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This story is really fun to write! Hope you guys like chapter 2! I’m trying to imagine the view from on the floating island with all the obelisks and the different trees and landmarks, it’s beautiful… the random building city may be a bit of a eyesore though 😆 also just realized how huge all the creatures I brought are, except Drain. Hope the mansion is big enough..
-Wyvernain
Ok Ben that makes sense, se basically just a really nice mansion, I’m guessing it’s gonna be kind of the HQ for the good guys. It should also have rooms for every character that are perfect for them like the rock drake gets a cave-like room and your characters get modern day rooms etc.
Sunny, chapter one was great, I’ll probably post chapter 2 tonight, if I have time, but I think I will.
-Wyvernain
From Ben
WYVERNIAN WHAT WAS THAT CLIFFHANGER I THINK YOU JUST KILLED CAESAR-
Nice chapter! I actually really liked Lagoon, shes a funny character. I imagine her to be like a derp. And Bones' reaction to that was really funny as well. And Salizar goodness its like hes in love with Caesar. JK, hes a hating as monkey, ik hes not. Alright fun chapter, seeya next time
Yeah it is really great to see the family all together again. I forgot about how much I missed writing Arianna and Aragorn. They’re back! And yeah…Jack and Jay will probably be very short compared to most the TAOH cast. Emma should be around their height and age tho…probably. Cya!
-SunnyFox57
From Ben
psss, btw for future reference for the human characters (from TAOH and TROTP)
All the scholars/cast from TAOH are 18 since they were just about to graduate high school
Emma is confirmed 19
Jack and Jay are confirmed 13
So, TAOH cast are probably taller and bigger than Jack and Jay.
From Ben
Sunny Chapter 1 was amazing! I loved it, its nice seeing the fam again without, yk, crazy uncle Tom going haywire and trying to take over the world. Or, uh, weird creepy Michael being a buzz. Also, that Jerboa is one of Wyvernian's cast, right? Ah, nevermind, it isnt. Just a talking jerboa
Wyvernian by party house, think of like, rad party. Theres a swimming pool, bowling alley, ballroom/dance floor, fridges with food overflowing... a dream house where everytthing comes true. And dont worry about asking too many questions.. i love questions
Ben, ok they’ll go as well but they’ll go alone and just end up in the same place as the heroes because it makes no sense for them to travel together, it’ll also bring a bit of drama in when they meet again in the mansion, also what exactly is the floating mansion? You keep saying party house but what does that mean.. like it’s a just a confetti colored room with cake and the characters will just party there for no reason? Or will it be like they meet there and maybe get a bit of an explanation on what’s happening? Sorry if I’m being annoying with all the questions..
-Wyvernain
Sunny, I’m guessing what you mean by “Aragorn has read TAOH” is like he read a like legend based on it because your story is in the same universe but after right? Idk I could be wrong.. but we could just say that the legend Aragorn read wasn’t completely accurate and he doesn’t know exactly what’s going to happen, or maybe he’s just smart enough not to tell them and mess up the timeline, also so what if he does tell them. They can’t get back they are basically alternate reality doplegangers of the ones from the actual TAOH so it’s fine.
-Wyvernain
From Ben
Sunny what im thinking is that the TAOH that Aragorn/James read in his universe is not the exact same TAOH that is in.. well, TAOH. The characters are the same and have experienced similar things, but not the exact same. So Aragorn would be a bit shocked that these characters showed up, but when he tries asking them if theyve done things theyve never done, theyll be like "uhh, what?" Think of it like actors in a movie. They represent a character in a movie but they do not have the same memories or experiences, because theyre just actors. The TAOH cast are like actors, because the TAOH that Aragorn read is a twisted version that was twisted for more drama or action you could say.
From Ben
Haha no problem Sunny, this is a nice challenge for me anyway, and damn an hour to write the prophecy? Well it was pretty well written its better than almost all of this platform's "prophecies" (if you could even call it that).
The first stanza depicts two brothers battling, one of light (good) and one of dark (bad). If one bows to the light they will win the fight. One shall die and the other’s anger will cease.
The two brothers could be anyone. An obvious guess would be James and Tom, but, James is kinda dead. BUT he may not be. In TTOTSP after James reveals his origins to Arianna, he says that with the medallion he and the ones he loves will live for long periods of time. Then he says, “But… if I were to die… I’m afraid of that happening.” PrimalApex discovered that implants were shaped from medallions by Tom, so if medallions are like implants and the user dies.. maybe James could respawn like how a survivor would in Ark.
The problem is that “if one bows to the light they will win the fight.” This line suggests that Tom WILL win the fight if he drops his ways. The last line seems pretty obvious, but it could honestly be either one if the “Aragorn is shadowy figure” theory is correct.
In the second stanza it tells that they must find certain people who will help find the way. Speaker of creatures (Joesphina), man of mischief (Jay), seer of prophecies (Emma), the healer of himself (Jack), shaper of realities (Jaquin).
The third stanza tells they will find help from someone that wants something “considered wrong”. It doesnt say it IS wrong, but it is CONSIDERED wrong which means its gotta be the Shadowy Figure, right? Maybe its Cole but that guy doesnt have much going for him tbh hes just an ordinary dude.
The fourth stanza is VERY interesting. I think its talking about Tom’s heart, and the key to his heart is Leah’s song. “Only he can defeat the slayer of dreams.” suggests theres a bigger threat on the horizon we dont know of.
Fifth stanza suggests people will die, but not in battle, but as a sacrifice? Hmm, that worries me a bit
Sixth stanza two brothers battle, again, and its confirmed one will die. Now I know we may think its James and Tom again, but i dont think its talking about the same brothers as the first stanza. They have to be different brothers, but who? Bah, im going to have to look for every single brother.
And the last stanza “only some will survive”... i mean if it isnt obvious, only some will survive. Ominous and I hope theres some loophole to thisZ
Okay.. i needa figure so much out now. hehehehh
Moon, I’m glad you read it!! And I feel that too, I just don’t know how to grasp their characters as much as Nyx and Spark. If you have any tips on how to make them feel more like themselves. Please let me know!! I really hope you enjoy what I have in store!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Thanks everyone for reading the prologue for TWOTP. I really tried my best on the prophecy. It took me like a hour to write it, and it’s still kind of weird. Oh well, I tried.
Ben! I really enjoyed the prologue. This is gonna be so much fun!!! I’m working on the first chapter. Also I read ur newest chapter of TAOH. I wonder what the Morse code says. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
-SunnyFox57
Ok Ben, but I have an idea, I know I’m the only one with villainous characters so far but should they be drawn to a different place? I’d be a bit weird to have a psychotic vampire and Salizars old flunky together with the good guys.. especially with general Emerald and Darkhide’s history. Maybe they could get drawn to like a dark castle or something… also I’m thinking maybe the talking creatures call the non talking ones, mutes? Maybe? Idk it sounds a bit too mean I’ll keep thinking. Also Sunny write your chapter already! 😆😭 I just want to write mine!! Joking of course, your good, it’s literally been a few hours, I’m just excited.
-Wyvernain
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