To: Jerrald, Break-it
To: Jerrald, Break-it
From: Ben
Jerrald, Chapter 9 of The Island was excellent! The raptor rematch was phenomenal and I loved the introduction of the new character. I wonder how he got a Deinonychus anyway? Has he transferred over from another ARK? Can't wait for Chapter 10, it seems he will ally with Marcel.
Break-it, Chapter 29 of SOR was great! It was nice seeing another journal entry from Bruce. I loved how the respawning mechanic is utilized in this story. So we now know not everyone can respawn, only a few, just like in the lore before One Who Waits could perfect it. So that means that Bruce was brought into the ARKs before The One Who Tries Again, making this fanfic an alternate timeline of the original game in a way. I cant wait to see some of these respawners in the next chapter.













