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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
It didn't seem rude PrimalApex I just don't have enough information on Dinos and I can not go online it had Raptor in the name so I thought it was a Raptor plus if you look on the Megaraptor Everything Else I had enough of people saying why not call it a UtahRaptor and I said the Raptor is a Utahraptor. Also the last 4 from Ark Additions I figured out Acro, Brachiosaurus, Cryo and Conacorventor. Also Tomorrow the 3rd I play ASA im not allowed too play on the weeks because of school the only time I play is for my little brother who is 2 and im like 8 to 9 years older when he wants them he goes Mraw? He has seen me and my dad looking at Drakling pics and he goes Aw cute plus he thinks the Runic Halo as Shoulder Pet is cute because my dad got it the minute it went on sale. Im going to say it I hate you Icthy birds I hate you Wildcard make them less annoying or take them out of the world
Your Rockdrake Lover
To: SangToareGirl, RelatingHen, Break-it
From: Ben
Sang, the Prologue for FATF was nice! Already left my thoughts on the Fandom so I’m going to just leave it here.
RelatingHen, Chapter 17 and 18 of JTAC was good! Nothing much else to say, though I’m curious to see how the Diplocaulus will be utilized for the Cunning cave. In my playthroughs of ARK i’ve never used that creature, I think I used Basilos for the underwater caves since they’re resistant to Cnidarias. Then again my stats are pretty boosted. Also nice to see Nesan again. Also loved how the Alpha Megs got stuck on rocks since that happens all the time when I went through underwater caves, the larger creatures constantly spawned inside the walls. Also I wonder where the rest of Sodden’s stats went if he only has 210 HP. In my playthroughs I like having 350 HP, 350 Stamina, 350 Oxygen, and 350 Weight, with a bit in everything else. Also if he’s Level 71 that means he needs like 30 more levels before he can fight the Dragon, so he might have to do some speed leveling without dying. And it seems Sodden is reaching the end of his journey on the Island. I’m interested to see how he ascends with Serenity and without Terad knowing, and I’m also wondering if anyone else will join him on his mission to destroy the Assassin Heart. I’ll be around for Chap 19. Also, apologies about no page for Creatures of Nightmares yet. The wiki pages aren’t regularly maintained, though it isn’t completely inaccurate. Things like word count or chapter count may be outdated of course due to how quickly they release. We update them whenever we can though. I’ll update the stats for CON soon.
Break-it, read the recent chapters of SOR and they were great! Tim sounds like a fun character, and I can’t wait to see more of him, and Bruce’s powers showing up is a sign that his lineage is finally coming to use. So from what I can tell, Element seems to power him and give him a boost in speed and strength, creates a forcefield based off his nervous system, and Element-type blasts that are destructive and explosive in nature, with the trade off being that he passes out afterwards. Anything i’m missing or getting wrong? Anyway, I’ll be waiting for Chapter 21. Oh yeah, and also Chapter 54 and 55 for The Omega Timeline are almost finished. I believe you will be writing Chapter 56, and if you recall the main theme of the arc we’ll all be working on is a zombie apocalypse. If you recall most of The Omega Timeline takes place in the City or the Shadowkeep, but we’re deviating away from that in this arc and instead placing the characters in specific zones around the City that are basically just portions of the different ARKs (The Island, Scorched Earth, etc and even includes the two portions of the Genesis Ship and all five biomes of the Genesis Simulation along with two custom arks made by Wyvernian called Pandora and Wyveria). Now obviously we’re probably not gonna utilize all of this, but we were thinking for you and Nazgul who is also joining TOT, your first chapters could be similar to me, Sunny, and Wyvernian’s (the first few chapters) where they spawn in their home land (in this case, Bruce would spawn on The Island portion and Nazgul’s Alex would spawn on Ragnarok). Maybe there could be a few zombie encounters, and a chapter or two later your character(s) will meet with others. It’ll help the new writers get used to the new Omega Timeline setting and will build it up. You can even write the chapter now if you want, just know that the zombies are more like Corrupted Creatures from extinction that act like and work like zombies. Just don’t release it until 54 and 55 come out, obviously. Though I think it would be helpful to know which characters you’ll be bringing into TOT? Anyway, whenever you get this respond whenever.
