Hey uh Berrie, I get your story, it’s cool I like that…

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Hey uh Berrie, I get your story, it’s cool I like that, I do, but there’s a few things wrong with it. Not the LGBT couple I am very pro LGBT rights even though I am not gay myself.

It’s just, spelling, and grammar, I’m a f*cking grammar Nazi.

For starters, it’s Little, not litele. Second, there should be a period at the end of a sentence. And it’s blushed, not blushd, it’s also worth mentioning that when I is used in a sentence “I love you” it should be capitalized, and while I’m taking about that sentence there should be a space between and I and love. Sorry if I sound like your English teacher but when I see bad grammar and spelling I have palpitations

-Manticore

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