
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Chapter 17 is out, I hope I got the characters right, but if I didn’t we can just say it was the black obelisk feeding on their emotions.
Hope you guys are okay with what I did for the black obelisk, I know that’s a pretty big chunk of lore to add in but, it won’t always make them turn on each other like that, it just fed on their distrustful emotions and amplified them, kinda like Lokis staff did to the avengers in Avengers 1
-Wyvernian
Ben, my characters could see seven obelisks, but there could be more. I’m drawing up a concept map for TOT and I definitely want criticism, it may take me a bit to finish it, but it’s looking good so far! I’ll put it on Fandom when I’m done, everyone in the Crossover counsel should look at it, even if you can’t/don’t want to use fandom you should still be able to come to the website and look at the picture, just not post anything.
-Wyvernian
From Ben
Sunny Chapter 16 of TOT was great! That was an epic fight scene.. i wonder how Ember and Drain will team up.
Sylveevee what about Doctor Bubba and Milo? Maybe they can come from the dead..
Wyvernian i am still confused how your messages always end up in other sections! But that doesnt really matter, but yes thats a great idea. I think in your first chapter you mentioned there being 7 obelisks. I think itd be cool if each one had a use.
From Ben
Sylveevee i think We can start adding more characters once "the first conflict" is finished. It will probably involve any villainous characters as antagonists (at the moment, Drain and possibly Ember). Im not sure what the two will do but after they succeed (or fail) im thinking they can tamper with the obelisks to bring more "villains" in. Now i dont think we should bring in our MAIN villains, but minor villains or antagonists would be fine. (yeah Ember is technically the main villain but hes not too strong).
So like I could bring in Jerry, Sunny could bring in Michael or something, PrimalApex im not too sure, Sylveevee Pat and so on what do you all think?
Chapter 15 was awesome ben also im going to give more details on my cast,
Sylveevee, can transform doesn’t really trust anyone other than her group at the moment after hearing what samuel and aragorn was talking about she is going to probably not trust them for a bit or awhile since with past with pat she doesn’t really trust boys that she doesn’t know a lot.
Skyocean, can transform into other people but he keeps his eye color doesn’t trust anyone other then the people in the group he is in he has been kept as a slave and he has been through a lot of trauma now since he has been through that he is scared of the others no matter how much they are kind to him he will take a while to warm up to the others.
Drake, can transform like sylveevee but when he does its the default color of a dino also sylveevees most loyal guard.
Sunhigh and moonhigh, will take a while to warm up to the others they are both 12 they only trust the people in the group they are in they have secret powers that i will introduce in my chapter.
Also just a quick question when can we introduce more characters from our chapters? (Im thinking of pat just to cause some trouble *does a evil laugh*).
-sylveevee
Chapter fifteen was AWESOME Ben!!! I think you really captured the characters personality. It’s really funny how Aragorn calls Sylveevee “Princess Purple”. 😂. Anyways don’t worry Wyvernian, I won’t kill Drain and I’ll convince Samuel and Aragorn not to either. LOL. Cya later!
-SunnyFox57
Ben, I properly forgot to also say Reuben also doesn’t have an Implant, it’s probably wasn’t needed to be mentioned. But I’m mentioning it anyway. I read chapter 15!!!! It was really good!!!! So Samuel and Aragon are planning to try to escape this place and leave the others. Interesting… And the others in Samuel’s group are captured by Drain!!!! Oh I can’t wait to see what happens next!!! I really enjoyed this one Ben!!!
Okay, I don’t know why but I feel that I should give a sort of rank system for my characters for how they’re going to act around others and who are going to trust to those who will most likely distrust others. (I think it’s because mine don’t have the greatest amount of character build and I think I should give a bit more on them.)
So first to trust others in the group I chose is easily Freya, at least for Human characters. It will take her a while longer to trust the talking creatures for specific reasons of her people’s beliefs.
I think the next in line who would start to trust others is Sylas, he would probably be very neutral at first. If they aren’t trying to eat him or kill him, he can live in peace with them. And after some time he would begin to trust the others.
The next to trust would be Andrew, he is though strictly neutral and the only way to change that is to earn his trust. If he’s earns the trust of others on the way. That’s okay, but it doesn’t change the fact that they have still have to earn his. The kid would probably earn his trust the quickest though. And this wouldn’t stop him from trying to help anyone in need.
Lastly, Erica would have the most problems with trying to trust others and probably be distrustful of others. As she doesn’t where she is and why they’re others here that are not in their group. It is the same thing as Andrew as they have to earn her trust, but due to her stubborn behavior and secretive past. It will be awfully hard to gain her trust. This though won’t stop her from helping others, but she would be more on edge than Andrew would.
I think that’s it for them and it for now!!!
U.N.T!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Ben, First Yes. All of my cast in TOT and Ultimus (Besides Andrew) have Specimen Implants from the lore. But they are kinda unless in the TOT. Also yes it was a Thyla!!! Also yeah, he’s still wearing the Tek Suit and it’s keeping him protected from harm. At least where it’s covering.
I’m glad you and Sunnyfox enjoyed it!!!
Mr.GhostGamer, I’m glad I got your characters personalities!!! I really wasn’t sure how well I did, especially with Steve!! Sorry that you aren’t able to use Fandom. Don’t worry about us leaving though, because we aren’t. The Fandom is just really for us to expand our discussions on our stories, add more details to the stories through trivia and Synopses. Discussions, Q&As and most of everything that has happened here before will still continue and not to forget that all of the stories still have to release through here anyway.
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
Yes I fully endorse Fandom. Moon has posted some very cool art and she also posted sneak peeks to some of her stories there. I highly encourage checking it out and joining!
Sorry Wyv i kinda forgot. My username is A_BriaJ (dont ask my friend made it for me). The display name should be BenTAOH, i also sent a friend request to Moon and Wyvernian
The only problem is theres lots of ads last time i checked. Luckily ad blockers exist.. yipee!
PrimalApex I really liked Chapter 9! Andrew's actually a pretty good hunter for being trapped in cryo stasis for 700 years.. and he was just 11! Fast learner that was really nice chapter and pacing. So that creature was probably a Thyla.. i think? A bear-tiger combo.
Sunny i think he didnt get hurt too bad because of his TEK armor it is still protecting him.
Also I read Chapter 9 WOW SHADOWY FIGURE. That was pretty badass ngl. Loved it was super suspenseful,.. but man Jack whyd you have to sneeze?? I bet the Shadowy Figure wants the Dark Phoenixes to bring his loved ones back, but they will refuse since that goes against their standards. Hopefully this wont cause troubles..
IT HAS TO BE AARON
Also why do you have a wedding dress ribbon in your drawer Cole ? 🤨
SHADOWY FIGURE IS SINGING THE SAME SONG.
And how did he know about Jack's affiliation to the Dark Phoenixes? Was it from studying the photo?? If so thats very.. crazy.
Also it CANT be Aragorn theres just too much evidence stating it isnt him. Tom recognizes shadowy figure as an old friend, and now if it was Aragorn here he would DEFINITELY have studied the photos for more than a second.
Only two men were infamous amongst peacekeepers. Aragorn for being the first person to be hanged in a while, and Aaron and his beasts. ITs AARON
ok time to study my notes and truly confirm