To: Duke, DiploLover, SangToareGirl, RelatingHen
From: Ben, & KM
Duke, read Chapter 1 of FAF (Fire and Freedom i’m just gonna call it this from now on) and it was really nice! I like the detail that Jasper has a horn, I’m guessing that they’re like mutations (sort of like how some people have blue eyes, green eyes and etc). Only criticism is that Jasper and Elm getting attacked by whatever they were attacked by could have had some improvement, since it sort of just happens. There could be a lot of suspense and action by describing how the fight took place. Of course, there should also be a motive as to why Puffin decided to save the two, especially if they didn’t trust them in the beginning. Also cool to see that it takes place on Ragnarok, though there are a few inconsistencies between the story and the game, since Forest Wyverns and Rhyniognathas dont spawn there. I’m sure you can figure out a reason why they’re there though. Anyway I’ll be waiting around for Chapter 2.
DiploLover, yeah, that’s understandable. Just make sure to prioritize stuff, don’t multitask, and time gets freed up pretty easily. Setting a goal for yourself (for example a chapter a week) can also help accelerate progress, even if it doesn’t feel like you have time by setting a goal you make yourself create time for yourself. Idk, it’s kinda difficult to explain until you experience it yourself. Also yes as Apex explained the Fandom wiki for this website is just a place to chat and stuff, and you can find new stories to read there too. As for other stories to read, Apex already gave a hefty list, but if you want a specific suggestion based off your taste, here’s what I have to suggest.
If you want a creature-based story that’s more adventure-themed and fast-paced, then read the Pandora Chronicles series by Wyvernian. The first book is Heroes of Pandora, the second is Protectors of Pandora, and the series is about a Mesopithecus named Caesar trying to stop a Dragon boss from destroying his home ARK Pandora. You can find it in the All filter, alphabetically, and it starts in Allosaurus.
If you want a creature-based story that’s more focused on horror and the like, read Pandora by Moon (not to be confused with Pandora Chronicles). Its about an abnormal “wyvern” named Pandora who is an outcast in the Wyvern Kingdom, and her sister Bria who has recently become a hunter for the kingdom. You can find it in the Breedables filter, alphabetically, and it starts in Amargasaurus.
If you want a Survivor-based story centered around ARK lore and more specifically the Element corruption on Earth, read Ultimus by PrimalApex. It’s an Extinction-map story based around a man named Andrew who’s had to survive on the dead Earth for as long as he’s known. You can find it in the Aquatics filter, reverse alphabetically, and it starts in Tusoteuthis.
Maybe you want to take a break from ARK fanfiction… in that case, the Riddles of the Phoenixes series by SunnyFox57 is a good pick. It takes place many many years after ARK Survival, and it’s about the Riddle Family, a family derived from royalty with their roots related to the ARK protocol and the like. The story is more romance-based and slice of life. At least in the first two books. You can find it in the All filter, and it starts in Allosaurus.
Maybe you just want a short story that’s sweet and simple. If so, read Queen of Aberration by Sylveevee. It’s about a woman named Syl who is trying her best to survive on the Aberration ARK, but through some circumstances becomes a queen. Very dandy and wacky, contains powers (if that’s what you like) and is not as long as the other stories. You can find it exclusively in Shinehorn.
That’s all, don’t read them all at once, it’s not possible. Just pick whichever you find most interesting, and get immersed. Reading everything too quickly I wouldn’t recommend, it just won’t be as fun. Also, Chapter 24 was really nice! Can’t wait to see how their trip to Carnivore Island goes. And for Chapter 5, basically Astra has a nightmare about Shadow (and wonders if he’s even a direwolf) and basically wakes up to see that she’s a Direwolf now. She went to go hunt fish but there’s Piranhas so she passes out in the water for 2 days. When she wakes up she’s met by Prince and they decide on a name. If you want to view your chapters with ease I highly suggest writing your chapters somewhere down on your phone (not on the Dex) on an app like Docs or Pages, and then just copy pasting them onto the app. Makes things much much easier. If you can’t see any of your chapters go to the DDEX Stories website and check there, you could filter through any creature, not just Achatina.
