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Ben, I read chapter 65 of TAOH!!!! It was really good!!! The Mosasaur attacking the Plesiosaur was awesome!!! And John basically has the Admin Command Dotame on to whatever he touches!!! Also he turns into Arnold Schwarzenegger with the Artifact of the Brute!!! Cool, I was wondering what the Brute was going to do!!! I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Sunnyfox, I think it’s a fan that said #Sunnyfox. Implying that other writers should be more like you and encourage other writers to continue writing. It’s honestly really cool!!!
Mr.GhostGamer, so is Rockwell going to retain his memories from Hope’s Cry and events of him being a monster or is it going to be an older version of Rockwell like from before he injected himself with liquid element (or Edmundium as he calls it) or Rockwell from the Animated Series? Just curious!!
Well, Until Next Time!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Here you go!
Ben and TCC,
My three villains I will add are the following:
Lieutenant Felswand: Not the brightest bloke, not quite Evil Mastermind tier, but he’s still a minor villain!
The Dragon: A large dragon from the Fjordur Ark. Brought into The Aberration Ark by the boss Edmund Rockwell. Definitely a minor villain, due to its small amount of screen time.
Sir Edmund Rockwell: The main antagonist of Hope’s Cry. A 19th century chemist from London. (Read the lore, I’m not in the mood to explain his backstory) I ran out villains, so I had to use him. Much like the King Titan in PrimalApex’s story, Rockwell will be minimized! He will appear in a human form in TOT.
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
FoR sOmE rEaSoN tHiS tIp NeEdS mOrE wOrDs!!!!!!!!!
Im going to pick three villains i have said them in my chapter:
Pat, hates sylveevee more than anything for banning him from sylveevees kingdom he has orange hair and green eyes, and wears clothes made from green and black fabric pulled out from a blackhole like sylveevee and her group she was with at the beginning.
Ok next is doctor bubba, was killed by cooper in battle he is a enemy of sylveevee, sylveevee had hated doctor bubba ever since he betrayed her but thanks to him sylveevee got her powers from where he took her when she was unconscious, he has blonde hair and light blue eyes wears a lab coat and it has dinosaur blood stains on it rises from the dead and brought to TOT
Next and last one milo, sunhigh fears milo after milo tried to kill sunhigh he has bright blue eyes and black hair pulled from a blackhole like pat (also milo wears blue and black fabric)
Thats all the villain characters im going to use for ToT .
-slyveevee
Three Villains!!! Well dang, I have a few villains; but I only feel two are good enough for TOT. I’m definitely having the King Titan from Ultimus in miniature form (definitely want his appearance to be something like Ezma’s transformation in Emperor’s New Grove for him going from his normal size to mini size.) and Sig from Journey as my two villains. Also maybe the King Titan’s mini size shouldn’t be too small, maybe something like somewhere between Raptor size or so around 8-10 feet tall? He should also still keep extreme strength for his size too but nothing like his form in game or lore. Maybe like the strength of a Rex or at most Giga. And one other thing to add about Sig, her character likes to lure characters and play the trickster before she gets brutal. Similar to Loki, but again more brutal.
-PrimalApex:)
Ok I have chosen my other two antagonists, also I have a suggestion, for lore reasons if any of the characters are brought back from the dead and had a traumatic death they should be in a coma like Drain, it only makes sense.
First nominee, the alpha dragon, he’s a dragon boss but due to Salizars hacking he was created as an unstoppable alpha, he’s not much bigger than the boss he’s just more durable and has a large radius in his fire breath, this may seem OP but one of Ben’s can bloodbend, Syls characters can shapeshift and then there’s Aragorn and Sheeri’s ice and Nova.. point is we’re no stranger to OP in TOT 😆. His colors are black with red accents. Also his behavior is not as hot headed as you’d think, he knows he’s deadly so he’s pretty cocky but not boasty about it more the calm deadly type, also he can be incredibly loyal as show with Salizar, who he sees as his father. Also when he comes to TOT he should strangle Drain and say, “YOU, where is father! Where are those creatures who bested me!” And then Drain explains he was probably killed and that they are from the same universe, also Drains main motive in HoP was to kill the alpha dragon and drink his blood to get element mutated, so don’t get to attached to the dragon because Drain may or may not betray him.. but probably may.
