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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Yeah it is really great to see the family all together again. I forgot about how much I missed writing Arianna and Aragorn. They’re back! And yeah…Jack and Jay will probably be very short compared to most the TAOH cast. Emma should be around their height and age tho…probably. Cya!
-SunnyFox57
From Ben
psss, btw for future reference for the human characters (from TAOH and TROTP)
All the scholars/cast from TAOH are 18 since they were just about to graduate high school
Emma is confirmed 19
Jack and Jay are confirmed 13
So, TAOH cast are probably taller and bigger than Jack and Jay.
From Ben
Sunny Chapter 1 was amazing! I loved it, its nice seeing the fam again without, yk, crazy uncle Tom going haywire and trying to take over the world. Or, uh, weird creepy Michael being a buzz. Also, that Jerboa is one of Wyvernian's cast, right? Ah, nevermind, it isnt. Just a talking jerboa
Wyvernian by party house, think of like, rad party. Theres a swimming pool, bowling alley, ballroom/dance floor, fridges with food overflowing... a dream house where everytthing comes true. And dont worry about asking too many questions.. i love questions
Ben, ok they’ll go as well but they’ll go alone and just end up in the same place as the heroes because it makes no sense for them to travel together, it’ll also bring a bit of drama in when they meet again in the mansion, also what exactly is the floating mansion? You keep saying party house but what does that mean.. like it’s a just a confetti colored room with cake and the characters will just party there for no reason? Or will it be like they meet there and maybe get a bit of an explanation on what’s happening? Sorry if I’m being annoying with all the questions..
-Wyvernain
Sunny, I’m guessing what you mean by “Aragorn has read TAOH” is like he read a like legend based on it because your story is in the same universe but after right? Idk I could be wrong.. but we could just say that the legend Aragorn read wasn’t completely accurate and he doesn’t know exactly what’s going to happen, or maybe he’s just smart enough not to tell them and mess up the timeline, also so what if he does tell them. They can’t get back they are basically alternate reality doplegangers of the ones from the actual TAOH so it’s fine.
-Wyvernain
From Ben
Sunny what im thinking is that the TAOH that Aragorn/James read in his universe is not the exact same TAOH that is in.. well, TAOH. The characters are the same and have experienced similar things, but not the exact same. So Aragorn would be a bit shocked that these characters showed up, but when he tries asking them if theyve done things theyve never done, theyll be like "uhh, what?" Think of it like actors in a movie. They represent a character in a movie but they do not have the same memories or experiences, because theyre just actors. The TAOH cast are like actors, because the TAOH that Aragorn read is a twisted version that was twisted for more drama or action you could say.
From Ben
Haha no problem Sunny, this is a nice challenge for me anyway, and damn an hour to write the prophecy? Well it was pretty well written its better than almost all of this platform's "prophecies" (if you could even call it that).
The first stanza depicts two brothers battling, one of light (good) and one of dark (bad). If one bows to the light they will win the fight. One shall die and the other’s anger will cease.
The two brothers could be anyone. An obvious guess would be James and Tom, but, James is kinda dead. BUT he may not be. In TTOTSP after James reveals his origins to Arianna, he says that with the medallion he and the ones he loves will live for long periods of time. Then he says, “But… if I were to die… I’m afraid of that happening.” PrimalApex discovered that implants were shaped from medallions by Tom, so if medallions are like implants and the user dies.. maybe James could respawn like how a survivor would in Ark.
The problem is that “if one bows to the light they will win the fight.” This line suggests that Tom WILL win the fight if he drops his ways. The last line seems pretty obvious, but it could honestly be either one if the “Aragorn is shadowy figure” theory is correct.
In the second stanza it tells that they must find certain people who will help find the way. Speaker of creatures (Joesphina), man of mischief (Jay), seer of prophecies (Emma), the healer of himself (Jack), shaper of realities (Jaquin).
The third stanza tells they will find help from someone that wants something “considered wrong”. It doesnt say it IS wrong, but it is CONSIDERED wrong which means its gotta be the Shadowy Figure, right? Maybe its Cole but that guy doesnt have much going for him tbh hes just an ordinary dude.
The fourth stanza is VERY interesting. I think its talking about Tom’s heart, and the key to his heart is Leah’s song. “Only he can defeat the slayer of dreams.” suggests theres a bigger threat on the horizon we dont know of.
