I already gave Spirit some advice for beginner writers, so ask her if you need it. You're already good with sentence structure though, which is good for cohesiveness. one final thing, there is a Dododex Stories website which you can use to view tips on real time. Whenever you get this, you'll know. That's all, I'll see you around.

- Ben

So I gived up and flew with my argie Evergreen to green ob to tame a spino, as always i had griffin kibble

And soothing balm with me. I heared horse neigh. I had last Hope in me. And I saw her. Beautiful and Majestic. She walked on swamps. Oh, a titanoboa!!!!!! Fast grabbed her and took to Revival platform on green ob. Placed her and waited to calm down. Then setted Evergreen to passive and sneaked to her fed balm and kibble. I wasnt ever as happy because tame as this time . Now she lives on raft/ herb island to keep her safe as I can( leaches dont attack on mobile). She is one of my favourite tames( with Evergreen, Spinko and of course her) I named her Athena.

I wish your unis best!

- SweetLemon2254

P.S. Lindo is still alive so Athena can say thanks for saving other uni

I’m alpha of a server and it’s fairly new so I don’t have any griffins

So I was flying through the sky with my arge when my tribemates saw a uni I instantly jacked him to my base and trapped and I couldn’t tame it cuz I didn’t have griffins and that also meant no one else got another uni cuz mine was wolf and there only be 1 uni at a time

Btw the metal rocks looks beautiful after eating uni poop

in my early days of ark i was having a bushwalk and getting to know the area with my friend who had also just started after we tamed our first animal and named it ruffles (it was a carbonemys that we lost for months then found) i was on my walk with my friend and in the distance i saw a white horse and thought nothing of it, later i checked my stream and noticed that white horse was a unicorn. never seen again 😭😭

I had seen a giant yuty and flew away and saw a white figure running from a carno. Picked it up and was in shock. Flew it from near blue obelisk to red obelisk. Popped it in a stone trap. Tamed it for an hour with berries. Level 32 male. His name is starlight, and he lives happily with a direwolf, argy, tapejara, three thylas, and more.

but I have the best solution for y’all. so you go and try to get a griffin. and get it’s stamina up to 300. and then wait until a unicorn spawns close enough to your house. and make griffin kibble with its eggs. or get chef station easiest way. with the griffins eggs and carry it home. and boom you have a unicorn just as healthy as mine meaning 783.4 health.