Sang, I read Chapters 3 and 4 of TFTOA and it was really nice. I can see how Syaoran would fall in love with Kiri easily if he hasn’t had any shoulders to lean on most of his life. Also the tease that Kiri would tell Syaoran’s friends that he liked her but neither of them had friends was hilarious. They became friends fast, that’s for sure.
RelatingHen, Chapters 15 - 16 of JTAC were good stuff. I’m enjoying the plot direction and the tensions between Nudon and Sodden, things have started heating up now that tensions are rising. The fight scenes were also good. The only criticism I had was the dialogue inconsistency for Cordor. He says the Rexes weren’t even that good, but just a few words later says that they’re too powerful. Also if they were too powerful, why didn’t they just kill them off? Cato is clearly very wounded, so it couldn’t be hard especially if they’re caged. Anyway besides that, Chap 15 was good. Chap 16 was also good, I’m enjoying Terad’s freak outs. He’s very possessive over Serenity and the other C Tribe members and even more possessive over Sodden, even though he’s not a part of the tribe. I imagine now that Nameless will go after Nudon though (without their leader) because of what happened. Anyways, I’ll be around for the next one.
Hi PrimalApex I don't have a lot of information in my 4 dino books and im not allowed to go online Dododex and the ARK Wiki is the most I can but I would love to check out the Fandom thing but I do have something funny to share so my dad and I were in my Dino barn and I said it is safe here mainly herbivores and I saw one Allo five seconds later.... Me screaming A allo is in the barn oh help me it killed two dilos Dilla and another dilo and the other night I was on my ice wyvern named after the new Rag boss in Ascended Nunatak and this is me here rexy rexy come on into the trap if you do you can have some Wyvern this is Nunatak do not sacrifice me sacrifice your dad's slow paced Argie
Your Rockdrake Lover
Greetings everyone!
I’ve been writing this story for quite some time now, and It’s going so well!! So, I thought it was time for some Q and A!
If you have any questions at all about my story, characters, or perhaps confusing things to you at all, even past spelling mistakes, go ahead and ask them! Anything at all. Of course, I ask that you plan all yur questions if you have more than one and write them all down in just one tip, for the sake of Snail Section 😁😝
Thankyou for reading this! I can’t wait to see what your wondering, and I promise I’ll answer everything I can!
—Moon
The Chronicles of Corruption
(A prequel to Dodo tales)
Chapter 2: the canyon
They ran towards the canyon as fast as they could. "You sure about this?" Said Corrin, who was beginning to like Simon's adventurousness. "Look, there they are" he responded, pointing to three dilos down in the canyon. "How are we going to get down there?" Corrin asked, afraid to hear the answer. "Watch" said Simon, pulling out a gun. he shot it, and a zipline hit the bottom of the canyon "oh no" said Corrin, who was afraid of heights. Then Simon attached it to the ground next to him, and got on. He started sliding down "this is terrifying, but fun!" He yelled. Corrin knew he had no choice, he grabbed on and closed his eyes. He soon touched the bottom "getting back up is going to be a nightmare." he thought. They slowly approached the dilos, and Corrin threw a knife at one. It hit it in the eye and it screeched, falling over (much like the Raptor at the start of Dodo tales) then, the other two ran at them..
The forgotten war part: 1
They say history is written by the victors, so I am here to tell you my story the truth the uncensored truth. All throughout history people have tried to hide their flawed ways and make it seem fair just and even deserved when they murder violently.
My story starts in a small village of no more than twenty people. It was mid day a small group had just left to hunt for food on raptors. I looked out my window I could feel it in the air something was off the village was quiet too quiet. Everyone seemed on edge. I planned to leave that night on a pteranodon to go higher in the mountains and hunt for metal. However this would not happen.
3 hours later it happened the hunters returned with a feast of berries and various types of meats. No more than five minutes later gunshots rang through the town bullets rained from the sky. People ran in panic the town up the hill was coming to our defense but it would take too long we ran to the raptors I was the first one on a raptor four others also got to the raptors. The speedy beasts carried us through the forest. We didn’t look back. Later I would return and find ashes where my home once stood and a floor covered with the bodies of those we left behind. The attack was unprovoked and led to casualties on only one side. I will now quote how they described the attack.
