Can someone help fill me in? The message with the 3 faces was gone before I could see it and several others disappeared when I didn't see them. I would prefer to know the whole story.
I've been thinking of a story and I think I might share a bit of it. I'm not the best writer so it won't be good but if you like it let me know and I may continue.
Does anyone remember me? It's been a while since I've said anything. Also Ben, please make your chapters shorter. They seem so long compared to anything I've seen here. In an actual book it's fine…
I have to admit, I thought the imposter left. They are really good at impersonating other people. I am quite impressed at how well they impersonate other people.
The reader, you have improved quite a bit, very nice job. I honestly forgot I told you so I forgot to check for a while but anyway there may be someone impersonating me or any other writers so if they say something out…
The reader, in the recent advice I have sent you, I forgot to sign my name at the bottom because I was editing it for grammar errors. If it talks about detail and uses the examples of hanging pots then it is probably…
Another issue I noticed in your writing is that you put periods before phrases. I mean, I'm not an English teacher, but that really confuses some people. So anyway you have to put a comma depending on where the…
Btw I wrote the Cave Of Secrets in allo if all of you didn't see that. My last tip saying that I did is near the bottom, also, please do not impersonate me, as I have said before. Ik it is probably some little kid…
The reader, your story could be a good story, the only issues I had were grammar and the fact that you didn't explain things in a thorough way. It made it a bit harder to read because I didn't understand it…
While I am preparing to write the story, I noticed that finding the creatures in aberration to tame was kind of a pain. I want to help out any other writers that need to ride the creature to figure out the abilities…