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Okay, now that we’ve spotted the imposter impersonating Moon again (And SpecialRaptor, sorry that happened). I like chapter 78, it’s another cliffhanger and I go flying off the cliff every time there’s a cliffhanger but it gets me pumped for the next chapter, especially because it’s the dream state chapter for Spark!!! This feels a bit weird, but is it just me or does the name Swiper fit just a bit for the imposter, it just feels like when moon spots the impersonator, everyone else kinda does the Swiper, No Swiping quote from Dora. I don’t think this should stick because it’ll just encourage him more to impersonate people and I don’t want to do that. But I thought it was a bit of a funny thing to make out an annoying situation. Anyway I don’t wanted to say. Moon, did a good job on this one as a cliffhanger, can’t wait for the next one!!!! Also I laughed pretty hard reading your note for the Imposter!!! Anyways on to read the next story for me!!!!!
-Apex
Wow, I really like the end of Hero’s of Pandora!!!! I am excited for Protectors of Pandora or PoP!!! I am now gonna start reading I think jointed mysteries or king of the wyverns. Best parts of the HoP, “SILENCE DODO I’m monologging”, every single facepalm by Caesar, and Ping’s silly, brainless moments he had, especially the story of the carno!!! But your story was really great Wyvernian and I can’t wait for the next book of of the Pandora Chronicles!! Also still waiting patiently for Chapter 78 of the Obelisk. :)
-Apex
The Red Pike
Nerva’s Story Part Fifteen
By Red Dragon
Nerva had done it. He had ended the Li bloodline. He finally had killed- “Gah!” He was just disarmed, then stabbed in the shoulder by Tyrana with his pike. He unsheathed his sword and slashed Tyrana’s right arm. They were now both on the deck, with Christopher trying desperately to get Siyu to wake up again. He was the only one still standing up. “You’ll pay for this”, he said. He left both Tyrana and Nerva there, and swam back to shore with Siyu’s body. Nerva was barely still alive. He rolled his head over to the left to see Tyrana, on the deck of the boat, just like him. He rolled his head over to the right. He saw a replica of Goliath that Tyrana had put in the water, probably to lure another big creature over, but she didn’t need that now that the real thing was crushing Nerva’s troops. Suddenly tentacles came out of the water, along with countless other aquatic creatures. The same red tentacles that Nerva remembered from so long ago. It grabbed both Nerva and Tyrana and dragged them both underwater...
The Red Pike
Siyu's Story
Chapter 8
A loud thump on the surface of the motorboat caught everyone's attention. They turned around to see Nerva hop from argent. "Finally," he said, pulling his pike from back. "I've waited a long time for this." He lunged at Siyu, but was interrupted when Xiaochou leapt from his shoulder and landed on Nerva's face. Nerva furiously pulled the monkey from his face, threw him to the ground, and stabbed his pike through Xiaochou's diaphragm, killing him instantly.
"How could you?! Monster!" Siyu screamed, drawing his sword and running at Nerva. Tyrana and Christopher ran to help him, but were intercepted by Nerva's argentavis. Nerva kicked Siyu in the stomach and swung his pike down towards his head. Siyu dodged out of the way and swung his sword at Nerva. His sword caught the neck of Nerva's pike, leaving them in a struggle. Remembering whe he was here, Siyu pushed Nerva back. "My mother," he shouted over the waves, "Where is she?!"
The boat hit a wave and jerked, causing everyone to lose their balance. Nerva took the opprotunity and tackled Siyu. Siyu leapt to his feet and tried to swing his sword again, but Nerva's pike intercepted the blow, causing the sword to fly from Siyu's hand. Nerva lifted his pike, about to attack again when a loud roar sounded from the shore. Siyu looked up as a large, monsterish creature walked down the beach, crushing as many of Nerva's soldiers as it could find. The sight left Nerva distracted, allowing Siyu to pull a metal arrow from his quiver and stab it into his Nerva's shoulder.
