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I posted chapter six of TLW.
PrimalApex, unfortunately the Phoenix school is not just for royals otherwise there would only be a few students. Also Kannon and Oliver don’t have any medallions. They’re civilians…
Anyways.. cya later!!.
-SunnyFox57
P.S: I almost said “SunnyFox56”. 🤔
Sunnyfox, I read LW chapter 5!!! It was great!!! So neither Kannon nor Oliver are royals. Then how are they in Phoenix school? Aren’t royals supposed to be the only ones who have medallions? But anyway, this might also mean that Kannon and Oliver are the other two in the prophecy. Leaving only the Lightning Daughter to be revealed. I really enjoyed it!!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Ben, I read chapter 66b!!!! It was awesome!!!! The battle was awesome and the ability of the Hunter is interesting!!! I feel bad for this group as it just seems they accidentally hurt each other with their actions. I wonder who’s attacking their base? The Crimson Crusader? I really enjoyed it!!!! And I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Sunnyfox, I read chapter 3 and chapter 4!!! They were great!!! Cedric seems to have made a significant impact on his cousins and Rowan. And he definitely doesn’t seem to care what he does if it hurts others or not or just doesn’t follow the rules. Basically the typical rebel. It’s gonna be interesting to see this characters change through the story!! I’m definitely wondering what he could’ve done to make her not like him so much. And it looks like we see the next prophecy character, Elayne seems very stuck up and a bit of a diva. It’ll be interesting to see how her character develops through this. Rowan seems like an interesting character. She’s interested in the past of the world with the Arks.
Also the prophecy says for the Shadow Kingdom’s involvement with the prophecy. It says shadow dweller, not plural. Now this could mean that it’s just one of the twins or it’s a different cousin to Cedric. Who’s definitely the boy of darkness.
I really enjoyed both chapters!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Ben, yeah I picked those names for them bc they sound like they rhyme but are spelled differently. And it’s funny. And yeah they are Jay and Sylvia’s children. Cedric likes to pull pranks on them so they aren’t happy about him being at the Phoenix school with them. As for Rowan…😈.
-SunnyFox57
Ben so you know sylveevees elemental balls are made from the 5 elements fire, wind, earth, water, thunder she can also choose between the elements so she can do water and after she gets june wet thunder.. in my chapter i will introduce her elemental ball in it i might make her show it in my chapter also should the heros train and level up their powers? Idk.. learn more about eachother?
-sylveevee
From Ben
Sylveevee Queen Syl and Queen June might be on equal footing, but honestly it depends since we've only seen Queen Syl use her elemental balls once so we dont know how powerful it is. Also, Queen June's fire powers are very variable and she can create more than fireballs, so.. idk we just need to see Syls element power more often.
From Ben
Sunny Chapter 3 of TLW was really interesting! So I have a big feeling that Rowan is the girl in the first Prologue and at the end of Chapter 1. I bet she’s going to get involved with Cedric a lot of times at the Phoenix Academy. Also Leeli and Keeley are really funny names LOL. So these are probably Jay and Sylvia’s children then, right? They don’t seem to like Cedric a lot, but he’s probably going to mess with them during the school year anyway. This is going to be fun..
Wyvernian, TOT Chapter 29 was perfect! (even though you put it as 28 accidentally). Everything was set up great. The abstraction of the rest of the villains was also good. So I think pretty much all the villains have been abstracted, except for: Jerry, Lieutenant Felswand, and Prince Caldren. I think PrimalApex can just have it so that those two are already introduced in the next chapter or something, except Jerry. So the heroes are united, the villains are united, and Samuel has split off to do his own thing… awesome! I can’t wait to see this ultimate war apocalypse!
Also.. how are the residents of the Omega Timeline going to feel about this? I think it’d be interesting if there was a chapter with some of them. Maybe there are a few minor MINOR characters that were accidentally abstracted and just winged it and lived in TOT because they weren’t called to the mansion. I might write their perspective then, since I do have a plan..
If heroes can be abstracted, I think it’d be wise to go over the topic of if they should abstract more people or not
Anyway, e everything was awesome and i cant wait for the next few chapters! I also cant wait for the draft models Syl’s has come in and I’m waiting fo rmore
Chapter twenty nine of TOT was great Wyvernian!!! More villains got abstracted as well. And now most the groups are gathered at the white obelisk!! I can’t wait for the next chapter PrimalApex!!
Also I’m glad y’all enjoyed chapter two. Cedric is definitely going to be one of my favorite characters to write.
-SunnyFox57