And for my second nominee.. I don’t have many villains in HoP and most of the PoP characters are still alive and it would be confusing to use them, also Vinestrap is lame 😂 so I’m going with his son, PRINCE CALDREN, Caldren is huge, he is dumb as a bag of rocks, classic muscly idiot. Also he is a hybrid of gigantopithicus and dinopithicus because his father wanted control over the gigantopithicus territory, again I say, Vinestrap sucks 😐 anyway, he doesn’t have much character development as he was only in one fight but he will be great comic relief.
And neither of my characters should be in a coma like Drain because though they were killed, they were killed in battle, not impaled suddenly by a stalactite so it wasn’t as much of a shock.
Also, Ben, I read the chapter with lil Jack, I hate that twerp.. can we please kill him off 😂 jk but seriously he’s so annoying.
-Wyvernain
From Ben
Anyway, Sylveevee I really liked Chapter 20! It was pretty nice and stuff. Only complaint I didn’t have was the bar fight felt kind of pointless, since it was not really described in detail. It would have been a good way to show Aragorn starting to slowly warm up to Sylveevee, or maybe in the bar fight the groups could also work together to keep the peace. Other then that, good stuff, I hope you enjoy the new writing process of using Notes though. Trust me it’s a lot better than just typing it all out on the Dex. Imagine you press Back… then you gotta restart (rip Wyvernian).
PrimalApex I enjoyed Chapter 10 thoroughly! Andrew once again is showing off his survival skills. Chapter 10 did an amazing job at portraying how messed up the Earth became during Extinction. I wonder where Andrew’s going to end up next. Oh we can only wonder! He’s probably going to have a run in with an Extinction creature soon though, let’s see how he fares against that! Or maybe he’ll meet one of the new characters? Idk, but i cant wait! Also that Journey villain sounds really cool. But wait, a Reaper? Does that mean Forest or the others might end up in Aberration ??? 😲
Wyvernian, yes, of course you can. It could be like a flashback scene or smth if I am writing the encounter though. Most likely I’m going to write about the TAOH group and Ultimus group traveling, and then afterwards the second half of Chapter 21 will be detailing the Black Obelisk encounter. Wyvernian the villains won’t show up in their home arks like the last time. I’m thinking the reason for this is because the reason why the starting characters showed up was because of random chance. But when you use the obelisk to bring them in, it makes them show up at the obelisk base instead, kind of like when you transfer creatures in the original game. And if there is a fight I won’t kill anyone off. The one who is defeated will most likely flee. Although I will say now that not everyone will come out of the portal Endgame style at once, that’s just over kill… you’ll see when it comes out.
Sunny I loved Chapter 18 and 19! I really hope Josephina and Jaquin can pull this off. I’m more worried about Jaquin than Josephina though. We know Tom definitely won’t kill her because she looks so much like Leah, but Tom couldn’t care less about Jaquin.. Maybe only keep him alive because his power is so strong. But hey, Tom’s conquest has taken a hit he can’t give implants to any more people!
And Shadowy Figure… It’s getting close I can feel it. I wonder what town this is? River Bend City??? That would be kind of lit, visiting his father and mother’s old roots. Maybe he’d learn more about their past.
But wait a moment. The Shadowy Figure is in the Jungle Phoenix Kingdom the first second, following Jack the next.. That doesn’t make any sense. He can’t just be moving back and forth like that.
Oh. THAT is why, huh? Shadow manipulation?
BUT IT CANT BE ARAGORN BECAUSE TOM REFERRED TO HIM AS AN OLD FRIEND AND ARAGORN IS NOT HIS OLD FRIEND AND ALSO ARAGORN COULD NOT HAVE KNOWN ABOUT THE BRITISH ATTACKS HE DIED BEFORE THEY CAME AND THE TARGETS
Still think its Aaron. Too much evidence against Aragorn, too much for Aaron.
I mean yeah Shadowy Figure said stuff about not trusting people too early, but that could very well be Aaron.
By the way will we ever know what the fiery creature was that saved Josephina and Jaquin?
From Ben
Crossover Council, please send in three sacrifices from your story for TOT, they will be working for the villains (Drain and Ember). They should probably be villains or antagonists. I’m asking this because I will be introducing them in Chapter 21 when I write it.
