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Chapter twenty eight of TOT is in progress. It should be out in a few days. Also hi Sketch1300!
Ben I enjoyed the newest chapter!!! The hunter cave!! It’s really sad that no one likes Skylar anymore..(Although she DID almost kill Rick). I can’t wait to see them defeat the creatures to get the artifact!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!
Anyways…I’ll cya around! ✌️
-SunnyFox57
From Ben
Sylveevee, Chapter 21 of QOA was really enjoyable! Draco and Carnilius do bring up a point. What if Fox is working with Milo and Pat? We don’t know her that well, nor her power.. But, guess not. Fox is going to tell the united groups that Milo and Pat are on their way to get the next bosses. How are they going to prepare for this? Maybe it’d be a good idea to start getting more dinosaurs.
Wyvernian, YES, Samuel’s basically a sociopath. Well at least he doesn’t find joy in making others suffer like a masochist… which is why Samuel is actually, I’d say the most evil person in TAOH (maybe someone can prove me wrong, there’s probably someone more ‘evil’).
Anyway that’s all, laters.
Ben, TOT chapter 27 was awesome!!! SAMUEL!!! My dude is saying killing a half dozen lives is worth doing against those he thinks are threats yet never shown any signs to be threats!!! He’s beginning to lean on the edge of no return. I’m definitely wondering what Star’s reaction will be when this happens? I definitely think Andrew wouldn’t have known how to respond or give advice beyond that since he’s never felt romantic love before. So I think his response was pretty good!!! Interesting that the Element seemed to call Aurora to it. Very interesting? I’m definitely interested to see what will happen when Andrew finds out about Samuel stowing away!! And what will happen with Neddy, Ruby, Sylas and Erica!! I really enjoyed it!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!! Also a question about the jet, what type is it supposed to be? Is it more fictional like a quinjet, is it a futuristic commercial like a learjet or smaller, or just a futuristic military jet like an F22? Just curious for story purposes!!
C of The Brotherhood of the Old Birds Sovereign Spino, Is your mental health okay? It doesn’t sound like it.
From Ben
Progress on TOT Chapter 27 is going nicely. So at the moment not all the villains are going to be abstracted in this chapter, a decent amount would be. Im thinking the next chapter it shifts to this POV, all villains that were selected could be abstracted already for a reason.
PrimalApex Chapter 12 of Ultimus was great! The references were really funny and honestly the image of the corrupted raptors aimlessly chasing a regular one sounds pretty scary. Imagine seeing your supposed brethren trying its best to kill you and its like twice as strong and stamina resilient as you. Hmm, wonder what the creature at the end was.
Wyvernian Chapter 56 was awesome! And funny, Salizar is back in the flesh! His devious master plan might actually come to fruition. And the monologues, all villains should have one! But now everything depends on Caesar and Nash’s group. Hopefully they have everything handled, I cant wait to see what happens next!
Guess thats all, seeya around
Wyvernian, I read chapter 56 of PoP!!! It was really good!!! Salizar is so arrogant and crazy. Yet quite the genius, what a very interesting invention he created. Anyways though, his plan was interesting and good, yet his defeat will be even greater!!! The only problem with his plan is what a shock he’ll get when after he kills all the humans, more will just randomly appear and continue appearing, unless he figured out the Engrammic Matrix? 12 hours I think was more time than they had last time, so it shouldn’t be too difficult from there. But it begs the question if he has anyone after Hades’ group and if so who? Cinder? I really enjoyed it!!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
I genuinely have no idea what going on, I read some stuff from silver dye after forgetting what this was for a year and the OGs are like fighting everyone or smt, I was around in 2022 and 2021 but never recognized as my stories were not very good. But if someone could fill me in that would be awesome. Who knows, maybe I’ll keep writing
Signing off for now
-DFL
Hi guys.
Sylveevee, I read chapter twenty six! It was great! Oh no Milo got out!!! And it was really cool how Slyl went to the white obelisk.
Ben, I enjoyed the remade chapters. Poor Paul, I hope his nose heals. And wow, this mystery girl is very strange. Hmm…I wonder what’s going on. Idk. Anyways I don’t really know who my least fav character in TAOH is anymore. There’s a lot of characters that I despise but none that I could really “hate”. Although…I do want to…mess with lil Jack a bit in TOT. 😈.
Lamprey, and break it! Welcome! Break-it, it’s really you’re choice whether or not if you want to write a multiverse in your story. If you want to, I’d say go for it. Also My story is actually a series. It’s called “The Riddles of The Phoenixes series”. The first book starts in allosaurus and the other books follow it. You may have to scroll a bit to find the prologues. And I’m one of the writers in the Omega Timeline. It’s in Yi Ling exclusive. Anyways…cya!
-SunnyFox57
How is Apex (the dragon) 4th largest? Who is bigger besides Rockwell, Am I forgetting someone? He’s an alpha variant of a dragon so he’s even bigger than a usual dragon, are you counting the king titan? I thought he was gonna be shrunk.
