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Ben, I translated the Morse code!
The pull is getting stronger my sisters.
Sister your fear is ruling you. The constellations know these lesser beings shall not ever reach the stars. Irae perhaps Luna is correct. The woman with the all-seeing eyes is the veil of reality and who we truly are.
Then you know what must the done Amare. The woman with the all-seeing eyes may find the truth and devastate the constellations, especially with her connections to the man who has traveled both worlds.
But it is not right to interfere with the lives of the lesser beings.
Amare your love for the lesser beings is admirable, but we are already interfering by helping the poet. She may be our biggest fan but that is a crime in of itself. The woman with all-seeing eye must be killed. There is no working around this, I’m afraid.
That is enough. We must entertain our guest now. The poet has arrived.
Make haste, sisters. I can feel the woman’s eyes piercing me already. Make haste, now, before it is too late!
Btw… do you know how long it took me to translate that???? THREE STRAIGHT HOURS!!! I gotta admit, it was fun. I wonder who the woman with the all seeing eye is….
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
Ben, chapter 9 was great, I only have two issues, 1, nobody ever asked about the giant bat in a coma on the couch 😂(we can just say he’s on a couch decently far from everyone else, it’s a mansion.) And 2 Darkhide was a bit to feisty, he’s more quiet, but the accusation about poison makes sense and him and Emeralds distrust about humans was spot on, because they only ever knew about Olympus humans and those guys were kinda like Nerva’s tribe (brain fart, it’s new legion right?) from the explorer notes. Emeralds commanding nature and distrustful attitude was spot on and you got Sheeri’s timidness really well, Nova doesn’t really have too much character depth yet so you couldn’t really get her wrong but I kinda see her as energetic and pretty optimistic and brave. So nailed it.
Also Darkhide doesn’t actually want to eat them, it was kinda a joke, it’s been fine so far I just don’t want it to become a main thing for him to constantly say they should eat everyone. Also he’s probably gonna be pretty paranoid about dangerous situations, and betrayal, since he was betrayed so often in his life. (by Salizar and his own people, but we’ll have to get farther in before I explain that… I see a very nice character arc in play…)
Anyway excited to read chapter 10, and write chapter 11, um should syl’s characters show up in chapter 10 since in chapter 8 they were already at the door basically? And then in Apex’s chapter he could have his and Mrghosts characters meet at the bottom of the stairs and then Mrghost’s chapter (or maybe the later part of Apex’s chapter can be everyone together.) and then maybe they should split into smaller groups in MrGhosts chapter because this is like 30 characters. It’s a lot to keep track of. If we are splitting into groups I think we’ll have to decide which of our characters team up. And we can explain them splitting up as like they are trying to figure out what’s happening so they split up.
If we do split up I think my characters should team up with MrGhosts because they’d feel more comfortable traveling with other creatures, and we both have villains so maybe our characters could be trying to find where Drain, Yang and Steve went. (Steve was a villain right? He went on Yangs shoulder.) anyway enough rambling from me I’m gonna go write the next PoP chapter.
-Wyvernain
From Ben
Wait no longer cuz Chap 9 of TOT is out already. And I liked Chap 8 Sylveevee!
LLTCCATOT
With info regarding TOT heres how i think the other casts will be introduced, judging from their chapters.
Sylveevee's cast will be rung in with the others at the end of Wyvernian's chapter.
MGG and PrimalApex's cast will meet in PrimalApex's chapter, and MGG can detail them like entering mansion and stuff.
Anyway, PrimalApex I really liked the latest chapters of Journey and Ultimus! So the creature was a Troodon.. cool! I forgot what i predicted it to be. But this Troodons a bit freaky cuz it knows about other ARKs and Fjordur's great prophecy? This is already turning to be an interesting character. And Ultimus, WOW thats gonna make things harder for Andrew. I guess his parents forgot to consider that before heading off to Arat Prime.. welp sucks to be Andrew. But since he has a while to go hes probably gonna meet other survivors along the way, right?
