For some reason, I just checked the view my tips thing and…
For some reason, I just checked the view my tips thing and the prologue to my story has been randomly deleted. I wonder why...
-Lynx
For some reason, I just checked the view my tips thing and the prologue to my story has been randomly deleted. I wonder why...
-Lynx
Open the Dododex app on iOS or Android, select a creature, and go to Tips > Submit Tip.
I've been thinking of a story and I think I might share a bit of it. I'm not the best writer so it won't be good but if you like it let me know and I may continue.
The ground shook. Dusk looked…
The Cave of Secrets Chapter 2:
Thank you so much if you are still here and like the story! It means a lot to me, even if you don't up or leave feedback!
"Wake up Dusk," A voice whispered. "Danger…
Chapter one:
Before reading this go read the prologue in achatina.
Oh I forgot to put the title.
Cave Of Secrets.
A Metal talon hit the hard rock with a loud THUNK! "WHERE IS DUSK!!!" A Red Raptor with a…
Does anyone remember me? It's been a while since I've said anything. Also Ben, please make your chapters shorter. They seem so long compared to anything I've seen here. In an actual book it's fine…
Cave of Secrets.
I think this is chapter 4 of it but I'm not sure since I haven't made a chapter for a while. Ig I'll go with it being chapter 4.
Chapter 4:
The spino crept closer to Dusk. Dusk tried…
Do not worry SpecialRaptor, It could just be the spam downers. I think you write well.
-Lynx
I have to admit, I thought the imposter left. They are really good at impersonating other people. I am quite impressed at how well they impersonate other people.
-Lynx
The reader, you have improved quite a bit, very nice job. I honestly forgot I told you so I forgot to check for a while but anyway there may be someone impersonating me or any other writers so if they say something out…
Why is my story down to zero now? It had a decent amount of likes but now it is gone. What's going on? Is my writing bad or something?
-Lynx
The reader, in the recent advice I have sent you, I forgot to sign my name at the bottom because I was editing it for grammar errors. If it talks about detail and uses the examples of hanging pots then it is probably…
I've been reading The Obelisk since I don't get on often and I could not find 42 and 43. Anyone know where they are?
Another issue I noticed in your writing is that you put periods before phrases. I mean, I'm not an English teacher, but that really confuses some people. So anyway you have to put a comma depending on where the…
Btw I wrote the Cave Of Secrets in allo if all of you didn't see that. My last tip saying that I did is near the bottom, also, please do not impersonate me, as I have said before. Ik it is probably some little kid…
The reader, your story could be a good story, the only issues I had were grammar and the fact that you didn't explain things in a thorough way. It made it a bit harder to read because I didn't understand it…
While I am preparing to write the story, I noticed that finding the creatures in aberration to tame was kind of a pain. I want to help out any other writers that need to ride the creature to figure out the abilities…