After I wrote my section on why I'm not gonna release the rest of the story for a bit, I noticed that the one who reads was being hard on themselves (Idk your gender lol). Anyway the entire point of this is, don't be hard on yourself, I haven't looked at your new writing yet but if it is anything like the writing I have read from you, it is great writing.

-Lynx (Also thank you to Moon for the feedback and the answers to my questions).