As for me, I’ve already picked:
Queen June: This fiery woman has the implant attribute to control the flames (and also possesses immunity to it). Violent and vicious, merciless and cruel, she has no bounds to her immorality. She possesses no sentimental attachments to anyone except her dearest love, Ben (even though it’s extremely one sided). June will do anything to win his heart over, even if it means killing everyone she knows or taking over the world. If only she knew her efforts were in vain. She has orange-brown hair, very athletically toned, and wears red flak armor. Her preferred weapon is a pike (but as the story progresses, she starts to use the trident more often). She will be pulled out of TAOH after Chris is taken in, so Chapter 62, and at the moment she has not actually killed anyone.
Jerry: A deranged sadistic man who enjoys a good fight. His implant attribute allows him to blood bend. Jeez. His blood manipulation works in a very odd way; the weaker the individual is, the more blood he is allowed to control. While he prefers to dominate those around him and hurt and kill as many people as he can, good or evil, he holds high respect for those who are willing to fight back. He may even submit his loyalty to those stronger than him (which he did to Loki), but that would only be possible if he were defeated in battle. He has dead hair, doesn’t wear a shirt, and wears gray cloth pants and goes around bare foot. He also has a golden tooth which was knocked out in a fight with Maddox (who will soon be retconned into Chloe). He wears a gold cross necklace, but he isn’t Christian himself??? Lore reason. Uhh, and he will be pulled out of TAOH after he agreed to hunt down Bob and Alan for Loki, so right about after Chapter 59. At the moment he has killed numerous people, around a handful.
Lil Jack: A wannabe gangster. He goes around in nothing but his underwear, so basically a typical beach bob. His implant attribute, although it wasn’t revealed in TAOH, is whip mastery. He can use the whip very well. He acts purely off impulse, and likes to play around with his prey before killing them. Those he perceives as weaker he will toss around like toys, and he doesn’t treat anyone with respect, not even his own goons. His weapon was a whip that was made by tying a bunch of graduation robes together. He’s very cocky and arrogant but once he meets the face of death, he becomes scared and his minds run rampant. Unlike my other villains, he will be pulled out after his death. He was killed by Samuel and Aurora, so he will have a massive fear of the two and after death he will act a lot less cocky. He will most likely shrivel up back in the corner and be pretty useless, so he can be comic relief.
I know three per person is a lot, but when you do the math that’s 18 villains brought in, so there’s 20 villains against… uh, what, like 25 good guys? I think it’s a pretty fair match up. It might take some getting used to, but the way it’s set up we’re not writing ALL of them at once.
Okay Crossover Counsel, so I think I am actually revealing a new minor villain from Journey that I’m using. I’m not sure if we’re using the miniature version of the King Titan as my villain to bring over into The Omega Timeline idea or not. So I’ll give my other villain character I have to use. So currently the name of this other villain I would like to use is Sig, and she is a Reaper Queen. Like most of her species speak in her universe, she can only speak through telepathically implanting her thoughts into others thoughts, she can also read thoughts and understands normal speech as well. She’s a brutal character with a tendency of using her tail’s grabbing abilities to hold onto her victims as she brutally beats them into the ground or uses it to hold them as she uses her jaws to tear them apart. Her name might change when we finally get to her part in the story of Journey. But I think she would be a good choice.
Also Ben, I don’t know if it’s too late for this. But maybe instead of having the Omega Titan have something to do with Tek, maybe have Corruption replace the Tek. It would look pretty cool to have a Titan with both Corruption and Rockwell Tentacles!! But I don’t know if I’m too late or not and don’t want you to go out of your way.
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Crossover counsel, Syl, chapter 20 was great! Also can I write the part where they argue about if they should follow Drain and Ember and Sheeri goes alone? I assume Ben and Sunny were already going to write for their characters, so I’m guessing I can but just in case. Maybe Ben writes either more about his characters group, or he can write the encounter at black ob, and then my chapter will just explain why Sheeri went there. Because I know he said he wanted to write that part.
Also how are we going to introduce the new villains? Do we need to tell Ben what characters we want or will they show up in their home ARKs in our chapters like our characters did? Honestly that would make more sense because 1st of all that’s what happened to everyone else and 2 Sheeri would be dead if they all came out of the black on or something, for plot maybe we don’t have everyone come out of the portal.
-Wyvernian