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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
From Ben
Im on vacation for the weekend, so no chapter until then!
Ooh SunnyFox, a collab! Well ill be sure to read it when it comes out, whats it gonna be about?
SandMaster, I suggest Chapter 12 take place out at sea on that Mosasaurus and Fuzzball meets an enemy there! Like some sort of sea beast before reaching their destination. It'll be a good chance to introduce new characters, since im pretty sure others were on that Mosa.
I’m happy to answer yur questions, Sunny! I am DO watch Marvel! I’ve seen almost all of their movies. Ironically, Yelena is one of my favorite characters, along with Natalie, Peter Quill, and Rocket ahhhh
What will I write after The Obelisk? I believe I’ve answered that before, but it will be very juicy *laughs evilly*
Here’s the list of the story’s planned after the Obelisk: (You will get more detail on what they are about soon!)
-Pandora
-Clans
-See
-The Rune (The Obelisk: Alternate version)
-More maybe? Eee?
—Moon
From Ben
Fun Fact of Arks Over Heaven: The book that Ben wanted to finish is titled “Three Ways to Love”. I guess you can tell it’s a romance story. Maybe you’ll find out more about that story later on.
Oh yeah btw Chapter 26 is out in Dimorphodon. That one was pretty fun to work on! Man I love working on different POVs.
Sunny, great work on Chapters 18-20! Bella sounds like such a good dog, although I wonder what happened to her since we don’t see her in Tortuga…
The snowball fight in Chapter 19 was a lot of fun to read. And I definitely saw those darn moments between James and Arianna. It makes me wonder if we will get an Arianna pov… maybe she doesn’t like him yet, and he doesn’t like her yet either, but they’ll fall super hard for each other or something because of other circumstances, that may or may not involve Cole.
Also poor Cole in Chapter 20. I guess that’s what they mean when love is blind… actually that’s not what it means 🤓. - Samuel. But when we’re blinded by love we fail to think properly. It’s a little sad, really. Although I’ve never experienced it myself so who knows.
Laters, I’m interested to see the new stories! And Sunny it seems you’re on the pass to surpass multiple stories in word count.
Ben, man I can’t wait for ur next chapter! Also I’ve never listened to undertale music but I might. I usually just listen to random songs while writing. Great idea for the band name! I just gotta find out which mythical creature to do….also I mostly choose music that fits with the moment. For example, James got grounded and everyone think he’s immature and irresponsible thats why I chose light it up bc it says “people always telling me I’m just a crazy teen”. And when they started the band I chose Turn The Music Up bc well…it kind of fit. Also thanks for the advice. I have trouble finding reasons why people fall in love with each other. Pls respond soon. Anyways…cya!
-SunnyFox57.
P.S: I can’t wait for twenty six.
From Ben
Fun Fact of Arks Over Heaven: While you wait for Chapter 26 to come out (it’s a different POV story haha), here’s another one to think about. A lot of the names that are used in Arks Over Heaven are directly related to the sky Aurora, Borealis, Skyler, ig you could say Sunny too. It’s kinda supposed to be related to the name of the story. Heaven. Well, I know Heaven’s not in the sky, but, it’s close enough, right?
Moon I listened to the soundtrack while reading that chapter and I couldn’t agree more. The chilling buildup that the music provided sort of made the situation in the beginning even more eerie and desolate, almost sort of like a “She just died, she just died, she just died”, almost like denial or hopelessness. But then BOOM! It explodes into rage, like how Orbit did, for a little bit, until finally it dies down because Orbit is overwhelmed by the Ravagers…
And SunnyFox I also know what leitmotifs are! Reminds me of Undertale music, love their music I listen to it whenever I write, especially fan-made ones. Leitmotifs are basically pieces of a soundtrack that appear again in another soundtrack, typically of the same franchise, and it’s really neat!
SunnyFox, I read your last two chapters and you ate that up like damnnn especially Chapter 17. Also I like how you’ve included mythological creatures in the story as I mean, why not? There’s dinosaurs in Ark and other crazy mythological creatures in Scorched Earth, right? Well, since Sirens are found at sea, I’m wondering if James/Aragorn would ever meet one on the way to Tortuga… And hey, I think I got a suggestion for your band name! It should be based off mythological creature like Siren or whatever was mentioned, I think that’d be neat. And if there’s an enemy band, IF there is an enemy band you could do like something dinosaur related as a contrast. Idk, just sayin!
Light It Up by Keeley Elise? Well these are some unique songs I’ve never heard of. How do you base the lyrics or songs that they sing? Do you choose a song based on the context of the scene or if it sounds cool? If it’s the first option, that’s really cool and must take a lot of effort! And if it’s the second, still cool!
And zamn Tom is a huge romantic. He got me curling my toes and I’m a dude. I think it was a good romantic scene, but ONE thing I’d add is a reason for them to be together. Like yeah they like each other, good enough reason, right? Like, besides the two thinking the other is cute, yk? It makes things a bit more interesting. But if there’s no reason, the two should make each other grow and help rid easily fixable flaws. For example, there were once a boy and a girl. The boy was really smart but didn’t really know how to have fun and vibe because of his constant desire for good grades, the girl knows how to have fun and vibe but she has terrible study habits! So the two could help each other out in both areas, and in turn love each other more and pull more crazy romantic scenes at the same time. Neat, huh?
That’s all everyone. And nice work on your remasters, Wyvernian! Theyre definitely more coherent and overall better than the old ones.
So just realized it’s almost the one year anniversary of the Pandora chronicles (in march idk exact date Dododex isn’t that precise but maybe we can figure it out) so I’m gonna rewrite the early chapters, I already did the prologue, it’s quite easy actually I just copy and paste and fix the grammer and plot holes and just bad writing 😂 so it shouldn’t take me long, go check em out i added more descriptive wording and a better start for the prologue I think the first line puts people off and makes them not want to read because they don’t know it’s supposed to be a note Ceasar is reading and not actually the story so I explained Ceasar picking up the note. I also noticed that people have tried to contact me in allo (it was 27 days to like months ago but still) I don’t actually check there often so don’t try and contact me there, and sunny did you say an impersonator tried to say I’m a.. furry 🙄 ok that’s just dumb..
-Wyvernain
-Wyvernain
From Ben
OMG Moon chapter 96 was so beautiful!! I could feel the earth shudder as the words graced my eyes. And that last line from Orbit really tore my heart to shreds. Well, its supposed to. But, at least Orbit can be happy again. But his effort wont be in vain, he was able to thwart most of the ravagers and now the others can safely enter the cavern, to savw Fjordur once and for all.
I am sure the five heroes will avenge them.
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