Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Chapter 1: Ben
The boy woke up with a startle, a cold breeze flowing on his bare back. He slowly rose from the ground, and looked around to see he wasn’t in the comfy bed at home. Instead, he was on the sandy beaches of what seemed to be an island.
“Oh no, here we go again,” Ben thought to himself. He had no idea where he was, come to think of it, he didn’t have any memory of being transported here. Surely, he would’ve noticed? Maybe it was a dream?
Ben looked down to see all he had was some dirty old underwear on, and he could feel a hum coming from his wrist. He irritably looked at it to see a strange gem embedded within. He scratched it, as a painful itch surged throughout.
“Where the hell am I, and how the hell did this all happen?” Ben said to himself. He didn’t see anyone else, and he had no idea what to do. He looked at the implant again, but nothing changed, how would he survive?
“Okay, I can do this, I just have to get some shelter, food, and some water,” Ben muttered. He went around the beach to see if he could salvage some resources, and found a few pieces of torn wood and thatch on the ground, as well as a few stones. For some reason, there were a bunch of random animals around the beach, which was odd, because Ben didn’t think there would be many animals at a beach. As he took a closer look at what seemed to be a bird, it chirped almost obliviously, paying no attention to him.
“Wait a minute, this looks a bit like a Dodo,” Ben thought to himself. He punched it on the beak, and it squawked angrily, beginning to squabble away at a slow rate. Ben looked at his knuckles to see a bit of blood, and he pushed the pain away. Ben knew he’d have to make some tools, so using his basic knowledge of survival, he constructed a pickaxe out of the stone, wood, and thatch around the beach. He looked at the crude tool, and decided it’s be best to kill some animals with it. He felt another chill on his back, and he looked behind him to see that the sun was setting.
“I have to be quick, or else it’ll be too dark to see and do anything,” Ben thought to himself. He went up to a large boulder that was on the grass, and began to chip away at it. Pieces of flint and stone fell to the ground, and he picked it up. He put his pickaxe down, and afterwards decided to make a torch with the flint he just made. He rubbed two pieces of wood together very quickly, and a fire started on the base of the torch. He held it up in the air, and wind breezed by, carrying the heat of the flames to his chest, warming him up greatly. He sighed in relief, and rested by the rock where he had just mined the stone and flint. As he was resting and regaining his energy, his stomach rumbled madly, and he let out a cry of pain. His stomach began to churn and twist in hunger. He had to eat something quick.
Should he try killing one of the dodos for their meat? No, it’d take too long, maybe there were some berries around in the bushes he could eat. He got up from the ground and went over to a bush, shoving his hand in there for anything to eat. He felt something round and smooth, and he pulled his hand out and opened it up. There were a few black berries in his palm. He didn’t care if they were poisonous or not, he’d either starve to death or get diarrhea, it didn’t matter. He got more of the black berries, and afterwards ate eight of the suckers. After a few minutes, his stomach stopped growling. He smiled happily, knowing he’d at least be able to survive for a few more nights.
All of a sudden, drowsiness overcame him, and he fell to the ground, passed out. Before Ben lost full consciousness, he could hear the flapping of wings, and a man laughing sarcastically at him.
“Would you look at that, the runt got himself knocked out,” Something blunt him in the head, and everything turned to black.
The Red Pike
Siyu's Story Ch 4
By CL1
Siyu limped through the woods, Dajiao by his side. All but one of her children had died during the fight, her son. He dropped suddenly. Dajiao walked back to her son and sat by his side. Siyu did the same. They waited as the carno's breathing slowed to an eventual end. Dajiao place her head on his side and let out a soft cry. Siyu dropped his head. How could he have been so foolish, to let Dajiao and her children suffer like this? They were all he had, and he'd gotten them killed. He looked up again. Dajiao was standing over him, awaiting his command. He could see the pain in her eyes, physical and emotional, yet she continued to be loyal. "I won't make you face this again," Siyu promised her. "Next time, it will be Nerva who suffers." After giving Dajiao's son a proper funeral, they returned home. Xiaochou was running through the kitchen, bringing items to the stranger, who was cooking again. A cough from the corner startled Siyu, and he quickly raised his bow towards a shadowed figure.
A man limped out from the darkness, clutching his ribs with one arm. He looked Siyu up and down and chuckled, "You're shorter than I thought you'd be."
Siyu wasn't amused. "Tell me who you are and why I shouldn't kill you." The cook stepped between Siyu and the injured man. "He was hurt," the cook said indignantly. "You didn't seem the sort to turn away a person in need."
