut-wrenching. Also, the continuity error of Cordor being able to go around doing stuff even though he should be low level is noticeable, but can be explained in a future chapter. Other then that, good chapter, i’ll be around for 22.

As for the 7 likes on the chapters, I can confirm there are definitely more than 7 of us. Not all of us are super active here as they were, most are active on the Fandom Wiki. Don’t worry about it too much.

To Ben,

Thanks for your feedback! I’ve gotten started on reading ToT and now I’m hoping that Chapter 54 comes out very soon. Also, yeah, if JTAC happened in real Ark it’d be on a PvX server since the tribes fight each other to ascend so it makes sense they’d go for a Titan.

Also, word limits… bro, Chapter 91b of TAOH and Chapter 40 of ToT were 39 and 38 minutes long!! That’s longer than just one part of the chapter 100. Okay I guess no one would make a chapter like that… unless they, for some reason, really wanted to. Okay just curious: what’s the true word limit on Dododex tips when making a story?

Ok, whatever that’s all for now.

-RelatingHen8906

Btw I wrote the Cave Of Secrets in allo if all of you didn't see that. My last tip saying that I did is near the bottom, also, please do not impersonate me, as I have said before. Ik it is probably some little kid bc they sounded immature but I honestly do not like when people try to make a person's reputation drop.

-Lynx

Also feel free to leave feedback about my story! :)

Forest is safe… for now…

😅 It’s ok my friend, the rune will not hurt Forest. That’s not it’s goal at all. The death of that Shadowmane was an accident on the runes part.

While I explained much, I did not explain that this rune has been working for some time… protecting Forest… even if you or Forest did not notice. Have you checked back in the older Chapters? You’ll see things you never did before!

Oh my gosh, I am so glad to hear it's not two chapters until the end of the story. I am excited to learn more about what the rune is truly capable of.

- Apex

My poor Biggest Fan… RIP my friend—

Also, yes, Chapter 69 is in Magmasaur taking its sweet, sweet time to show up.

Chapter 71 will explain it all—

Well, almost all 😏

—Moon

WOW SOMONE FINALLY MENTIONED THE RUNE!!!!!!!!

But… i t g o t s t u c k o n a c l i f f h a n g e r…

Ok I’ll just be slowly dying over here until the next chapter comes out.👍

BTW, is chapter 69 in Magmasour or did I miss it???

- Your Biggest Fan

Moon:

I think your stories are great your stories are 5 stars.

WHAT.

IS.

HAPPENING.

Omg, guys, almost every tip in almost every section has gone from 300 ups to zero!

I’m genuinely scared 🥺

—Moon

Everyone, there are much more than two Chapters left! I was just telling my BiggestFan that the rune would be explained soon. There’s still a whole lot more to the Obelisk.

—Moon

While I am preparing to write the story, I noticed that finding the creatures in aberration to tame was kind of a pain. I want to help out any other writers that need to ride the creature to figure out the abilities, size, etc. All you need is this command. gmsummon "DinoId_character_bp_c" levelyouwant. Make sure to type in the dinos dino ID instead of DinoID and to put in the level you wish in that slot, so like 10000. Idk who this would help but it is a pretty big problem for me.

-Lynx

I actually almost cried after reading all the support you wyvernian, and lynx have given me since I last posted. I am definitely going to continue posting. Bless you all.

-The One Who Reads.

The grilled cheese tip has ten likes it must be good grilled cheese 😂

-wyvernian

Never mind moon..I found chapter one of your story.

-SpecialRaptor

Moon, I can't find chapter 68, have you not wrote it yet or something? "Wrote" probably isn't correct but I haven't come up with a better word in my head so that will have to do. Another question, Why do my tips always take a couple days to appear?

-Lynx

After I wrote my section on why I'm not gonna release the rest of the story for a bit, I noticed that the one who reads was being hard on themselves (Idk your gender lol). Anyway the entire point of this is, don't be hard on yourself, I haven't looked at your new writing yet but if it is anything like the writing I have read from you, it is great writing.

-Lynx (Also thank you to Moon for the feedback and the answers to my questions).

Ok, so Lynx, it is very possible you got confuzzled because Chapter 41: part 2 was in Featherlight, but you also saw Chapter 44 in there. Do not read Chapter 44. It was a major posting accident lol.

After reading Chapter 41: part 2, Chapter 42 and 43 will be in the sections after. (Fenrir, Ferox.) After reading Chapter 43, go back to Featherlight and read 44.

😅 Dumb, I know, I wish there were a way to fix that. That’s why it’s actually easier to

l o o k u p “The Obelisk Chapter blah blah blah” on Google or Safari or whatnot, because then they just pop up and you don’t have to exactly search for them.

Do it how you like, hope this helped!

(P.S, Lynx, you are amazing at writing!)

—Moon

Going on a trip for the week! Can’t promise I’ll have time to write the next chapter during that… but keep a look out just in case I do!

Be back in a week!

—Moon

Hello fellow fanfic writers

To Moon- nice job getting to 60+ chapters that’s crazy! also I want to add a fjordhawk as a main character in S2, so I was thinking of a little crossover, nothing big the characters won’t meet or anything since my story is in line with the Ark story (player not explorer notes) and I think yours is before that.

To The one who reads- are you going to start your story anytime soon you’ve got me in suspense..

To dodo tales guy- welcome back I personally haven’t read much of dodo tales (it’s buried deep) but I look forward to seeing what you write next

To Lynx- I think your little thing was good a bit confusing but I’d like to see how the future parts work out.

And finally me wyvernian- I have just released chapter 14 of Heroes of Pandora which is already here.. strange, usually it takes 2 days to actually post.. anyway chapter 14 puts an end to the boring story start stuff, and on to the adventure although it ends with an intense cliffhanger I hope those that read it have liked it so far and I have big plans for the future of it

—wyvernian

Hello, it's me, DTG (dodo tales guy). I wrote dodo tales nearly three years ago, and am one of the founders of the Fanfiction Community here. I am considering writing again. It's been a long time since I've posted a story on dododex.