Also I feel like the dragon roar on TV at the beginning is gonna foreshadow the Titans... Nice work ok seeya later
Apex, read the newest chapters of ultimus and journey, they were really good, so Forest somehow transferred himself to the island? Are the other five there too or did they get sent to other arks? Hmm.
Also Sunny, of course imposters aren’t allowed 😂 but that won’t exactly stop them.. because.. imposters…
-Wyvernain
Ben, I read chapter 59!!!! Jerry seems perfectly deranged… he definitely got what he deserved from Loki!!! But I think Bob and Alan are going to have some trouble!! I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
MrGhostGamer, I read chapter 7 of ToT!!! I really enjoyed it!!!! Ebenezer Scrooge is in The Omega Timeline!!! Well that’s interesting!!!!
Sunnyfox, Sorry about that, I keep forgetting which one is for which use. Thank You!!!
Sylveevee, I read chapter 7.5 of ToT!!!! I really enjoyed it!!!
Angel, It isn’t that easy for me to write these chapters. While a take a few hours to write a chapter. Those hours can span across days for me because I like to think out what I want to happen and how everything will work with future events and previous events.
Also Ultimus Chapter 8 and Chapter 6 part two of Journey have been Released!!!!
Until Next Time!!
-PrimalApex:)
MrGhost, chapter 7 was good, on thing though, and I hate to be that guy but too is not the correct word to use, “too” is like “I want to go too.” As in “I want to go also.” “to” means like I want to go to the store.” As in “I want to go there.” (To the store)
Basically to is for action. too is for you agreeing with someone like “I want to too.”
Ben, the only reason I don’t want to do .5 chapters is it gets confusing, especially since every chapter is in Yi Ling. Like what if someone is trying to read it and they skip from 7 to 8 and forget 7.5 and then get confused.
Ok that’s all for now.
LLTCCATOT
-Wyvernain
From Ben
Syl you dont have to end your story or rename it everything we write is non-canon to our stories so it shouldnt affect your story at all
honestly it depends for me on how long it takes to write a chapter. I write all parts for a single chapter at once, i just release it seperately because of the word limit. On good days i can pump out a 1k words per hour. On bad days it slows down. depends if im procastinating or not.
I only wanted to write Chapter 13 for superstious reasons. Pretty weird i know but its been like that since 2020zz given me lots of good luck. But now i just went for a walk so i dont care about writing Chap 13 anymore
So Sylveevee you will write Chapter 8
I will write 9
Sunny: 10
Wyvernian: 11
PrimalApex: 12
MGG: 13
Syl: 14
Ben: 15
etc.
yeah we're chillingp
Sylveevee
So in the omega timeline your characters are like clones or doubles of your normal characters, so no they can’t get back to your story and the original versions of your characters from your story don’t remember the omega timeline because they weren’t really actually there, it’s kind of like multiversal doppelgängers of your characters (if you know what I mean) so ya they can have the abilities and everything of the normal characters and there can also be a location from your story in the merged land, you mentioned a castle. And as for when you write it’s kinda like a relay race where we go in an order of who joined first so Ben, Sunnyfox, me, primalapex, Mrghostgamer, you. and so on. Idk why Ben says you’ll write 7.5 so he will write 13.. I’ll ask because I don’t know why he doesn’t just write 14. And also he won’t land on 13 anyway Mrghost will..
Sylveevee you have to write Chapter 7.5, the others will write their chapters until it eventually reaches your turn to write the next chapter (12.5 YEAH another decimal chap but i really want 13 for superstitious reasons)
- Ben
Angel i personally dont have a "how" i just do it. I dont really ask myself how i write so much, maybe someone else has other tips? and for renaming tbh idk you do what you think encapsulates your story best
Slylveevee, great job picking out all ur characters! There is one thing tho, unless the council has changed this rule, you have seven characters listed. In the beginning of the Omega Timeline we bring in five or less characters each. Later we might bring in more characters but for now…we’re all starting with five. Pls choose five of those characters u listed to be in ur chapter. Thanks. 😊
-SunnyFox57