The injured man waved the cook out of the way. "My name is Christopher Walker. I'm Helena Walker's sister. She spoke of a Li, Mei-Yin. You're her son, right?" Siyu said nothing. Christopher stepped forward a little. Siyu tightened his grip on the bow. "I'm looking for my sister. She was last seen with Nerva and Mei-Yin. I heard Mei-Yin was missing too. I thought maybe you and I could work together to get answers out of him." Siyu remained silent, his bow still trained on Christopher's head. Christopher sighed, "If you want me to leave, just say so, but say something at least."
"My mother said Helena knew everything about the creatures of the island. Do you?"
Christopher laughed, "Well, not as much as her, but certainly more than anyone else." Siyu lowered his bow. "Good. If I'm going to get answers out of Nerva, I'm going to need a new army."
Duke, yes it is!!!
First, you’re gonna need this thing’s favorite food: MONEY!!💵. As the Fantastic Tame DLC costs $5.99 individually, but if you have the Lost Colony DLC preorder package, it’ll be included with the Elderclaw.
Next thing is the actual taming process, where you’ll need a torch to attract it, and it’ll land on your shoulder. Then you’ll go through some mini games of gathering XP, killing creatures, and of course feeding this Drakeling. Rinse and repeat until fully tamed. There’s a few things that I might’ve missed, and I’d suggest that you watch a video first before taming them.
Anyway, Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
How to view story section tips/messages in real time:
1. Go to a browser (Safari, Chrome, Firefox anything works)
2. Search up Dododex Stories and click on the link.
3. Filter messages by Newest
4. Refresh
5. Ta da! You can now view messages in real time.
PS: This only works for story sections on creatures, and not dyes as dyes do not have a story section.
How to catch impersonators:
If you spot a suspicious or concerning message, then follow the following steps.
1. Go to Dododex Stories
2. Find the tip/message that is suspicious.
3. Click on the day the story was posted, or how long ago it was posted (eg: 3 days ago OR Mar 19, 2023)
4. Scroll to the bottom where it says "More stories by author". If those stories/messages dont match the stories the real person posted.. its an impersonator!
PS: This only works in story sections of a creature, as dyes do not have story sections.
Hope this helped!
Copied and pasted from…Apex I think?? Idk lol, I was just to lazy to type it out.
-SunnyFox57
Hello new person!! Welcome to achatina!! Can’t wait to hopefully see more of your contributions! :3
EquusKid, or Diplolover…yes yes it is..
Diplolover, the newest chapter was very cool!! It was very intriguing and I can’t wait to see more!!
Also yeah the tips will show up faster if you use the safari Dododex browser.
Ahhhhh I’m slowly catching up on reading chapters guys, I promise!! Currently reading through Journey and Ultimus. :)
-SunnyFox57 is feeling very lazy…
Yeah, I wish they did too Dinoslayer. And I sadly don’t remember your first name you went by. But I do know what happened to Silver Dye. Now what happened was information was exposed about major Silver Dye users calling the Fanfiction of current poor and saying all the writers were basically a bunch ten year olds. Not only that, they spoke very poorly to people on their discord. Being very rude and verbally disgusting to others joining their discord. Now the persons who did this I think apologized on their discord for this after the fact of getting exposed of it. And Bob did say he would work hard to make sure that nothing like that would happen again in their discord and would keep in touch as an ambassador with the Fanfictioneers of Achatina and the OG writers. But in the aftermath of it all. Silver dye went extinct. People didn’t feel right being apart of the community after that. People left, others came to Achatina. And some though remained or made new dye communities. But in the end. Silver perished because none of the major OGs really wanted to try to regrow and take responsibility for the group in the dex. It’s honestly quite sad but this is what happened.
-PrimalApex:)
RelatingHen, I’m glad you’re enjoying it but if you haven’t already. Read The Obelisk first!! My story is an AU sequel to that story!!
Dinoslayer, awesome to see you here again!!!
GitezGood, awesome to see you back!!
Also posted new chapters of Ultimus and Journey!! Up to 20 on Ultimus in Ichthyosaur and 24-27 of Journey!!
U.N.T!!!
-PrimalApex:)
SangToareGirl, hi! Welcome to achatina!! It’s great that new writers are joining the community!
I have read your story and it was pretty cool, very well done! Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
Also guys, I swear I’m working on TLW and Fire And Fangs and I AM GOING TO READ THE NEWEST CHAPTERS!!! /lh. I’m just really busy run but I WILL get to it. Anyways.. cya later!
-SunnyFox57
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