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ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion

From Ben

Fun Fact of Arks Over Heaven: While you wait for Chapter 26 to come out (it’s a different POV story haha), here’s another one to think about. A lot of the names that are used in Arks Over Heaven are directly related to the sky Aurora, Borealis, Skyler, ig you could say Sunny too. It’s kinda supposed to be related to the name of the story. Heaven. Well, I know Heaven’s not in the sky, but, it’s close enough, right?

Moon I listened to the soundtrack while reading that chapter and I couldn’t agree more. The chilling buildup that the music provided sort of made the situation in the beginning even more eerie and desolate, almost sort of like a “She just died, she just died, she just died”, almost like denial or hopelessness. But then BOOM! It explodes into rage, like how Orbit did, for a little bit, until finally it dies down because Orbit is overwhelmed by the Ravagers…

And SunnyFox I also know what leitmotifs are! Reminds me of Undertale music, love their music I listen to it whenever I write, especially fan-made ones. Leitmotifs are basically pieces of a soundtrack that appear again in another soundtrack, typically of the same franchise, and it’s really neat!

SunnyFox, I read your last two chapters and you ate that up like damnnn especially Chapter 17. Also I like how you’ve included mythological creatures in the story as I mean, why not? There’s dinosaurs in Ark and other crazy mythological creatures in Scorched Earth, right? Well, since Sirens are found at sea, I’m wondering if James/Aragorn would ever meet one on the way to Tortuga… And hey, I think I got a suggestion for your band name! It should be based off mythological creature like Siren or whatever was mentioned, I think that’d be neat. And if there’s an enemy band, IF there is an enemy band you could do like something dinosaur related as a contrast. Idk, just sayin!

Light It Up by Keeley Elise? Well these are some unique songs I’ve never heard of. How do you base the lyrics or songs that they sing? Do you choose a song based on the context of the scene or if it sounds cool? If it’s the first option, that’s really cool and must take a lot of effort! And if it’s the second, still cool!

And zamn Tom is a huge romantic. He got me curling my toes and I’m a dude. I think it was a good romantic scene, but ONE thing I’d add is a reason for them to be together. Like yeah they like each other, good enough reason, right? Like, besides the two thinking the other is cute, yk? It makes things a bit more interesting. But if there’s no reason, the two should make each other grow and help rid easily fixable flaws. For example, there were once a boy and a girl. The boy was really smart but didn’t really know how to have fun and vibe because of his constant desire for good grades, the girl knows how to have fun and vibe but she has terrible study habits! So the two could help each other out in both areas, and in turn love each other more and pull more crazy romantic scenes at the same time. Neat, huh?

That’s all everyone. And nice work on your remasters, Wyvernian! Theyre definitely more coherent and overall better than the old ones.