Also I have a thought, so when the characters argue the obelisk glows brighter (or absorbs more light ig) so maybe that could speed up the extraction process, we need some way to speed this up because the villains just sitting at the obelisk slowly abstracting is gonna get really boring, and weren’t we going to have the villains attack the heroes and make them retreat to the mansion where Syl shows them the white obelisk? Anyway that’s all, off to read the next journey chapter.
-Wyvernian
From Ben on the other computer
For any wonderin I’m already talking with Lamprey, it’s pretty nice so far talking
PrimalApex Chapter 13 was great! So Nightfall chose to resign on his own, but obviously they don’t want leaked secrets so they’re gonna kill him?? Right, that seems fair enough.. But the Order really knows about the Five too? They might be really powerful if that’s the case. Does their influence spread across other ARKs too besides The Island? And what was that sound at the end? Maybe the Rhyniognatha’s attention got attracted from all the bickering?
Sylveevee I really liked TOT Chapter 26! It’s a little sad Queen Syl has to go through such measures to gain the trust of Aragorn and his family.. Hopefully she realizes that if she’s more honest and puts more effort into building a bond between the both of the groups they’ll succeed. Also the abstracting Milo part was great.
For future chapters I think it’d make sense everyone is that certain files take longer times to abstract than others. That’s why Rockwell and Apex could not come in at the same time because both of their files are large (Rockwell’s like the second largest creature and Apex is like fourth). Power levels and strength are also taken into account as well. So some average joe like Lil Jack will be brought in immediately, while Apex may take an hour to bring in because he’s so large. That also may be why Rockwell is brought in as human and not his element corrupted form.
That’s all for now, seeya around
PS: I’m almost done with revisions of the TAOH chapters so Chapter 66 will come out sooner or later
Sylveevee youre up!
MrGhostGamer all your recent chapters were great!
Also guys TADC was a joke they are NOT being put in TOT. Hope this helps!
Ooh so Rockwell just inhabited Buddy’s body.. not good, not good at all. The search for Melissa grows more difficult. And Rockwell is still alive, right, just not as powerful as he was. Why do i find Chapter 3 funny? Rockwell just sleeping gives me a laugh.
And wow, there goes Connor, he’s dead! Ah, not really it seems. Getting to DC might be harder than we expected. Hmm, I dont trust the Rejected tho. Talia seemed surprised at her own name, maybe they made it up? And WolfGang sounds familiar too. Fanfictioner? Ah yes, correct. Hopefully they dont do anything forcefully to Connor for their plans against the government. Eh, he hates it too it should be good.
Cant wait to see what happens for the other chapters!
TOT Chapter 25 was nice! Hmm, how does Steve know about all that? Well that was a funny chapter, that gave me the giggles! (Also Steve has had every disease to exist how is this guy not dead yet..)
I hope Joe Kong gets more screentime in the next POV of Pandora because I forgot he existed
Anyway, seeya!
From Ben
MrGhostGamer you’re up for the next chapter of TOT!
PrimalApex, I really loved Chapter 24 of TOT all the character personalities were on point! Aurora and the others’ reactions to Andrew and Erica’s academic achievements were so accurate, I don’t think I would have come up with something like that. It makes sense considering Aurora tried all her life to be the best so she could get into a good college, but meeting two bigger fish would obviously be a shock to her.
Ruby also feeling lonely was really accurate. Over time in TAOH she grew really close to Neddy, and now he’s one of the only people she’s comfortable with (not even Aurora, who was her friend, doesn’t really help she abandoned her).
Andrew is honestly such a good guy in TOT, he probably will be the same in future Ultimus chapters too when he meets these survivors. He’s a really good leader and I definitely like him more than Samuel (not like anyone does).
Erica’s discovery that they all come from different worlds was also really well done. The conflicting decision was well done as well and I really liked how their characters conflict with one another. Erica obviously doesn’t trust them as they come from other worlds, but Andrew reasons that they need to work together because the news would cause more panic and destruction. Really good stuff. (also I laughed at the part where Andrew said that Sylas could die from the panic LOL).
Anyway this chapter was super good. I really enjoyed it.
Hmm, some ideas though for the next chapters with TAOH or Ultimus POV:
Erica did tell Ruby about the ARKs, and we know that the TAOH group isn’t exactly aware they’re on a ARK. They do know that the place they’re on was once in a story though. Neddy does have his speculations that there’s something deeper though. So maybe either of us could explore that (especially since he and Ruby are close).
Anyways I loved it. Later!
Oof, 7 days of bashing my head and writing and over 2k words later. TOT Chapter 24 is out! I am so sorry it took so long for chapter 24, I really didn’t know what to do for this chapter but I didn’t want to take that long for this chapter. I really hope you all enjoy it!!! I’m sorry if it’s overwhelming in some parts.
Wyvernian, I read chapter 55!!!!! It was great!!! Omg!!! Vinestrap is just replacing everyone isn’t he? Well Caldren II seems to be a lot more scary than Caldren was. I’m glad they have their own Dinopithecus King on their side!!! What I’m really surprised about is that the regular Dinopithecus King wasn’t going to fight Nash and the others. But this is definitely going to be an epic fight!!! I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)