“Today at 7:34pm there was a bloody battle that led to casualties in both sides. When one of our own scouting teams ran up the hill and they were attacked by a small blood thirsty tribe miraculously our outnumbered forces pulled through. We ended up with only 2 casualties the remaining barbaric tribe members fled into the forest to cause havoc another day.”
So to ensure their lies do not spread any further I will be publishing these laws on the dinosaurs in alphabetical order. -Brent 213
Toxic Tales: Prologue
It was a cool winter night as Boreas began his flight. He had been sent by the ice wyvern council to offer a peace treaty to the poison wyvern Queen, who had declared war on the ice wyverns a decade ago. He grew more and more anxious as he got closer to the poison wyvern territory, he continued to tell himself how it's rare for messengers to be captured but, the poison wyverns aren't known for their mercy and fair treatment. He saw something large move in the forest below, making him more nervous. The stories he'd heard back in the West were some of the most terrifying things he could even imagine.
Boreas saw a large silhouette fly out of the forest below and heard the beating of wings. Another wyvern dived down, nearly hitting him out of the air. The first wyvern shot a ball of poisonous gas at him, nearly hitting his wing. The second wyvern flew directly above him before shooting more poison, this time hitting Boreas's right wing. He fell to the ground as the wyverns dived after him, waiting until he hit the ground before picking him up with their talons and carrying him towards the cavern the poison wyverns lived in.
Once they arrived the wyverns gave him to a large group of guards, who began to interrogate him.
"Who sent you?" a guard asked.
"I was sent to offer the Queen a treaty" Boreas replied.
The guards talked amongst themselves before one left to report to the Queen. In the meantime, Boreas was dragged to a small, dark cell. What felt like years went by, then he was dragged out of the cell. Once he was out a guard told him how the Queen would decide his fate and that he should hope for a quick, painless death.
Once in the Queen's chamber, she questioned,
"What makes you think that I want peace?"
Boreas quietly said, "The war hasn't made life better for any of us, so why continue it."
She scoffed before saying, "It might make you ice wyverns miserable but, the poison wyverns have been doing better than ever, so why would I stop the source of my success?"
Before Boreas could respond she gave the guards a curt nod. The guards began to drag him out of the room while he thrashed around in a feeble attempt to escape. After a while he stopped thrashing and noticed that he wasn't going down the same passage. It got darker and darker as he was dragged, before reaching a wide chamber. The guards put a large chain around his snout and threw him into a pit in the center. He heard the scuttle of hundreds of legs as an army of araneos, arthroplureas, and pulmonoscorpius charged forward. He thrashed desperately as the viciously attacked him, biting at his wings, legs, and side. After a while he stopped thrashing out of exhaustion. He closed his eyes, imagining that he was flying through the mountains he was born in, even though he knew that this pit was the last place he would ever see.
I've wanted to write this for a while now and have ideas for future chapters, so if quite a few people want me to continue this story I would gladly continue.
Thanks for reading!
- Sol
I saw PrimalApex that your birthday was a few days ago happy late birthday mine is coming up in like a month I also wanted to tell you I have loved ark ever since I saw my dad playing it with his friend when I was 6 my mom kept saying not yet and my dad said it will be forever till me and her can play my mom finally caved in last last year during summer then I got it for Christmas.
You Rockdrake Lover
“Where the river runs red” A prequel to “A song of compys and gigas” (chap1)
“Keep running. Just... keep running... The enemy takes no prisoners... You can make it...” Those are the words bob keeps repeating to himself as the enemy closes in running after him. BANG! A bullet flies right over bobs head. BANG! Another hits a tree next to him. “It can’t be far now...” bob says to himself. BANG BANG! Two more bullets wizz past. Then all of a sudden the ground stops and a massive drop begins. Bob stops panting nervously flinching at every bullet he feels wizzing past him. He has to jump. The enemy is getting close now... bob closes his eyes. Three... two... one... bob leaps from the cliffface and braces for impact in the water below. SPLASH! He made it. Bob then paddles up to the surface. “There gone”... bob says as he gives a sigh of relief. On the other bank is bobs destination. Republican headquarters. Western front.
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