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A world of dinosaurs chapter 6 unfamiliar:
He couldn’t explain what he was thinking but he needed more time to think he was getting more dreams and the black dog was in it again. But there was a seer in the dream saying but the caverns were deep the waters were black the rivers were flowing the trees swaying you’ve been there before.
Snow knew where it was he needed to get there should he tell bard though he had been having those dreams. He should anyway he was his bodyguard and they were friends so he decided he would.
Sorry was short but I didn’t have times again. Oh and to answer your question ben I’ll answer it another time so keep your eyes open.
The reader
A world of dinosaurs unfamiliar chapter 7
Bard I have something to tell you. I’ve been having these dreams and I’ve actually seen the thing in it. It’s this big black dog about twice as big as me. But once I followed the trail through the woods and I saw it. Snow watch out!
Waking up groggily snow looked around what what happened.
The reader
The Obelisk
-Chapter 39-
The Shadowmanes were close.
Forest skidded down the hill and jumped on top of rock, but tripped and fell in his momentum and crashed right into a young Shadowmane.
“Ow! What the—oh, hi!” The Shadowmane stopped and turned to look down at him. She had almost all the colors of the rainbow— blue, pink, purple, yellow— and a bit of black here or there. Forest felt rather embarrassing on the ground, so he slowly sat up.
“What this?” An older, bright green and orange Shadowmane stepped forward.
“I’m so sorry,” Forest said, jumping up.
“It’s OK, Spotfur,” the first Shadowmane said. “He looks harmless.”
I do?
The others caught up from behind, panting. Rust waved, Spark nodded, and Crimson just scowled nervously.
“These are my friends,” Forest said. “We—“
He realized all of the Shadowmanes had stopped now. They were turned and squinted curiously at the newcomers. Whispers eddied through the group. There were lots of them—and least fifteen—if Forest counted right. “We, uh… a friend”—Crimson snorted as he said it—“told me you could help us with something.”
The young Shadowmane bristled with excitement. “Of course! We can help you! Father!” She called. “Some carnivores request assistance!”
“Hault!” Called several voice from behind Forest. He whirled around to see six Terror birds a few talonsteps away, each one big and imposing as they stood tall.
“Hault? On who’s authority?” A deep voice asked form the Shadowmane crowd. Everyone moved out of the way as a large, handsome Shadowmane stepped forward, radiating power.
The terror birds exchanged cautious expressions. “Chief Blazeheart,” one of them greeted. “We are sorry to intrude on your visit.”
“Are these carnivores with you??” A Terror bird demanded.
The Shadowmanes gaze passed Forest, Crimson, Spark and Rust, and he said, “they are now.”
“What—“ the Terri bird was hushed by the others, and one said, “do you know them?”
“I will,” Blazeheart said with a bob of his head. “These young carnivores need assistance, i they have nothing to do with you. I will take them out of your claws and we’ll be on our way.”
“Of course, Blazeheart,” the lead Terror bird bowed slightly, and gestured for the soldiers to follow. “Enjoy your stay.”
As they left, the first Shadowmane said, “Thankyou Father. You must meet these carnivores!”
“I understand you want friends,” Blazeheart said to her. “But first, we must get to know them. And they require our help, apparently?”
“Yes,” Forest said.
“Then you may come with us. We are on our way to the Ruins for our last days stay, and then I may assist you with what you need. You may stay at the back of the group. Nyx, you can escort them.”
The juvenile Shadowmane shuddered happily. “Thankyou, Thankyou, Father!”
“Your welcome.”
A world of dinosaurs chapter 23 The Breach
The wyvern drug its self up, you think you can defeat me that easily. No you can’t! You’ll have to fight harder it then got up and launched far up into the air screaming too his allies. Let us join our power together. We will win this fight.
The wyvern then blew a bolt of lightning straight at the fire wyverns fire and spiraling it into the poison wyverns poison. Launching a bolt of blue, green, and orange. Going through the air like a bolt it hit the ground sending waves of fire, lightning, and poison, crashing into snow sending him through the air he hit the ground knocking the air out of him making him breathe hard in short gasps all the amaragarsaurs were laying in a heap knocked out the titanosaur was scratched a little bit.
The titanosaur bellowed yet again and whipped its tail through the air smacking 7 wyverns through the air knocking them out and breaking several of their wings. Then it smashed down on them. Then it shot some of the rock giants in the air.
The rock giants grappled onto them and smashing rocks onto them.
