The reader, your story could be a good story, the only…
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The reader, your story could be a good story, the only issues I had were grammar and the fact that you didn't explain things in a thorough way. It made it a bit harder to read because I didn't understand it and it was short so it was hard to find the parts. This is probably just me lol. I am very sorry if you took offense from this, I more meant to give advice for the next parts.
-Lynx
