Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Yeah…it’s VERY VERY obvious that neither I or Ben wrote that. First of all, neither of us would say something like that about our own stories. I don’t even sign off like that either. Stop hiding by impersonating and show yourself. Stop impersonating us, it’s childish and mean. Grow up.
-SunnyFox57
from Ben
love it when people get all mad about fanfic on this site
"oh its so lame story like bro go somewhere else for fanfic I hate you1!!!!1 It is not fair i want to seee stories about the game not fanfic about the gamee! now i cant get likes!"
like hate to break it to you but this IS a fanfic site.. it has been since like 2020. If it wasnt people wouldnt post here. but, some people just cant handle the fact because when they tell their story that happened to them ingame they dont get engagement. the hard truth is that no one cares about those stories anymore. No one cares about this platform anymore. Only us.
Adults dont come here to the platform to share their stories about the game.. they dont care about that they just want to know how many resources they need to tame a certain dino. Only children will post their game stories. Why? Because they want to get popular! Thats how its always been in life. We want to be liked, loved, talked about, popular. Thats why so many kids want to start a YouTube channel. They want to be popular and get fans.
But ultimatey thats why we get likes and other people dont. Because we engage with each other and show our stories. Thatll get me and other writers here maybe a few likes (3-8), while people who write about the game would get maybe 2 at most. Because no one really cares about that. "oh ha ha i create an army of dodos to fight the overseer and i lost" like okay 🙄 ive seen that story dozens of time. Theres nothing new to tell about the game anymore.
Thats just the truth, and has been for the past four years now 🤷♂️. Change is scary, but is inevitable. Who knows? Maybe one day this platform will change and stories about the game will be the new thing.
But if people cant accept the fact they arent getting popular..
Then idk what to say. Cope harder i guess.
From Ben
Thanks for reading the previous few chapters guys. And trust me Sunny, youre gonna hate June soon enough just you wait. And Primal i enjoyed your thoughts on the newest chapter. Youre super right on the chapter name, its very intentional. And some things will be explained..
Its important to note Skyler does not know what Dodo Tales is. Shes only heard about it, which is a reason why she believes in The Obelisk more. And maybe youre right about how maybe partly of it is true about Obelisk 😉
Sandmaster thats super lame how you lost all your progress for a chapter.. i have a suggestion. Maybe you could put your story down somewhere in some writing software, then copy paste onto Dex so you cant lose anything! Because writing programs you can save.
Chapter 18/19 of Overseer was really cool and it was awesome to see what type of powers Fuzzball would have as a form of the White Out. Maybe for the next chapter Fuzzball can decide whether or not he wants to go to war, or ignore the message to protect his family. And maybe in order to stay safe from the dragon they have to delve further into the cave to find an alt exit.
And Shadow's Shadow Wranglers story (in new to SE filter) is really cool so far. Only read the first 2 chapters but ill get to the others soon. Its a really fun concept. Im guessing the two wranglers Shadow and Frost are based off their respective writers. If GhostGamer or Sunny could relay the message to Shadow thatd be great 🙂
I think thats it. Later!
Posted chapter 19 in Purlovia. I’m running out of ideas. CODE RED (you should know what it means) I want chapter 20 to be a good chapter so pls post your ideas.
SunnyFox, it’s a cool idea to make our story an animated show or a series. But it need to be published and probably be a best selling. But cool idea though.
Ben, I read your newest chapter and poor Chris!! He’s stranded with no way to communicate with his friends! Ugh June is so obsessed with getting Ben. She reminds me of a woman version, more aggressive version of Michael. Always trying to get the person they think that loves them. 😒. Give her enough time and she migghht become my least favorite character.
-SunnyFox57
From Ben
Wooooo hoooooo Chapter 40 of TAOH has released!!! In Cnidaria! 🎉🥳🥳🎉 its time to partayyyyy
66k words in total of this story and somehow i dont really know how to feel. This is the most consistent writing ive done since early 2023. i feel in the zone.