Sending several smash into the ground. Then the as alpha lightning wyvern shot into the air shattering a rock golem. Amaragarsaur herd woke up and caught eye of a lightning bolt flying through the air toward them they shot their spikes into the air into the lightning bolts and the electricity made the spike toward the wyvern stabbing it in the heart killing it.
You have won this battle but you will see us again and this time we’ll win.
The reader
From Ben
Hi Reader, I finished the first 30 Chapters of A World of Dinosaurs, and I liked it quite a bit. Snows a fun character to watch hunt and do stuff, although the pacing felt a little weird in the beginning because all they did was hunt rabbits, it got better near the end of the 30 chapters when more dinosaurs were introduced. Although one problem I do have is dialogue, I think quotation marks should be used if they havent already, itll make it easier to tell whos saying who.
Thats all the feedback, and im wondering who that black dog is. Fenrir? And of course what map this takes place on, and what Rose has to do with the enemy wolf pack. I also wonder why Snow gets weird dream visions, is it like a special power?
Well, Ill be around in Achatina with SunnyFox and friends. Come by soon! And if you have any response, feel free to put it anywhere. I always find those messages.
Hi Reader! Sorry I’ve been so busy writing that I forgot to respond to you. I’ve also been reading ur story and it’s pretty cool how the dragon is a shapeshifter. I wonder what the black dog is. The grim from Harry Potter? A fenrir? Anyways I hope you’re doing well!
-SunnyFox57
Reader, sorry that I haven’t been replying back in this section to you. I have been responding every so often to you in Achatina. I enjoy your stories very much and I’m keeping up with them!!!! I’m sorry that I haven’t been responding in here to you. Also you might want to use quotation marks as Ben said, it makes the dialogue clear and easy to read. Keep up with your story!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
Sorry for not checking in for a while Reader! I saw your message in Snail so I headed over here and managed to read the rest of Season 2 (that youve made so far). While it is short there is a lot to uncover! First of all the Land of the Dreaded sounds so cool. Now Snow has to survive in an Unfamiliar land with only an Unfamiliar friend, Bard by his side. The Araneo of Scribes sounds cool, and so does the shapeshifting dragon! I hope we see more of them in the future. Although I think quotation marks for dialogue need to be added again. Dont forget about that!
Ill read the next chapter as soon as it comes out!
A world of dinosaurs unfamiliar chapter 9
Snow come on hurry up I know what that glow is. The glow started forming an orb the orb grew spikes and spun super fast. But then the spikes formed together making something like that of a mouth. It was getting bulgier. And some spikes were shooting out uncontrollably.
Then the blob formed long and the spikes went on top forming head, arms, and toes. I am the dragon I can take many shapes I am a shapeshifter. Bard I will let you live but only because he is with you if you remember me.
You’re going to have a long journey ahead of you so get to it.
Hi guys!
The reader
A world of dinosaurs chapter 22 The swarm
The wyvern kept doing short bursts of screech’s, then he turned his knack and said you have nothing left too fight anymore you’re gonna need more help! Then swooped into the air roaring, now here they come. Snow looked into the sky and saw a voidwyrm and swarms of wyverns.
They were flooding the sky and flying everywhere. There were poison wyverns, lightning wyverns, forest wyverns, crystal wyverns, and fire wyverns, with an alpha leading at the front of each swarm there.
The lightning wyvern swooped down first saying: you needed help with this! The alpha said. You may as well be a price of trashed meat. Then the brontosaurus bellowed and through the trees they all heard crashing. Snow looked behind him and saw a head towering above the trees.
Then a tree fell down right behind him an amargarssurus herd charged right toward him. The towering titanosaur looked down at the wyverns and laughed saying. You have no chance. Then it whipped its tail through the air cracking a wyvern the head making it fly back into a tree knocking it out.
Then it said charge. And a rock elemental jumped off its back taking some of its amour off. The rock giant picked up a boulder and threw it straight at an alpha wyvern causing it to spiral backwards and ram into a tree. You’ve chosen the wrong path.
The alpha flew straight at the rock giant crashed into it making it crumble. The wyvern then dove straight toward the amaragasaurus herd shooting a bolt of lightning at them. Hitting one making it stumble around and collapse into a heap.
The herd charged straight toward it and shot spikes into the air. One of the fire wyverns blew a burst of fire at them.
Setting them on fire stabbing the wyvern in the breast, making it fall too the ground.
Hoped you liked the long chapter.
The reader