The reader, you have improved quite a bit, very nice job. I honestly forgot I told you so I forgot to check for a while but anyway there may be someone impersonating me or any other writers so if they say something out of character, it most likely isn't them. I just wanted to let you know as they have impersonated me and Moon and will probably impersonate someone else next. You did very good on your story though. I too, find it hard to put length in a chapter. A good way to add length is detail like instead of saying "a hanging pot" say "a clay pot with symbols covering it, hung from the roof by a single chain."