Yeah imma sleep this is kinda tiring/
from Ben
oh yeah btw who is Shadow (the writer)? I heard their stories are pretty lit. i might just have to muster my energy to read their story.
i finally managed to read some of President Loki's stories. Yee haw Waning Unity is pretty cool. Read first 10 chapters and the bond between Fraser and Lume is really unique yet its different from any other animal pov bond on the platform. I may have to read more.
And Fires and Fangs is cool too! It seems like an expansive amazing world can be made from this. Wonderin when the next chapter will release.
From Ben
Sunny movies of our stories sounds really cool. itd be expensive and time consuming, but still cool. my dream had always been to get at least one story of mine animated or put on the big screen. But Id think our stories would have to be finished, polished, and cleared of plot holes.
SunnyFox, WOAH so Fuzzballs super OP because he has the Whiteout ability (whatever that could be) first of all, and secondly the Corrupted Virus was a hoax created by the CAIFT???? I mean itd make sense that it was a hoax if they wanted to take over, but then that means everyone had to have been in on it, which includes Scar and Camo, and I DONT WANNA BELIEVE IT
I hope Eclipse is the liar here those two were so chill and so was Strongjaw man he didnt even do anything
And woah looks like a dragon's come. I bet now would be a good time to use those White Out powers Fuzzball. 😉
Sorry the next chapter hasn’t came out yet, every time I get some spare time I watch hermitcraft 😂 but I’m thinking about writing tomorrow because it’s just been too long and I really want to continue!
Angel, motivation at least for me is just getting really into my plot so that I want to write more to see where it goes and share it.
Apex, so they actually said the blimp is for the surface of aberration, so?? Will it be bigger? Actually come to think of it.. if you look at that image they showed for the bobs tales thing on the left of it shows some purple and cyan crag looking things, and I’ve never seen anything like that before it doesn’t look like abs surface or the blue zone. Is that the new surface? Will there be some way to survive on the surface now?
Sunny, yup totally agree, I understand that the show isn’t supposed to be a perfect recreation of the notes but the things they’ve seemingly changed just seem off, (haven’t watched it yet that’s why I say seemingly) supposedly Rockwell is already super evil instead of him slowly turning evil.. seems weird to take away a character arc.. and now Helena is gay too which wasn’t in the notes really it just seemed like her and mei were friends, also what’s gonna happen when they get to aberration? Because in the notes Diana and Mei were together so now are they not gonna be or is it gonna be some stupid three women love triangle… 😐 it just seems stupid to change the story so every female main character is.. ya know.. we’ll except the Queen on scorched (can’t remember her name..) unless they gender swap John.. if they do that I’m done… I think I’m gonna watch it just to be able to imagine the characters and stuff and see it in a real show but I’m just gonna ignore the plot changes, the notes are the true lore.
Anyway, that’s all I have to say for now, bye
-Wyvernain
From Ben
PrimalApex i feel so bad for Kim and Hunter and Andrew and the dog :( its so unfair how Kim and Hunter have to work for the Terran Federation on the Genesis Project, because there isnt really anywhere else to go. And plus 11586 KM from Arat Prime is like, wow thats far. Id think you could just go the other way to cut time short! Its gonna be a tough journey (unless they use some tech to teleport there or get there fast)
Also that comparison thing sounds really cool, woo hoo cant wait to see once THOM finishes!
Although Im at a bit of a dilemna.
Theres a specific character in Arks Over Heaven who has his own designated prequel. Cant say who or give too much details, but i feel as if making the prequel canon to Arks Over Heaven or vice versa would undermine the whole point of what the prequel was all about. Idk what to really do.. leave it as its own thing or bind the two together. But, im wondering what i should do because this will change the ending of the story (at least, for one of the characters)
Chapter two of Ultimus is released in Trilobite!!! I hope you all enjoy!!!
Also I just realized that I made an error in chapter one with the math of the year it is currently and when Hunter and Kim met. I changed the year by 6 years and didn’t add that to the time when they met. So for everyone. It was around twenty years since they met, not fourteen years.
Until Next Time!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
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