Fifth stanza suggests people will die, but not in battle, but as a sacrifice? Hmm, that worries me a bit
Sixth stanza two brothers battle, again, and its confirmed one will die. Now I know we may think its James and Tom again, but i dont think its talking about the same brothers as the first stanza. They have to be different brothers, but who? Bah, im going to have to look for every single brother.
And the last stanza “only some will survive”... i mean if it isnt obvious, only some will survive. Ominous and I hope theres some loophole to thisZ
Okay.. i needa figure so much out now. hehehehh
Moon, I’m glad you read it!! And I feel that too, I just don’t know how to grasp their characters as much as Nyx and Spark. If you have any tips on how to make them feel more like themselves. Please let me know!! I really hope you enjoy what I have in store!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Thanks everyone for reading the prologue for TWOTP. I really tried my best on the prophecy. It took me like a hour to write it, and it’s still kind of weird. Oh well, I tried.
Ben! I really enjoyed the prologue. This is gonna be so much fun!!! I’m working on the first chapter. Also I read ur newest chapter of TAOH. I wonder what the Morse code says. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
-SunnyFox57
Ok Ben, but I have an idea, I know I’m the only one with villainous characters so far but should they be drawn to a different place? I’d be a bit weird to have a psychotic vampire and Salizars old flunky together with the good guys.. especially with general Emerald and Darkhide’s history. Maybe they could get drawn to like a dark castle or something… also I’m thinking maybe the talking creatures call the non talking ones, mutes? Maybe? Idk it sounds a bit too mean I’ll keep thinking. Also Sunny write your chapter already! 😆😭 I just want to write mine!! Joking of course, your good, it’s literally been a few hours, I’m just excited.
-Wyvernain
Angel, to answer your two questions. My favorite Ark gamer is probably Raasclark. But my favorite gamer that played Ark in their past are probably TheGamingBeaver or Poet Plays.
As for your second question, I don’t think that’s our place to say. And we really don’t know under what circumstances she said it.
Ben, I read Prologue!!!! Gosh!! I’m excited!!! So this place is like a Dinotopia, where there are dinosaurs that can speak along side humans in human language and others that can’t and only speak animal and of course people who walk along side them. And this mansion is intriguing!!! I enjoyed it!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Long love the crossover counsel and The Omega Timeline!!!
I’ll give you all a character description and list soon, I’m going into the abyss for a bit to write several thousand words of Ultimus until I reach the point where these characters come in. But I will tell you Andrew Lang is one of the characters I’ve chosen!! Just wanted to tell you just in case you’re wondering where I’m at, I’m just going to be writing a ton.
Until Next Time!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
the floating mansion was the party house i talked about in my short idea. So all characters should get drawn to it, thats how theyll all meet, yep.
And yes, there are talking creatures like HoP animals and non-talking ones like Star. While Star cannot talk, she certainly does act humanish. She winks, licks her beak, ruffles her feather and flaps her wings in her own sort of communication. So in a way she has the personality of an animal creature in a story like The Obelisk or PoP. She just cant talk. Think of it like the Dodo in the beginning of The Obelisk.
Hmm, although a nickname for those would be cool, i like the idea a lot. I'll leave it up to you to decide since your story has the talking animals, Wyvernian.
Prologue was great! One question? Is the floating mansion just for your characters plot or is everyone supposed to be drawn there? And also I had a thought, if there are some talking creatures and some normal ones like Star what do the talking creatures call the non talking ones? You’d think they’d come up with a nickname for non talking animals kinda like how in Harry Potter they can non magical people muggles. Maybe something simple like no-talks. Or maybe the talking animals can speak to the non talking ones and humans.. hmm it’s gonna be interesting figuring out this new dynamic.
Long live the crossover counsel and the omega timeline!
-Wyvernain
From Ben
I released the Prologue of "The Omega Timeline" in Yi Ling. The Omega Timeline was picked as a name because it had 2 votes against 1 and 1. Also I chose to omit Story Intersection so you dont have to type too much. Sunny, you're up for Chapter 1. Then Wyvernian will do Chapter 2, and etc
Also, when its your turn to write the chapter please put the title in this exact format:
The Omega Timeline
Chapter #: CHAPTER NAME - by YOUR NAME
Part # / # (IF YOUR CHAPTER EXCEEDS THE CHARACTER LIMIT)
PS: Please have a chapter name for each chapter, it makes it sound cooler. Thanks. - Ben