Nerva let out a cry as Siyu forced him to his knees. "My mother," he repeated, twisting the arrow. Nerva said nothing, but in one smooth motion knocked Siyu's feet out from under him bringing him to his knees. Immediatley, a sharp pain shot through his chest, but Siyu couldn't scream. He looked down. Nerva's pike was impaling one of his lungs. Blood rose in Siyu's throat, and as it filled his lung he found it harder to breathe.
Nerva loosed his pike and Siyu collapsed, coughing out blood. As he gasped for air that wouldn't come, Nerva loomed over him. "You wanted to see your mother," he said with a grin. He lifted his pike in the air again, aiming at Siyu's head. "I'll take you to her."
The Red Pike
Red’s Story, Part 10
Red had felt something while they were at the arctic waters a long time ago, I feeling that wanted her to go to the red floating shape in the sky. Red explained to the others she had to go find something, decently far away and she would be alone. I got there, waited a bit, and then I heard something, something unforgettable.
(Sorry for the short chapter, I’m running out of ideas but hopefully next chapter will be long.)
Red pike
Tyranas story part 5
Tyrana snuck out of where they set up base and grabbed a spyglass. She looked through it and knew that she saw Goliath. She made a dummy Goliath and threw it into the ocean. Then she thought “maybe I could get him to fight a big underwater creature. THEN NO ONE WILL BE IN MY WAY!!! she kept on pondering how she would get him into the water and she had a plan. A ghidorasaurus plan...
The Red Pike
Goliaths story
Chapter 8
Goliath was hunting down Ghidorasaurus. He’d been following its scent for a while now but still hadn’t been able to find it. But soon, he found footprints and the strong smell of dead meat. Goliath followed the scent until he found Ghidorasaurus crouched over a dead brontosaurus. Goliath roared a challenge at Ghidorasaurus, who turned towards him. The two faced each other for a minute, He could see fear in Ghidorasaurus’ eyes and he knew the armour would work. Then, Ghidora charged.
The battle lasted a day, by the end of it, the ground was stained with blood, both of the giants were covered in each others blood, Ghidora was badly wounded, but so was Goliath, he had a massive gash on his right arm where the armour had been torn off. The wounded Ghidora charged at Goliath, who knocked him aside using his axe. The massive dinosaur tried again, and again, but each time Goliath knocked him aside. Then Ghidora pointed his head at the sky and roared, it was a roar so loud that everyone on the island could here it. Then a pack of Allos appeared from the trees, followed by more allos and some rexes, and soon a few gigas. Goliath was surrounded by dinosaurs. He readied his axe as a massive fight began, he tore through the allos with his axe, easily dispatching them. The rexes were more challenging, but he still managed to kill a few. Then a giga rammed into him from behind, knocking him over, it stood above him, looking down at him. Goliath tried to reach for his axe but the giga stood on his hand and prepared to bite. The giga opened its mouth wide and Goliath took the opportunity to shove his hand into the gigas mouth and choke it, soon the giga went limp and Goliath got up. He picked up the axe and turned to the army of dinosaurs, this would take a long time.
Soon they were all dead, and only Ghidora remained. The dinosaur was clearly scared, so it ran. Goliath followed it and grabbed it by the head with one hand, he pulled on the top jaw, opening its mouth, and then, using his axe, Goliath sliced off Ghidora’s bottom jaw, causing a cascade of blood to splash onto the floor. Goliath dropped the half dead Ghidora to the ground and using the blade of his axe, sliced Ghidora open from its neck down to its tail, a huge tide of dark blood poured out onto the ground, filling the battlefield with blood. Goliath walked away from the dead body, covered from head to toe in blood, he had killed his nemesis. But as he walked away, he smelt something else among the scent of blood and death, the smell of humans. He detected some of Nervas soldiers, as well as a human he recognised as Christopher Walker, who was with two others he didn’t know. Goliath slowly walked towards the scents, wondering what he would find...
The Red Pike
Nerva’s Story Part Twelve
By Red Dragon
Nerva was in his quarters, thinking about the past inhabitants of the island. How Mei-Yin Li killed Nerva’s father. Nerva tried to unite the island, and stop its inhabitants from fighting like savage dogs for scraps. He nearly conquered the island, but got too power hungry. He thought the obelisks would give him infinite power. Then in the tek cave he died, along with the rest of the men and women he commanded. A commander walked into his room. “Sir we have found them. They are trying to escape to the east beach.” “Good. Give me twenty soldiers plus Rockwell, we ride now.”
