Bob,

OH!! YOUR THE GUY WHO WROTE A SONG OF COMPYS AND GIGAS! Forgive me that I didn’t recognize you. Never really read your story, but now that I see it, I’m going to go do it!

Yours Truly,

MrGhostGamer

Working on Next chapters of Both Hopes Call and Life Before. Hmm… Bob. Any relation to Bob The Survivor?

Yours Truly,

MrGhostGamer

From Ben

Sunny Chapter 24 was great! This really is going to be an epic finale, I hope the Dark Phoenixes can pull something off to save themselves, Even Toms come...

But Jack is here, that means the Shadowy Figure will reveal himself soon!

Alright later

I dont have discord because my parents say im not allowed but why would someone attack a discord server??

-sylveevee

Sunnyfox, I’ve read chapter 21, 22 and 23!!! Brutus and Peggie’s fib was funny!!! And Cole’s the Mole, darn it. I definitely felt that it would be him, but I hoped it wasn’t. I wasn’t expecting though his backstory to be that he was forced by fear!!! It still doesn’t make it any more right. Neither does it make better to run. I mean if he doesn’t warn or give intelligence to the Dark Phoenix kingdom before he starts running. Hmm, the Shadowy Figure is manipulating Jack into leading him to the Dark Phoenix Kingdom. Curiouser that he has Deja Vu about him. I definitely think that’s a clue to who!! They were really good!!!! I really enjoyed them and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!

Until Next Time!!!

-PrimalApex:)

From Ben

Ye Wyvernian ik it supposed to be a "villain" obelisk but i kinda forgor about that sorry. But the way to find the white obelisk is really genius!

Sylveevee, Chapter 16 was amazing, I loved it! So Pat has teamed up with the leader of the rebel raiders, Carnilius. Very cool name, is he going to show up in a future chapter? Because he didnt show up in Part 5. You also did a good job conveying Moonhigh and Sunhigh's feelings in Part 2. And woah, we get more backstory. So Syl and Draco have known each other since the Island? Really cool. Although one thing? You dont have to put in parentheses that Syl used to have anger issues in SE, because a good reader can tell that by reading the dialogue and action and stuff. Anyway Part 3 really does explain why Syl and Draco seemed to know each other in Chapter 13.

Anyway, Part 4 was really sweet. Cooper was smart enough to battle Milo in tennis and not Pat, because Pat is better than him at tennis. And Cooper really could have been like a dad to Sunhigh, but then... oh my goodness that was so sad I feel so bad for Drake man...

Moonhigh's power is really cool. And it was a really good idea to add the flaw to Syls power (that she cant shapeshift if shes badly hurt). Because if something like that didnt exist things would get a little too easy..

but i loved it overall. Keep it up Syl, the story has improved a lot since the first chapter

Wasn’t expecting Jethezzar.. when did you and Moon agree to that?! Chapter 21 was great I loved the description of the black obelisks region, and the fight. Wonder what Sunny will do for her chapter, continue the black obelisk part? The team QOA and Petersons part? Both?

I know I’m excited to write chapter 23!

-Wyvernian

I keep messing up on chapter and name lol last one i did I didn’t know i put “Aberration part 3/5” 😂

-sylveevee

Ben, dude I will probably TOTALLY make audiobooks for the ROTP series. I think that would be SO awesome to listen to a book I made!!! Cya later!

-SunnyFox57

From Ben

Sunny i think they were just trying to be supportive, kinda like how we use #FF4L to show fanfiction four life. If they were trying to impersonate you they would have signed off with a - Sunnyfox57

Ben, I read ur newest chapter of TAOH. Wow, John’s power is AWESOME. I guess he can just tame creatures by touching them? Wow that’s cool. And they got one of the artifacts!!! And now they can defeat June! 🥳. I can’t wait to see what happens next!

-SunnyFox57

Umm…guys? I’m not COMPLETELY sure but I think someone just tried to impersonate me.

This is what they said in broodmother lysrix:

“ You all should be more supportive today #sunnyfox”

?????? Idk if they were impersonating me or telling me to be supportive or what…

I don’t know what is going on. Anyways…I’m off to read chapter 64 of TAOH! Cya!

-A slightly confused SunnyFox57

Yes Sunny you can im not at the encounter part yet. Plus still waiting on MGG

- Ben

Sunnyfox, I read chapter twenty!!! It was great!!! Hmm, so Cyra is in love with Jack. But how she describes it… it seems like something else. And Josephina and Jaquin may be able to share a fraction of their powers with each other. Interesting. Does that mean it’s the same with Cyra and Cyrus (I can’t remember if they share the same color medallions). I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the new chapter!!!

Ben, maybe Tom wasn’t talking about the Shadowy Figure in that one chapter of THOM, but maybe the spy. I don’t know. Maybe he doesn’t see his brother as family anymore and meant friend in a sarcastic tone.

-PrimalApex:)

From Ben

OK thanks for your villains. Uhhh, guess were waiting for MGG and thats it. Anyway, Sunny I really liked Chapter 20. So if there are twins the medallion may glow the same color? Interesting.. That means Josephina and Jaquin might be able to use each others powers like William suggested. I also feel the same way about Jack, Cyra.

whew im tired

Also sorry if i spell my name wrong in some tips.😔😔

-sylveevee

Okay, correcting myself. Good enough isn’t what I meant but rather best choices that aren’t too OP or too reliant on others.

Wyvernian, I just realized I forgot to read your newest chapter of PoP!!! It was great!!! I wonder what Cinder has planned for bargaining for a trade for the artifacts… if she even has them. I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!

Sunnyfox, I read your newest chapter of TWOTP!!! They were great!!!! I wonder what Marvelo’s request was going to be? And can I say that Tom reminds me a lot of Lord Shen (I think that’s his name) from Kung Fu Panda 2!! Oh deer, I hope Josephina and Jaquin can play it out without revealing themselves. And Jack is still being stalked by the Shadowy Figure, whoever he is. I wonder if Jack will lead him straight to the castle or if he’ll find out he’s being followed and try to shake him off. I really enjoyed both and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!!

Sylveevee, I read the newest chapter of TOT!!!! It was very good!!! So Queen Sylveevee is calling Aragorn Prince Black, interesting!!! And Sheeri has taken off to the Black Obelisk now!!!! I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!

Also I just realized autocorrect got me with chapter ten’s main title changing from Ultimus to Ultimately. CURSE YOU AUTOCORRECT THE PLATYPUS!!!!!

Until Next Time!!!

-PrimalApex:)

Sorry Wyvernian if I accidentally spoiled anything for you, if you’re planning on reading TTDOT. 😬. From now on I’ll warn y’all when I’m about to make a spoiler alert.

-SunnyFox57

From Ben

you cant let anything drag you down MrGhostGamer. All of us here care! PS: I read the Prologue to your new story, its a really cool idea! So are you writing this one along with Hopes Call, or something else?