Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Ben, I hope u have a great vacation! The collab might be called “Fire and Fangs”(were still deciding). It’s gonna be a war book and it’s about wyverns. It’s gonna be in wyvern. Now that’s all I can say about the collab bc one, we haven’t figured all the details out and two, I don’t want to spoil anything. Anyways..I gotta go work on my next chapter of shadow phoenix.
-SunnyFox57.
Ben, thanks for reading my newest chapters. It might take me a while on the next chapter bc I have to figure out what happens next. Whether or not they realize it I feel like James and Cole are fighting over Arianna. (Like Samuel said, love is blind. Very wise boy, Samuel is.) Anyways..I just read chapter twenty six and Samuel had a brother? Hmm…interesting….And poor Warren, I bet he feels just miserable since his wife blames him for Samuel’s brother’s death. I can’t wait for the next chapters and I wonder if there will be any scenes with Mr. Mo?
-SunnyFox57.
Wyvernian, your ideas are really good, but I didn’t want to use ApexPredator because it is too close to Apex Predator Person for my taste. I didn’t want to get accused of copying Apex in any way after our recent encounter. I did think about using Apex with a specific creature names at the end. I like some of them, but I didn’t really find any that I liked enough to use them or that felt fit nicely. I was going to put down one or two more choices, one being PermianApex (I probably should have put this in place of FutureApex) or something very similar. But I really like PrimalApex. It was the one I was always leaning towards. It isn’t really specific except for eliminating modern predators but I think thats why I really like it. It allows for imagination and creativity for everyone to wonder which Apex predator that I mean.
Sunnyfox, it was a pleasure reading your story!!
I think that’s it for now. Until next time!!
-PrimalApex:)
Sorry guys there’s so much chatter in here I didn’t notice a lot of the things you guys have said till now,
Apex, I like primalApex but you could also do something like Apexpredator or Apex(enter specific animal species or dinosaur name here)
Moon, I see everyone saying stuff about the new chapter but I don’t see your announcement for it if it’s here.. idk why I’m gonna go read that now
Ben, glad you like the desert and arctic plots, Nash has seemed a bit boring to me as well he doesn’t really do anything, that’s why ive put him alone for some character development, Hopefully it helps.
Also sunny and Ben, I know you guys have been using the website to see tips sooner and idk why but it seems like when you do that they show up here sooner too because I’ve been getting some from 10-12 hours ago instead of 2 days I wish they just insta posted sometimes but that would also have issues. I’d be kinda nice if the Dododex had a like general chat feature that is real-time, because it would not only help if you were trying to get a quick answer about the game, but also for us to do colabs and stuff easier because it’s really hard to communicate, but I definitely don’t want to use an external thing like discord..
-Wyvernain
Hey guys! It’s me Sandmaster. It’s been a long time since I wrote anything. Anything special happened? Btw dang, chapter 96 FINALLY came out. Chapter 12 will come out soon and so will the broadcast.
P.S. Moon what if they revived moonbeam and Orbit somehow? Just a suggestion. Unless one of them have healing powers, mostly forest I’d say.
Moon, I totally agree with you. The song “Yelena Belova” DEFINITELY matches it. Btw have you watched any of the marvel movies in the marvel cinematic universe? And if so who would u say ur favorite character is? Also it’s pretty cool how you get ur ideas from songs. It kind of reminds me of leitmotif. Leitmotif is kind of like a theme for each character in a movie. Guess what? In Star Wars there is THOUSANDS of leitmotifs for each character. Anyway…I just though it was pretty cool and wanted to mention it. Bye!
-SunnyFox57.
We are getting sooo close to the end of my story! Im glad you guys enjoyed 96. Thought I’d say that for that chapter I used a certain part of a soundtrack to imagine that scene, you should listen to it. It’s called “Yelena Belova” from Marvels Black Widow soundtrack. It matches the scene perfectly and really helped me portray how Orbit felt. And surprisingly, the song’s length fits the chapter almost perfectly! I listened to it while reading and it really changed how the chapter felt.
That’s all for now, I will start working on 97 when I can. Back into the void ah- *evaporates*
—Moon
I rewrote chapters prologue through chapter 3, 4 and up dont need it, it was hard to rewrite chapter 3 it had 12 ups.. I didn’t even know that many people read it. But I did what must be done… I think I added a way better start to the story by just fixing the mistakes, HoP will never be as good as PoP and future additions but I can’t really fix that without rewriting the entire thing and adding more chapters. It just seemed rushed to me.
-Wyvernain
*sobs*. I just read *sniff sniff* chapter ninety six Moon. It was SOO sad, but I’m glad that Orbit will be with Moonbeam now. *blows nose with tissue*. Also I would like to thank everyone here for reading my story and supporting me as I write. I really appreciate it. Thank you.
-SunnyFox57.
Ben, I’m glad that u made ur character Ben a main character. He’s pretty cool. I just read ur newest chapter. And aw..that’s so sweet how Bob took Alan/Apex in. I wonder what lady Alan was talking about…maybe Skylar? She doesn’t seem very nice to me. Thanks for reading my story, I’m working on the next chapter. I can’t wait for ur next chapter!
-SunnyFox57.
From Ben
Fun Arks Over Heaven Fact: The Ben in The Arks: Over Heaven, was originally going to be a minor character who would be part of the group ----, and he would be a guy who had gone crazy because he believes he has experienced this island before, in another timeline. He would also oppose Samuel, believing he should back down on his mission to —-- and “give up like he did”.
Instead of plant manipulation, this Ben would have the ability to remember everything he saw.
If this instance of Ben was added, then certain characters who may show up later who you may or may not enjoy having wouldn’t exist, and neither would the concept of the Book Club.
From Ben
Chapter 25 of The Arks: Over Heaven has released! In this chapter, we take the perspective of an old character, and he strives for something, i guess idk how to summarize this tbh.
Sunny, Chapter 15 was really sad for James AND Tom! Their father has really high and I daresay, ridiculous expectations for the two, even when they are not even adults yet. And come on getting grounded for being a few minutes late. That’s pretty lame, dude! Edward should take a chill pill, and come on dude Tom ain’t meek! He’s just quiet is all brah. Also Jenny’s so sweet, she’s so nice to her brothers. And that’s cool how her medallion power is shapeshifting. Maybe she should be queen.
Well I hope Edward takes a chill pill. And James is right, what if he doesn’t wanna be king? What if he wants to be a musician and make a band with his brother and lover- I mean friends!
Yeah anyway that was fun to read, see you later!
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