Chapter three of TLS is out in vulture!! Im on a roll!!!
Ben, chapter ninety four was awesome!!! It was so epic and mysterious!! This makes me even more curious about the Key master. And June is dead!!!! 🥳🥳
I bet Syl is happy about that! The words at the end sent a shiver down my spine. Ooh I wonder what they mean…I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
-SunnyFox57
Moon, I’ll take your word on it, but I still wonder. I can’t wait for the next chapter of whichever one releases next!!!!
Ben, I read chapter 92!!!!! 92 was awesome😢!!!!! I enjoyed the fight!!! Skyler’s death was amazing and sad and painful and I loved it!!!! I loved this chapter so much even though this one has had one of the saddest deaths so far!!
93 was amazing!!!! Dang the healing brews are able to do that!!!! That’s crazy!!! Not as crazy as Landon having his arm chopped off!!!!! That was amazing!!! And the crew beating the heck out of June was great!! Paul showing mercy to her and trying to make friends with June was great!!! And of course June is insane and try’s to beat the snout out of Paul for showing mercy. I wonder what Ben is up to?!? And why he has two separate powers!!! Is this his power that isn’t coming from the implant?! I really enjoyed it!!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
SandmasterXD, Chapters 10 and 11 of ATLWCS were great!!! I loved the Giga attack!!! It was awesome!! So Andrew and Max are the only ones in their platoon alive? Sad, and the Soviets know now Max is German. I loved them!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
Sunnyfox, I read chapter one of TLS!!!! It was great!!!! That poor gardener, so Tom’s ability to take control of one’s body forces the person to become mute. Very interesting!! But I feel bad for Tom at this point and bad for the gardener. James really was a troublemaker of a character. Well, Tom’s an old man now. I loved it!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!
Until Next Time!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Interesting that you think Nor and Zeer had any thoughts other than just going down to the festival, Apex. Nor really was just agreeing with Gull because he didn’t want them fighting anymore. Nor is… pretty respectable, but I can’t quite say that after Chapter 3 now can I lol. Nor has his reasons for everything, I guess. Yeah, that’ll be enough of a teaser.
—Moon
Galaxia, I’m glad to hear it’s doing great!!! I can’t wait to learn more about it and read it!!! I would really like to see something like that!! Don’t mind being intrusive with us, asking questions and sharing stuff!! We always enjoy hearing stuff!! Yeah!! Moon’s been showing us some of her artwork of Pandora and the others and she showed us your one artwork of Pandora!!! They’ve all looked awesome!!!!
The maps are cool and each of the unique places are great and cool!! Oooooh! You’ve been learning Ark lore!! How far along are you into the lore? Or do you mean Moon’s Fjordur Lore? Either way, both are great!!! The theorist part of my brain has been working overtime trying to figure out stuff!! And I know a huge portion if not most of the Ark Lore!!!!
Speaking of, Moon!!! Pandora chapter 9 was great!!!! Poor Pandora, I feel bad for her being looked upon like a monster or something that isn’t a wyvern. Even though she causes some sort of destruction of doom for the Wyvern kingdom. I’m very curious what happened to Pandora? She definitely wasn’t happy with Gull spying on her. Poor Gull, stuck with her bully sister. Why do I get the feeling he’ll get the first “punishment” out of their group. And I definitely think Nor and Zeer had ulterior motives going down into the celebration. I really wonder if Toxin and Izzabee have anything else to discuss with Bria besides Pandora. Probably not, but you never know! Bria definitely has a good friend group!! I love them!!! I love the chapter Moon!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Sunnyfox, chapter 48 was awesome!!! Bear is just the best!!! This chapter just has the greatest sad moments here with Aurora and Sunny the Fox!!! She’s such a great character and is becoming one of my characters!! Hm, I wonder how it all worked!!! You did awesome Sunnyfox!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
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